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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar app update to toh kro kitne din bad update kiya and story Gaye badhao ad where s riya I like u story but late update and it s nt going forward 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh evry1 missing her specially arjun..come back riya..
Nice update 👏 .. thanks for PM 😊 .. sorry for late.. waiting for next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bubliii...
It's an awesome story... just read the all parts in a go...
Loved it babes...
Why do I feel that she is Rii's sister or something like that...
But the updates are very short...
Next time bada wala update or else I won't update devil's triangle... hehehe...
Thanks for the pm...
N remember my dhamki...
Ab...
Samjhi ya samjhau...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Loved it
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting to read more
Nd thanks for the pm ishitha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read both parts.Wow dear...
It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, flawless and mind blowing update..
Just loved it...
Beautiful...
Do continue soon...
and thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome 👏
Loved it
Conti soon
Thanks for the pms
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry i m late...update was awesome...kp and kunal ke bich kuch chalraha hai...haila arjun ko ulta jawab hmm dum hai ladki mein...why is kp soo alike riya...are they related...cont soon thankss for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys . Sorry for late update. Here's the next part.
Part 10
Everyone returned back to office.
Rathod:Complete the paperwork of all pending cases.KP complete this case file.
KP:Sorry sir. Lekin mujhe paperwork karna nahi aata aur naa hi maine kabhi kiya hai.
Arjun(sarcastically):No problem. Start today.
KP:Sure sir. Agar aapko apni table par poori red underlined file ya even better jali huyi file chahiye toh sure. Jab maine apni ministry ki important files jaladi jab unhone mujhe waisa kaam karne ko diya toh sir ye toh chotese case ki file hai. I wont have any problem with burning it.(giving naughty grin)
Rathod:KP tumhe apne senior se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai aur yaha sab subordinates paperwork karte hai.
KP:Sir aapse kisne keh diya ki mai aapki "subordinate" hu. Mai external help hu aur you can say part work job.So i will solve cases with you ya chota mota kaam kardoongi lekin paperwork mere hisse mein nahi padhta.Any probs then i have a solution.
She called someone on phone.
KP:Hello Cohello(comm.)
Comm.:Haa KP
KP:Cohelo aap meri thodi taarif karne ke liye aapke dono best officers ko office bula lijiye warna mujhe gussa aaya toh joh aapke office mein jo huya thaaa wo aap apne best officers ke saath hote huye nahin dekhna chahege.
She cut the call and left the room.At the same time Rathod's phone rang
Rathod:Hello sir.Jai hind...Yes sir...OK sir...Jai hind
Chalo rawte comm. sir ne bulaya hai abhi isi wakt.
They went.
Shree:Yaar iss KP ne toh dono shero se panga le liya
Chotu:Aur comm. sir ko surname se bulaya.
Aayesha:Yaar sir ko threaten bhi kar rahi thi. Aisa kya kardiya unke office mein?
Saakshi:Haa yaar aur iise paperwork bhi nahi karna padega, lucky yaar.
Liza:Issne toh sabko hairaan kar diya.
All:Hmmm
But Kunal mv:Yaar first sight love hona hi tha toh wo bhi ek sherni se. Just my raizada luck.
At comm. office
Rathod:Jai hind sir. Aapne kaisi ladki team mein bhej di. Na kisi se baat karne ki tameez na hi apna kaam kar rahi hai. Aapne uski speciality bhi nahi batayi jis buniyaad par wo join huyi hai.Itni battameez officer maine aaj tak nahi dekhi. Aur aapke office mein kya hua ki usne aise dhamkaya.
(Arjun is just standing.)
Both heard a giggle from behind . They turned there KP was sitting with some popcorn.
KP:Sorry continue. Aapko baccho ki tarah complain karte dekh hasi aagayi
Rathod sent her an angry glare and turned
Rathod:Sir?
Comm.:Sorry rathod iss situation mein mai khood helpless hu. Issne mujhe pichle 6-7 mahino se pareshaan kar rakha hai. Mai ise chote missions deta rehata hu taaki ye mera picha chod de lekin ab maine iss jhamele mein puri tarah fas gaya hu issliye issko ETF join karaya taaki ye yaha na bhatke.Aur mere office mein jo hua wo tum bahar attendent se puchlo. (More giggles in the background)
Rathod:Lekin..
Comm.:I understand rathod but ye sabse acche officers mein ek hai. ETF can use her. Maanta hu ki ye young hai batameez hai pagal hai shaitaan hai aur baki sab cheeze jo tum soch rahe ho lekin iise kamzor samajhne ki bhool mat karna. Bohot experience hai iske paas. Aisa experience jo tum zindagi mein bhi nahi soch sakte ho. And please ise jo kaam nahi karna mat karne ko bolna.
Both after some time noded. As soon as they did they heard the door close.
Comm.:And iske aaspas dhyan rakhna. Kuch dinon baad iski presence ki wajah se kayi raaz khulege jo tum dono ki zindagi se judi huyi hai. Now leave.
Arjun: Kaise raaz.
Comm.: Aise raaz jo dard aur khushi dono dege lekin mai tum dono ko iske baare mein nahi bata sakta. Aur abhi jo baate huyi uske baare mein KP ko mat bataana. Leave.

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Edited by BubliBag - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice1...
KP ki problem kya h.
senior se dhang se baat krni bhi nhi aati.
arjun jb class lega tb samjh aa jayega.
continue soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dono cabin se bahar aate hai. KP nazar mein nahi hai. Wo log bahar attendent se puchte hai ki kya hua tha office mein.
Atten.:Sir... Us di... Comm. sir madam se thoda irritate ho gaye aur.. security ko bula diya. Mam ko gussa aaya aur jab unhone .. unko chuune ki himmat ki toh...
Arjun:Toh kya?
Atten.:Toh unhone unn guards ke haath par fracture kar diye aur.. sir ke room ko bhi tehes mehes kar diya
Both:What!
Atten.:Yes sir
Both Mv:What the hell
Rathod:Chalte hai yaha se Rawte.
Arjun:Hmm
Dono soch rahe hai:Kaise raaz. Aur ham dono se jude. Ye ladki ek paheli ban chuki hai.
They reach back to office. Both directly went to respective cabins with thinking expressions.
KP enters the conference room
KP:Yaar maza aagaya aaj.
All turned towards her.
Kunal:Kaisa maza.
KP:Nothing sir. Leave it
Shree:KP tu cheez kya hai?
KP:Mai cheez badi mast hu.(smirk)
Chotu:Iska kehne matlab ye hai ki tuune dono khadooson se panga le liya.
KP:Yaar mai apni marzi ki maalik hu. Agar koi bhi mujhe force karta hai toh uska haal accha nahi hota.And sorry meri dabang lady tere damn it se kuch zyaada battameezi kar di.
Aayesha:Tu bhi
KP:Accha sorry. Really yaar un dono khadooso se sorry bolne ka man hai lekin itna hone ke baad bolna mere naal na hoga
Liza:Kya tujhe ab paperwork nahi karna padega(little childishly)
KP:Nahi baccha nahi karna padega. Aur agar kiya bhi toh tum logon ko meri file theek karne mein double time lagaana padega.
Pata hai mai toh file bhi apni behen se banwaati thi.
Liza was pouting being called a child,others laughing
Shree Mv:Kitna cute pout hai.Cute! Lizards cute nahi hoti
Kunal:Lekin KP tuune comm. sir ke office mein kya kiya tha ki tu unhe dhamka rahi thi.
KP:Kunal sir aap wo sab chodiye.Mai soch rahi thi ki tum dono iise dabang lady kyoon kehte ho.
Choree told the arjun and aayesha incident.
Both KP and Kunal were laughing.
KP:Yaar chalna chota sa duel karte hai martial arts mein dekhte hai kon jeetta hai. Ab ham dono ko hi martial arts aate hai aur waise bhi damn it ki future lover ko kitna aata hai ham bhi dekhte hai.
(She and shree hi-fived smirking, others were laughing, and aayesha was blushing)
Aayesha(a little angry/embarrassed tone):Chal ho jaye. Aaj training room 5:30. Permission tu mangegi.
KP:Aare yaar un khadooson se permission, na baba na. I know a better person.
(She turned towards Kunal)Please sir. Ham dono ko 5 baje ke baad jaane dijiye. Ye log toh live video dekh lege.Please.(puppy dog eyes)
Kunal:Theek hai.
All:Yes
Kunal Mv:Haye kitni cute lag rahi hai uski aankhein.Mana kaise karta.

Choree Mv:Kaash ri yaha hoti. Uski martial arts dekhke sab hairaan ho jaate.
Flashback
Shree:Yaar bataana itna bhayankar martial arts kahase sikha.
Riya:Arre yaar sikh liya ab poora biodata likh kar lega.
Chotu:Nahi yaar lekin ye toh bata ki itni mehnat se itna perfection se tuune kisse sikha aur kyoon? Tune kaha tha ki tuune martial arts academy join karne se pahele sikha tha. Kya koyi tujhe tang karta tha ya tere area mein khatara rehata tha.
She froze at his last sentence for sometime. But returned back soon.
Riya: Yaar plz mujhe iss baat ko yaad nahi karna. Please mujhe mat force karo.
Choree realized it was a personal matter so did not pry.
Shree:Yaar pata hai kuch dino mein ek martial arts competition hone waala hai. Tujhe part lena chahiye.
Chotu:Haa yaar lele tu pakka jeetengi.
Riya:Yaar mujhe unn competitors ke haath paer nahi todne. (low tone)Waise bhi Rowdy Rathod aur Akdu Sadu Rakshas mujhe leave nahi denge.
Trio burst into laughter
Chotu:Agar koi hai toh batadena uuse ham zinda gaar denge
Shree:Haa ri
Riya just gave a dimple smile
Flashback over

(Both talking to each other in whispers)
Shree:Kash ri inki fight ko dekhne ke liye yaha hoti aur apne martial arts ka taste de deti.
Chotu:Agar mujhe pata chala ki koi uuse sachmein tang kar raha tha toh...
Both:usse ham zinda gaar dege
(Last part came a little loud)
Saakshi:Kisko gaar doge
Both looked towards each other .
Both:Nothing ...and went out of there to escape their questions.
Kunal:Inhe kya hua
All shrugged.
Aayesha:Hame nahi pata. Ye dono bohot baar aaisa karte hai, Baaton baaton mein kisi baat par khojaana, apne aap mein bar- baraana,ekdum chup ho jaana,laptop par kuch dekhna lekin jab bhi koi dekhne aaye toh na dikhana.
Liza:Mujhe lagta hai ki ye kuch chupaa rahe hai. Kuch personal.(mere specky sen ko kya hua,kisi ladki ka chakkar toh nahi,what mera,Anyways uski gf toh sirf uski lappy hai.)
Kunal and saakshi were nodding.
KP:Jo kuch chupa rahe hai chupe rehene do. Agar chupaake ye dono khush hai toh hum log kaun hai uus khushi ko lene waale.(she was looking towards the way they left.Her suspicions were correst she thought)
Saakshi:Shayad tum theek keh rahi ho.
KP:Oh lord kitni der baad tuune koi dhang ki baat ki hai. Mujhe pata nahi ki teri chapar chapar sun kar abhi tak koi pagal khaane pahoch kyoon nahi gaya.
All chuckled while saakshi glared her embarassingly.(Mv.Thank god abhi chotu yaha nahi tha. Iski toh)

Ab mere unit tests hai so ab sirf padhai

Next part


Edited by BubliBag - 9 years ago

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