MehBeer Three-Shot: Humari Adhuri Kahani || COMPLETED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Humari Adhuri Kahani
Preface

Tomorrow he'd unveil the most intimate part of their story to the world.
That night.

He swore he'd embarrass her, crumble that insufferable ego of hers.

But once upon a time, it was that very pride of hers he'd do anything to protect.

No.
He chided his nostalgia
. It meant nothing anymore.

But then why did he feel sick at the thought of watching her cry in the quiet corner of her office? Why then, deep down, did he not want to share her most vulnerable moments with the world? Why did he feel a sense of possessiveness over those memories?
Bogged down by feelings he knew he couldn't escape from, he decided it was best he just focus on writing the song. The song he'd use to make a mockery of her.
But despite all that's been said and done. When he closed his eyes, he saw his Meher. Laughing, smiling.
Calling out his name.

Rang the, noor tha, jab kareeb tu tha.
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan.
He slammed his laptop shut. He couldn't do it.

Goddamnit. Why? WHY?
"WHY?" He lashed out into the empty house.

Even when he tries to hurt her, HE is the one who gets injured the most.

He admit defeat bringing himself down to his knees. As he flipped to the hidden picture of her in his portfolio.
He hated himself for keeping it, but he knew he couldn't do without it. Even after all she did.

Because it was his air.
She was his air.

Waqt ki ret pe, kuch mere naam sa,
likh ke chod kaya, tu kahan?

He caressed the photograph with failed contempt and aching nostalgia. Trying to figure out how he could bring himself to hate someone he once most ardently loved?
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Hamari Adhuri Kahani...
Hamari, Adhuri Kahani...

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Alright guys hopefully you like the idea!

I wanted more than just "I hate you" chants from Abeer and wanted to see more remnants of an ambushed lover in Abeer...and so I decided to write this FF.

It's like 3 am but I couldn't sleep without penning this down and making that banner (I'm so in love with it, lol). This is a three-shot FF (aka three parts).

Just so y'all aren't lost--if all goes per plan, Part 1 should be up tomorrow, Part 2 by Friday, and Part 3 (the final part) by Saturday/Sunday.

Let me know what you think!
(Also let me know if you want PMs for the updates!)

Thanks,
Kriti
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Credits:
Title: The song "Humari Adhuri Kahani" from the movie "Humari Adhuri Kahani"
The associated song for the preface comes from the same source.
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Table of Contents:
Preface, Humari Adhuri Kahani: Page 1
Part 1, Hasratein Bohot Si: Page 4
Part 2, Beyond Right and Wrong: Page 7
Part 3 (Final Part), Let it Hurt: Page 11
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow kriti dat ws superb
luvd d way u xprssd his inner turmoil
n d title is too good my fav 😳
update nxt soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one yr
Really loved it

Excited to read it
Continue soon
Wtng

Thanks for the pm
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiesanaa

wow kriti dat ws superb
luvd d way u xprssd his inner turmoil
n d title is too good my fav 😳
update nxt soon!!


Thanks!!! And yup. Could only imagine what it must be like to be in his position.
Glad you like the title, love the song myself too! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome writing Kriti! really loved it.. u can feel Abeers angst..
look forward to reading the rest :) and the banner is wonderful! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Nice one yr
Really loved it

Excited to read it
Continue soon
Wtng

Thanks for the pm
Keep smiling


Thanks!! Happy to hear you liked it, and no problem!

Haha you too! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xPriya

Awesome writing Kriti! really loved it.. u can feel Abeers angst..
look forward to reading the rest :) and the banner is wonderful! 😃


Aww Thanks!! Glad you like the banner too!

The next part will not disappoint, promish!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb
Bang on title
I loved it yaar
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Kriti,
Amazing update..Loved how deep down Abeer had very true feelings for Meher and he finally opened up about it! Very emotional. Lovely banner..Wanted to ask you something? Will it have a sad ending..I feel really hurt when there's a sad ending :( Please make it happy :)

Anjali 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's wonderfull I loved the concept yep I also wanna see lover as Abeer 😳
You wrote very well I really like it n I love the song humari adhuri kahani ❤️
Really enjoyed lot will love to read more so please do write and pm me for sure😃
Eagerly waiting for part 1 let me know when you update part 1😉
Great concept loved it superb 👏 Loved the banner 😳
Edited by LatersBaby - 10 years ago

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