The True Spirit Of Love !OS

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The True Spirit of Love !

Poets have sung many songs about the beauty of this young girl. When she smiles, the mornings will be pleasant. The noon will be soothing. The evening will be cool and calm. The night will be serene . Birds will sing, The sky and the wind are so refreshing. Flowers bloom. The beauty of her expressive eyes, the glow in her smiles , makes us forget our surroundings . The music in her voice thrills our ears. With her bewitching smile Mohini entered in to that house , and everyone mesmerized with her presence there .

Night is so serene , but there is a hidden agenda in that silence too !

Simar liked her in the first instance itself . Amar is entranced after meeting Mohini !

Mohini entered there with a mission . She has taken the help of the street corner's Pan vendor Ramu to create terror in the minds of BW pariwar's mind. She explained him the entire story . After seeing Thakurayin's men searching for her , she realized that she should be very careful from now onwards !

Next morning they paid the advance and shifted officially there in to that house in front of the Bw house . The Bw family invited them for lunch .

Mother was sitting there with a hesitant look , it was very uneasy for her to sit there with them . But Mohini is trying to interact with all the members of the family . She created the feeling among them that , they are all very near to her ,she made everyone at ease . the chirpy Roli liked Mohini , and started interacting with her more .---

She sat on the sofa , in that night time , the moon light is spreading it's light on the two houses . From the Bw house , light is still on in the room of Amar , means he is still awake .

Mohini is planning her further strategy , she reached the venue , still to decide what to do !

Closed her eyes , but the anger in her heart is burning her , want to delete the peace and happiness of the BW household . But still she is in two minds ! If he did a blunder , crushed my future so cruelly , yes ... Punishing him for his cruel deed is correct ,but , is it correct to do the same mistake ?---handing over them the sadness and sorrow ? . Both sides valid points are there , there is a cause for this punishment , but how far it is correct by committing the same crime , she had a guilty feeling ,her conscience is questioning her desires and decisions ! Let us wait and watch !

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Thakurayan's men are still searching in the same area . But Amar is persistently asking her to accompany him to buy a gift for his friend's sister's marriage !

She too want to know more about the family and the relationships they are safeguarding since long time .She decided to took this outing as an opportunity to know more , to decide about her further move .

Moved out with him , stopped the car near a restaurant to have some coffee .

Unfortunately the searching squad also reached there to have some refreshments , before shifting to another area .

"Amarji , let us finish our work fast and reach home as early as possible "

"Why Mohini , I want to have a chat with you about your likes , tastes and about your friends . "

She realized that he is under her spell , a lover boy !

Not now , I will talk to you tonight on our terrace Amarji .

He was so thrilled that , in that elation forgot to pay the bill , the Waiter ran behind him to remind .

This uproar attracted the attention of the search squad , and they came running towards Mohini .

In a hurry she went inside the kitchen , there the Madrasi chef Balu , who lost his daughter recently in a similar untoward incident , still in that sorrow and angercame to her rescue . With a big ladle he beat them black and blue , and chased them unto the end of the street .

Came straight to Mohini and said , whenever you want to have refreshments come to this restaurant , from now on ,this is your father's coffee shop Beti !

With confused looks Amar watched all this and realized that there is a threat for her life .

At that moment he decided to stand by her in this hard time , to support , to save her from all sorts of dangers . Finished their outing in a hurry and came back to home .

She has a shock waiting there at the house !

The doors are wide open and a black cat spilled all the milk in the kitchen and stand there with a cruel look .

" Where is Mom , why this cat is here at this hour ? Mom ... " --the cat is still stand there , she went inside the bedroom to look for her .

But behind her , she asked " what happened Mohini ?

See Maa , that shop keeper sent this one here , instead of sending it to BW house ! "

With a smile she asked "Did you tell him clearly to send that black cat to their house or not ?"

"Yes , I told him clearly , to create a panic there , seems he left it here , absentminded fellow .Call the servant Maa and asked her to clean it " She went in to her room .

But failed to see the wicked smile followed her from behind .

She is sitting there and planning further strategy , Amar came there to have a chat with her , saw her mother came to his house to have a word with Mataji .

Mohini ! Please tell me , why they are chasing you ? Why you shifted to this place all of a sudden ?

She take a deep breath and started narrating in that evening time ----

We belong to a wealthy family from Jodhpur . I am the only daughter to my parents . I finished my studies , and my parents wanted to settle me . We have some farm lands in near by village , where a Thakuraayan is trying to grab our lands , because all our lands are highly fertile and adjacent to her property .When my father refused , she put another proposal , she wanted to make me her daughter-in- law , so that they can grab our property in a right royal way ! My parents refused to that proposal and she turned red with rage .

On that fateful day , they are traveling to meet a boy for me , but met with an accident .

Later , I learnt that it was not an accident , deliberately done by Thakuraayan to end my family , so that, she would terrorize me to marry her son . I hate that boy ,he is a habitual drunkard and a womanizer .

That day , while sitting on the culvert near the accident scene , I found a valet , contains the driver's license and other details of the driver who was driving the heavy vehicle , which hit my parents Car .

I collected it and hide it from the police , so that I can meet him and ask him why he did this to my parents who never did any harm to any one . Asked the people of the village Kejarli about him .

They said , that the driver is from Jodhpur , a real estate agent , who has links with underworld and worked for Thakuraayan since long .

"Wait ,wait Mohini , what you said ? Khejarli ? Surprising , 15days back Prem Bhaiya met with an accident in the same place , that day , his car skid from the road and fall in to a trench . So he caught another vehicle to reach back to city . Do you know , that day Prem Bhayya wanted to buy some lands near that village , and that real estate agent's name was Premanand . Later he died in mysterious circumstances , and Bhayya dropped that idea , of buying lands there .

Mohini is hearing his words with rapt attention . To clear her doubt , she asked

" Did Prem met Thakuraayan of that Khejarli , for buyng lands frequently ? "

No Mohini ! He never went that side not before not later except that time , in a way dropped the idea of buying lands , instead started buying Flats and independent houses in the city itself , so that managing will be easy .

She is not paying attention to his words , but seeing deeply in to his eyes , her thoughts are some where .

So it is not Prem who is a successful business man of BW family . Thank God , I didn't do any harm to this lovable family .

But who is that Premanad who worked for Thakuraayan , killed my parents ? Anyway , he is no more to face the punishment . A philosophical smile on her face .

Amar asked her , if your parents died in that accident ,then who is that lady whom you are calling Maa ?

She was startled for his question , and hesitantly said , actually , she is my Badi Maasi , me, left as a lonely girl , she came to help me , so introduced her as my mother .

I am so sorry Mohini , you faced so many problems and sorrow in your life ..

I want to be with you , to live with you to love you , I love you Mohini !

She is a wee bit confused and unable to talk , looked at him with blank glares .

"At present , I am unable to decide Amar , please give me some time ..."

Think about it and tell me Mohini , I will wait for your positive reply "

He went away . She is sitting there stirred with emotions , trying to connect the dots .-----------------------

To be continued ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2-- The True Spirit Of Love !




She realized that Prem has nothing to do with that accident . Thank God , did not do any harm to him ! she thought !

"Mohini Beti ,"---Pan shop owner Ramu Kaaka stand there .

She looked at him and there is a question in her eyes , he realized and said " No one watched me , I came here to inform you that my black cat is not well since 2 days , unable to move , so my wife kept it in the house to save it from street dogs . sorry Beti "

She was stunned , then from where this black cat appeared and creating havoc in both houses ?

A fear , chill in her spine ! Is there any supernatural element roaming here ?

After dinner , Roli came there to invite them for next day's function !

" Mohini ,why can't you come now to select a good design of Mehandi for Simar Didi ? Please come , let us spend some time there " - a chirpy Roli's words lead her to the BW home .When they went to Simar's room , she was sitting there , stirred with emotions , with tears in her eyes , she was watching her Marriage album , and re- living those moments .

Saw Mohini with Roli , she put a hesitant smile on her face wiped the tears , and invited her to see her marriage Album , in which Roli and Simar are so adorable . Mohini sat there on the edge of the cot and started looking in to the Album . Meanwhile feeling guilty too , --

Thank God , I did nothing wrong , how happy she is for reuniting with her husband !

Suddenly she came out of her thoughts and shouted , wait ...wait , Didi , turn back that page , how it is with you ?

Excitement and surprise in her voice !

"Oh , this one , see these two ladies , they resemble each other ! She is my mother and , the yellow Sari clad lady is my Maasi .

"Your Maasi "? What , it is unbelievable !"with a surprise Mohini questioned !

Yes , actually we don't know we have a Maasi until then , my Nana never allowed her to come to our houses , or to any functions ! She married a man whom her father disapproved , so curtailed all relations , even my parents are also so traditional , but that day , she came to our town , to attend to someone else's marriage , and my mother and she met in the temple , and she invited her for a brief visit to give blessings to me . After a long time she met all her relatives and everyone felt very happy except my Nana . She went away on the same evening . Do you know Mohini ? She was very soft spoken , and very beautiful too ! "---an admiration in Simar's eyes .

Means ,your mother is my Badi Maasi ? My God ...then , who is that lady at my home , who said that she is my Badi Maasi ?why she said all lies ?

A wail from her voice , looking like a plaintive cry , she started running towards her house !

With a surprise ,Simar and others followed her .

There , in the bedroom , she is talking with herself , the black cat is there in her lap , Mohini was so scared to look in to her eyes , those eyes are spewing fire , venom towards mankind !

Who are you ? With fierce force Mohini questioned her ,

A wild loud laughter, followed by a woeful groan .---

"Why ,? Hah , you are asking me why ? Then listen , my daughter loved that Prem ,wanted to be in the place of this Simar , wanted to marry him , but this Simar again entered in to his life and crushed all the dreams of my girl ! I want to kill this cheater , she is the cause of my daughter's death , consequently I too lost interest to live anymore , so committed suicide !

Hhaaa ...Hhaa haaa ... I will never allow you to live happily with him !Will kill you all ! I hate your family .

A real witch is standing there, with evil intention to kill Simar ! Mataji started chanting Hanuman chalisa !

Roli and Mohini concentrated their eyes on the Chudail and moved towards her to overpower her .

Divine intervention in the form of SnehaPriya entered there , questioning , what is happening at this hour of midnight ?

In that street ,every one believe that she is a pure soul , who has divine blessings , who can give solace to many ailing souls , possess some Spiritual powers . She achieved it from regular Yoga and meditation !

Her presence made the witch vanish in to thin air . Only a black sari and red blouse moving in that night wind .

Mohini was so scared that she was shivering like a chic . Simar and Roli hugged her , and said -

"You are not an orphan Mohini , you are our cousin sister !'

Amar with an excited voice , Bhabhi , please let us shift her in to our house , for tonight she will stay in my room , I will sleep in Prem Bhayya's room for today !

Maataji with a smile declared --, "OK , for these 4 days I allow her to be there in Amar's room , but later , after their marriage Amar too will be there with her in that room if she allows him in !

Yaayee... one more marriage in our house , kids shouted with exhilaration !

Jubilation everywhere ! Two marriages at home Bahu , but who will do the Kanyadaan ?

Maataji asked , with a smile Snehapriya said My son and Bahu will do the honor Maataji . she said .

Your presence itself give serenity to the rituals Maa'm .

Mohini came running towards her and first touched her feet and then hugged her with her elated smile . Happiness is slipping from her eyes .

Amar invited Mohini to stay there in his room , when she accompanied him to upstairs , Simar stopped Roli , from going with them . Siddhant , picked up her hand and asked her to come to his room to select a good costume for tomorrow !

Prem signaled Simar to sit with him to have some beautiful moments on the terrace .

In the room Mohini stand there in shock , with in hours her life has been changed , all the happiness in the world was on her way now ! Quite unbelievable ,the turn of events made her suddenly the happiest bride in the world !

Immersed in her thoughts , realized herself in the arms of Amar .

From the window the moonlight is trying to cover them with enchanting dreams . Life is calling them , love is blooming in their hearts , which is waiting to engulf them , they are overwhelmingly inundated by their first outbursts of love , engrossed in lovely expressions ! By Madhuri !



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Avi and Madhu, this is so beautifully, great OS ⭐️
You are a great team 👍🏼
Well done 👏 👏 thanks girls ❤️
nn027 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are a great team, girls. 👏
Sneha.Love thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wah...wah...wah...Beautiful friendship resulted in beautiful duet of amazing writers, who created this wonderful OS⭐️ . Love it so much...❤️ 👏👏
Thank you for including me in a form of divine intervention 😃

Love your naration Avi ❤️, beautiful description of Prats/Mohini...The beauty of her expressive eyes, the glow in her smiles , makes us forget our surroundings . The music in her voice thrills our ears.That is so true. Love the way you weaved the story and fill it with suspense...Love the way how Madhuri ❤️ continued it so beautifully, you truly are a great team. 👏👏👏⭐️ Great plot Madi, love all that tension and alleviation that follows; excitement and the romance in the happy ending. 😊

Love the Title: The True Spirit of Love! Beautiful.⭐️
Waiting for many more OSs to follow, from both of you... maybe a SS, as well 😉😃.
Thank you for the beautiful story. 🤗 🤗
Viswasruti thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Vildana 😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Vildana .😊
Viswasruti thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kety76







Avi and Madhu, this is so beautifully, great OS ⭐️
You are a great team 👍🏼
Well done 👏 👏 thanks girls ❤️

It is great that you like our concept . Thank you Kety .
Thanks for the picture of Mohini&Simar in the second part of our OS Kety !
Viswasruti thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nn027




You are a great team, girls. 👏

I am eternally grateful to Avyakta for editing , and correcting the lines . In a way , concept is hers and writing is mine , then she edited it ! Thank you Nado .
Viswasruti thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VerboseG

Nice team work, girls!

Thank you Gina .😊

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