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SYSHA

@cutenamu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Nice update...ye toh clear hogaya ki kp rii nahi hai...kp's story was sad...bechara kunal dil tootgaya :)...waiting for rii...cont soon thanks for pm

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Awsome update..

Plz continue soon

Sorry for late comment..

Thanks 4 pm

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Guys really really sorry for so late post but kya karu saare raaste band thhe 😭

Mobile kharab ho gaya😭

Papa ne broadband hataa diya 😭

Cybercafe kuch dinoo ke liye band ho gaya😭

Mai apni friend Srishti ke ghar se update de doongi😊

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

So here's a part

Part 8

The girl maternal grandparents have also come.They are sitting with their daughter crying and trying to bring back her from her trance but to no avail.

Rathod asks them to come from there and comforts them a little.He makes them sit on the couch and aayesha and liza are their to comfort them while Kp is standing a little far ready with a pen and diary. This surprises shree, rathod,chotu and arjun (all except sam aayesh liza kp were searching for clues)(The girl's mother is still in shock and sitting a little far away on chair till medics come)

Rathod:Sir hame pata hai ki aap bohot dukh mein hai lekin aapki poti ke saath kya hua iska hame pata lagaana hai

GP:Theek hai

Rathod:Aapki beti ke parivaar ke saath aapke relations kaise thhe.

GP:Sir acche thhe

Sam:Koi anban.Koi dushmani

GP:Nahi.(Started sobbing)pata nahi ab hamaari beti kaise ye sab sahegi Kuch mahino pahele apni choti si beti ko kho diya ab badi beti bhi.Pata nahi ab ye sadmaa seh payegi ya nahi

Arjun interrupted:Nahi seh payegi.(All look towards him)Ye dard nahi seh paayegi

KP:Shaayad nahi seh paayegi lekin ye kehne se uski sehene ki himmat mat toriye.

And she went to another room

All were seeing her (even arjun)like she is someone strange.(Aare uusne Arjun ko backanswer kar diya.Kisine Arjun ko hi samjha diya.)😉

Rathod:Choti si beti? Wo kaise mari?

GP:Teen mahino pahele uuski 7 mahino ki beti tub mein doob ke mar gayi.Meri beti ko bhulne ki bimaari hai. Wo paani chala ke bhool gayi aur...(crying)

Rathod sambhaaliyi apne aap ko.

Meanwhile

Kunal followed KP into the room. She was looking around the room.When she was coming backward a toy came under her foot and she slipped.She closed her eyes and prepared herself for the fall but it never came. She was held by Kunal.They had an eyelock but they were brought back soon.KP was blushing hard while Kunal was grinning.She turned and tried searching but her heartbeat was erratic

KP:(Mv)What is happening?Why my heart beat is so erratic?Must be due to fear of falling right.

Shree came in .And went near her bringing back her from her thinking.

Shree:Yaar tuune ye kya kiya.Tuune SYS ko suuna diya😲

KP:To kya. Uus ACP se mai darti nahi. Aur wo aaise kisiko kaise suuna sakte hai.Uus aurat ne apne do do bacche khoye hai how can he say that

Shree:Tujhe pata nahi lekin uunhone apni patni ka murder apne aankhon ke saamne dekha hai to aaisa hona jayas hai.

KP just remained silent. But muttered a little:Lekin uunhe ye sab nahi kehna chahiye tha.

They sealed the room and the body was sent for autopsy

All again went to the office.As the time had finished so they were going home.

Sam took aayesha saakshi liza in his suv and chotu was dropping shree and arjun already left when kp was going...

Kunal:KP tum chaho to mere saath chal sakti ho mai tumhe drop kar doonga.

Saakshi:Haa tu kunal ke saath chali ja ya hamaare saath bhi aa sakti hai.

KP:Thank you. But no need sir. Mera ghar yeha se zyada duri par nahi hai aur waise bhi mujhe thoda sa kaam hai paas mein.

Kunal:To mai wahi tak chod deta hoo.

KP:Mai chali javoongi sir.

Rathod:Pakka

KP:Yes sir.

All:Bye/Goodnight/Take care.

KP:Bye

All left

Bas itna ab likhne ka man nahi kar raha.And really sorry for short one.

Next-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/124729715

Edited by BubliBag - 10 years ago

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wordsofwisdom

@wordsofwisdom

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

awesome update yrr

can understand the net prob

but happy that now u r going to update from ur frnd's house

update the nxt prt soon

and thanks for pm

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angelinanam

@angelinanam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

heyy

did u 4got to update it...

plzz yaar jaldi update dona...

plz plz plz

n plzz riya entry bhi jaldi karwao...

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Please update soon
It has been a month

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Kuki

@KaViannn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

read all the parts in one go!! this is awesome!! you wrote it beautifully. waiting eagerly for Riya's entry.
I'll be sending you a Buddy request. please pm me when you update. pretty please.

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Hey guys atlast mera internet lag gaya so here's the next part

Part 9

Arjun pov-"KP itni tumhaari tarah kyoon hai riya aur fir bhi tum nahi ho. Kash tum yaha hoti toh kitna accha hota.Arjun stop it . what are you thinking?She is dead lekin pata nahi kyoon lagta hai iss dil ko ki tum kahi zinda ho jabki tum meri aankhon ke saamne chali gayi.

Next day,ETF office,

Rathod:forensic se kya mila liza.

liza:sir chuhe marne waali dawa mili hai nisha ki body se aur dood ke glass mein bhi wahi tha

Arjun:Shree Shyam ke call records aur bank accounts check kiye.

Shree:Yes sir.(gave it to arjun)lekin sir kuch odd nahi hai.

Arjun:hmmm

Chotu:Hamne sources se bhi pata kiya. Iski company mein koi golmal toh nahi dikh raha.

Aaayesha:Sir.Mere sources se pata chala hai ki uske ek business rival hai Mr. Dixit.

UUsne ek baar ise barbaad karne ki dhamki bhi di thi

Kunal:Kahi dixit ne hi ye sab kuch kiya ho Shyam ko barbaad ke liye

Arjun:Lekin wo fir nisha ko kyu maarega. Agar uuse maarna hota toh wo shyam ko maarta nisha ko nahi

Saakshi: sameer mujhe lagata hai ki sonia ne galti se apni bimaari ki wajah se doodh mein zeher mila diya jabki uuse wo chuha marne ke liye chahiye ho and she forgot and she gave it to nisha.

liza:it's possible

All thinking as they have reached an end to all saboots

KP(looking at her phone):Liza do you know anything about this chemical- Terycene deblid pro manta cycin. Mujhe ye naam ek burnt paper par mila tha. It was in ashes so utha nahi payi lekin i have pic.

(She showed it to rathod) I found it outside the house.

Liza:Kya naam liya

Rathod gave her the phone.

Liza:Oh my god ye toh bohot khatarnaak medicine hai. Ye deeply nervous system ko effect karti hai aur partial amnesia is common.Sir ye bohot zyada mehengi aati hai aur zyaada dene par maut ho sakti hai. Ye davai blood mein aaram se mix ho jati hai aur iska detection bohot difficult hai.

Kunal:yani ye davai sonia ko di gayi taki uuse bhoolne ki bimaari hojaye.Shayad dixit ye sab karwa raha ho dheere dheere shyam ke parrivaar ko khatam karne ke liye.

Arjun:Ye dixit nahi karwa raha. Iss medicine ka high amount dangerous hai lekin small parts dene se uska asar bhi hoga aur maut bhi nahi hogi.Ye kisi ander waale ka kaam jo sonia kab kya karti hai sab pata ho.

KP:Shyam ne kiya hai ye sab.According to the statistics 87% of all girl child killings are done due to gender discrimination .Sir agar uuse bacchi ki maut se kuch effect hota toh wo sonia ko sambhalte naaki apne parents ke saath baithkar magarmach ke aansoon bahata.

Shree:Magar mach ke aansoon?Tumhe kaise pata.

KP:Ek baar aise aansoon dekhkar kisiko marne se bachaya tha jiski kimat mujhe kisiki jaan gawah ke chukaani padi thi.(She kept silent for a few seconds) Ufff i need to keep away from flashbacks. Continue karte hai.

Old team again thought of Riya due to the statistics quote.No one in the team used statistics after Riya.

After some more investigation they did found out that Shyam has smuggled in the medicine and his parents were involved.They wanted that Sonia and her two daughters should die so that Shyam can marry someone who will give him a boy.

After a lafa,

Shyam:Haa maine hi maara unn dono bhojo ko.

KP(gave a slap):Kaise baap ho tum apne hi khoon ko apne hato se maar dala.Mere dad ne mujhe bachaane ke liye khud mar gaye aur tum... chii

(To his mother )Aur aap . Agar ye sab aapke saath hota toh kya karti.Sonia ne aapko maa maana tha aur aapne.Har beti apni maa se pyaar karti hai.Mai bhi karti hoo jabki maine unhe kabhi jaana nahi. Kaise kar sakti hai aap.

And she moved away to calm herself. Everyone could see her hands were twiching to strangle them.They were taken away.

New members were surprised by her outburst.

Old team was startled to see her outburst.Last ki lines bhi Riya ke outburst se match kar rahi thi. Itna similar yet different.Kaise?.Kya riya waapas aa gayi.?Nahi wo toh margayi thi.Their urge to see the face behind the mask increased.

Bas itna hi

Yaar agar story pasand nahi toh bol do mai story band kar doongi kisiko forcibly padhne ki zaroorat nahi.

Lekin koi padhe toh comment karna like dekar chodna mat

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=32

Edited by BubliBag - 10 years ago