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Lovely start...can't wait to see where this one goes..

PART 1

a=god mukti i think three of them are again drunk , pare honge cabir aur druv ke gharme

mu=seriously yeh manik aur cabir kabhi nahi sudhrenge, bechara druv usse bhi apne sath kheech leta ha

a=yaa but now what to do?? its 10 am, they are still not here

mu=chal... cabir ke ghar unko uthana parega

peon=ap dono ko principal sir ne apne cabin me bulaya ha

both exchanged a confusing look

mu=okay hum araha ha

a=now what does he want???

mu=pata nahi chal..dekhte ha

Scene shifts to a twelve storey building. On the eight floor an apartment is focused. the living room is tied up but the dining table and kitchen is looking a disaster. inside the master bedroom on the king sized bed three boys are sleeping as if the world has ended. starting from the left side of the bed the boy has covered his face. his legs are stretched towards the headboard. on the other corner the boy is sleeping holding a cushion. last but not the least the boy in the middle one, the tallest and muscular one, stretching his arms and legs on other two ones and lying on his stomach. mukti and alya enter the room and give eachother a "we knew it" look. alya stands infront of the bed crossing her arms on her chest while mukti brings a bucket full of cold water from the washroom and splashes it over three of them..

All three=what the...

they see the girls standing infront of them giving them a not so good morning look.. the boy on the left corner was cabir

c=yaar kya ha tum donoka?? manners nahi sikhe kya school me?? yeh ese neend se jagana zaruri ha kya??

mu=jis din tu time se uth jana sikh lega us din mujhme manners bhi ajayega dumbo

druv was still yawning and manik again lied down on the bed rubbing his eyes

a=guys come on, hum 9.30 se tum logoka phone try karraheha...

three of them look at eachother and start finding their cell phones.

m=phone kaha ha mera???

dr=shayed living room me hogaa..

c=ha yehi kahi hoga ...

mu=kya karrahethe tum teen raat bhar???

m=kuch nahi..woh movie dekhte dekhte kab time pass hogaya pata bhi nahi chala...

c=ha par... tum log itna hyper kyu horahethe ???

a=princi ne bulaya tha humhe, tum logoke bareme bhi puch rahehthe

c=kyu?? koi mar gaya kya???

mu= aaj freshers party ha... and he has asked us to take the responsibility of the party

m=but why us???

a=cause he wants the juniors and freshers interact with us from the beginning bla bla bla same old thing

c=freshers party???

cabir gives a smirk to manik who also smiles

dr-guys kya plan karraheho tum dono??

m=kuch nahi buddy... ab freshers party ha.. thori masti toa hum bhi karenge

Mumbai Station

the pink girl steps down from the station with a sweet smile on her face. she starts looking out for a coolie when the yellow kameez girl calls her "nandini". Nandini turns around and helps her get down with the luggage and her brother rishab

n=uffo navya dheere chala karo kitni bar kaha ha mane

na=by god nandini...humhe toa abhibi yakeen nahi horaha ha, humhe pinch karo

rishab pinches her

na=oouucchh...sapna nahi ha

n=meri drama queen, ab chale?? wasebhi train late hogaya ha. keys tumhare pass ha na???

na=ha humare pass ha. par yeh ghar ha kiska jiske chabi ams ne humhe di ha??

n=yeh ghar appa ne ams ko gift kiya tha, ams yaha kuch din ruki thi then manglore chali gayi jab appa aur amma usa chale gaye. tabse band para ha thats why ams ne bola ha ke hum yehi rahe

na=ha but.nandu... khane peene ka kharach woh bhi sochna parega

n=dont worry ek do month guzarne keliye paise ha and we will start looking for a part time job so u dont worry.

three of them come out of the station ... the place was crowded, overloaded. nandini was feeling a bit uncomfortable but navya was enjoying to the fullest.

n=rishab tu theek hana??

he gestured that he was alright and liked the place. navya called out a taxi and they started for their destination, SPACE.

n=navya hum pehle ghar jate uske baad college but tu kyu pehlehi college jarahiha??

na=uff pagal college ka administration office kya tere lie din bhar khulla hoga, nandu time likha ha ke humhe 1 baje se pehle humare sare documents collect karne ha

n=ha but rishab kya karega?? usse toa office me nahi leke jasakte hum

na=rishu ko hum bahar ek jaga me bitha ke jayenge theek ha na rishu?

navya asked rishab who gestured he will be okay. after one hour they reached SPACE. nandini was spellbound to see the dream college right infront of her eyes. it was huge, beautiful surrounded by a big basketball court, girls and boys hostel. navya was looking here and there with a big grin. everybody passing them were giving glares, smiling at them. nandini understood they were making fun of their clothes while navya was taking it easily.

n=rishab tu idhar bahar bench pe beth , hum abhi araheha theek ha???

na=chal nandu.

rishab sat on the bench outside the main gate and looking at his surroundings. at that moment muktis jeep entered. mukti alya druv cabir got down from the jeep.

c=mujhe samajh nahi araha tha ke tu jeep chala rahiha ke rocket

dr=yaa mukti... we reached here in 10 minutes where as it takes half an hour to reach

mu=thanks for the compliment druv and yes its all about mukti.

a=manik kaha ha??

c=woh apni car me araha ha.chalo hum andar chalte ha.

after four of them went inside maniks black mercedes entered. as soon as his car entered all the girls started to wooo around him while manik being manik came out of the car holding his all time famous attitude. he throwed the keys to the watchman. it was his regular thing to ask him to park the car and none of them never said no to him. he was going inside when his eyes fell on rishab who was sitting alone .. manik unknowingly went to him and wished to talk to him. rishab at first felt uneasy and didnt look at him. this made manik for feel connected to him and smiled at him

m=hiii... um manik

rishab looked at him ,manik had forwarded his hand for a handshake. he thought for a moment and then shaked hands with him. he too smiled back to him.

m=tumhara nam kya ha???

rishab thought for a moment how to make him understand that he couldnt say anything. he gestured him that he wanted a paper and pen.. manik looked here and there and asked a nearby boy to give him one.

"main bol nahi sakta..mera nam rishab ha" -- rishab

manik felt sorry for him. the guy whom he met for the first time and without any reason he was feeling to talk to him. he rubbed his back and holded his ears gesturing he was sorry to ask this type of question . rishab smiled and said its okay. manik then asked through gestures what he was doing here sitting alone? rishab tried to explain that he had come here with his sisters. manik was about to ask more but his cell rang, it was cabir.

m=hello

c=sale kaha mar gaya tu?? ab kya ek hafta lagayega college aneme? come fast

m=ha i'll be there ..bye

manik gestured rishab a bye and also said he would meet him again surely. rishab nodded happily and shaked hands with him again. as soon as manik left from there nandini and navya came outside.

n=rishab tu theek ha na???

rishab nodded in yes. navya saw the notepad where he had written his name for manik

na=yeh kya ha??? tu apna nam kise bataraha tha??

rishab pointed towards manik who was walking inside the campus. nandini looked at him with curious mind

n=rishu tune strangers se kyu bat ki??

rishab gestured that he was good and talked very nicely

n=acchese bat ki????

na=woh nandini...is college me sab kitne acche ha, rishab ko pehchanta bhi nahi phirbhi usse acchese bat ki

n=accha yeh sab choro chalo hum ghar chalte ha

na=nandini hum soch rahe ha ke k aaj fresher s party ha hum kya pehne?? jaldi jaldi me toa tailor se acche kapre bhi nahi seelwaye hum

n=navya i dont think ma iss party me aungi. rishab akela rahega itne der raatko

na=are to ussme kya ha party ha na? hum rishu ko bhi sath me leke ayenge kaunsa xam hall he ke rishab nahi asakta??

n=are you sure??

na=more than sure...

MUSIC ROOM

m=so its done, ke kal jiss fresher ki bhi bad luck hogi usse face karna parega hum seniors ka ragging

dr=but buddy... party me?? sabke samne i mean teachers principal bhi honge

c=druv kaunsa hum unhe strip dance karneko bolraheha its just fun

a=ha druv u dont worry about... and its maniks idea so it definitely has limits

m=yes ur right alya...so let the party begin

Scene Shifts

na=yaar nandu...peechle do ghantese hum saaf safai karraheha par yeh kaam toa jaise khatam hi nahi horaha ha

n=navya.. itne salose ghar band para tha toa dusting to acchese karni paregi na

na=ha par nandini...kuch socha ha ke kaise ghar chalayenge. mumbai me job kahase milega aur hum to abhi students ha

n=tum tension matlo... main kuch na kuch intezaam zarur karlungi

na=theek ha

n(to herself)=ayippa please help me, ek job mil jaye mujhpar navya aur rishab ki zimmedari ha aur uparse rishab ka treatment bhi karana ha. ayippa please help me

the night was a restless one for nandini. she was thinking about the freshers party. it was going to be a different world were she was going to step in. nandu dressed herself in a red chiffon batwing top and dark blue jeans and hair left open. navya was pretty much excited with the party. she had put on a green-white salwar kameez and hair tied in a one sided loose ponytail.

n=navya i still dont want to go to the party

na=nandu yaar ghabra mat, dekh rishu bhi kitna excited ha abhi tu party ka maza kharap mat kar chal abhi jaldi , taxi kabse akar ruki ha

S.P.A.C.E

mukti and alya were wearing knee length frocks of blue and black whereas the boys were cool in casual shirt and jackets. they were sitting on a corner and looking at the new faces and waiting for the right time

c=manik aur kitne der??

m=sare freshers agay???

suddenly they heard a sound as if someone had fallen down

a=what was that??

mu=dekhte ha chalo

cabir alya druv mukti rushed to the entrance. a boy was lying on the ground. he had been pushed. everybody gathered like a crowd. it was navya who had pushed him hard.

c=ab yeh kya hua??

a boy standing next to cabir said

boy=isne uss ladki ke sath battamizi karneki koshish ki toa usine dhakka diya, pehlehi din accha sabak sikha diya

na=ladkioko kam mat samajhna samjhe??? looser kahike, jaha ladki dekhi ki ayyashi shuru

mu=wohh... now thats something pataka...

everybody around were whispering about it.. secretly smiling .. nandini was standing behind navya . the very first day such an embaressing situation.. her eyes were dwelling in tears. manik arrived at that moment.. he was trying to look through the crowd ...his eyes fell her eyes, behind many faces, the eyes dwelled in tears, her lips shivering and her fingers playing with the corner of her top. she was trying to hide herself. his eyes wont stop looking at her, he wont stop staring at her.. he was trying to get a full glance of her.

na=chalo nandini

navya moved aside and that is when he saw her... her bangs disturbing her and she was tucking them every now and then behind her ear. no doubt she was new here, the first time in history manik malhotra gave a smirk seeing a girl the very first time.

m=different she is.

wow...awesome start...loving this a lot...nandini is so sweet ..navya is really a pattaka...
loved the way u introduced..manik..cabir and dhruv...
manik and rishab convo was sweet...
u penned this part so beautifully
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

Wow! Great update!
A little different .. :D

Fabulous nd beautiful update

Love d update...
Nice
Amazing...
Continue soon...
Byeee..
See u in next part

Awesome superb update

Sweet bond with manik and rishu he felt connected with him some how

Despite of so much crowd he manages to get a peak of her met her eyes but when she passed by he then saw her for the first time

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Amazing... cant wait for their first meet...
Rishab and manik bond from starting... thaa was nyc...
Cont soon...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

wow such a nice beginning... liked it a lot thanks for the pm