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OS - hum__mm - Tum__mm

i write this os specially for hum tum anniversery...

wo bhi first time

nhi toh OS meri baski baat nhi hai

this is specially for lakshu di aur priya di


in dono ne hi mujhe baar- baar kaha

write it P2😉


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Dam

First day of your job, and you absolutely reach late

Stupid bus

Usse bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha

.

Relax geet

Bs 5 minute more

Tu puch jaayengi

.

In this between, one car passed out near her, and dirty water fall

on her dress...

.

Donkey

Monkey

Just stop your car

Nowww

She picks the stone and threw behind the car...

.

Car stopped, she run towards car...

.

Came out

.

Driver gives some money to her and said sorry...

Go to hell with your sorry

Ye apne sahib ko dedo unke paise

And you

Tumhe toh mein

Driver : madam

Maine jaan buzkar thode kiya hai

Wo hole tha waha

.

Tumhari wajh se mein aur late ho gyi

.

He knock on glass and said "miss ydi aap mere driver se yuhi ladti

rhi

Toh aur late hi hongi"

.

(Think) :Geet ye kh toh shi hi raha hai

.

You Driver

Is baar chod rhi hu

Next time asa kuch kiya na

Toh mujhse koi bura nhi honga

.

*********

After going her, he thinks about her, what a crazy girl her.

Bolna shuru krti hai

To chup hi nhi hoti

.

I missed to see her face

.

I don't know why, my heart stop me shout on her ...she waste my

time, but I said nothing ...maan leave this topic...

Waise bhi we never going meet again...

*********

Lift

Stoppp

.

.

She runs, and enters in lift...

Thank you

She notices his gaze own...

.

Mr. Why you staring me

Isse phle kbhi khubsurat ladki nhi dekhi

.

Are you out of mind Miss

.

What you say

Am out of mind

.

Ek help kya krdi choti si

Tum toh shuru hi ho gye

.

Miss

Mind your tongue

Am not interested talking with you

.

Ha

Ha

Mein toh meri jaari hu

Tum mujhse baat kro

.

Chup

Bilkul chup

Are you same crazy girl na

Jo abhi thode der phle KC ke bahar tamasha kr rhi thi

.

Tumne geet handa ko crazy girl kaha

How dare you

.

He stops the lift in mid and came close to her...

Now what happen Crazy girl

Bolti bnd ho gyi

.

Geet : durr raho mujhse

Nhi toh mein

.

Nhi toh kya Miss

Chilana hai

Chilayo

No one came here hear your voice...

Ye private lift hai

Without my permission

Here no one entered

Geet : fir tumne mujhe kyun aane diya

.

Good question

.

By mistake

.

Geet : please move aside

.

Dekho

Mein apne boss se tumahri complain kr dungi

Wo bhut hi danger admi hai

.

You know him

Kbhi milli bhi ho tum boss se

Tumahre expression kh rhe hai

Nhi milli

Aur itna sb jaan gyi

.

Geet : toh

Mein unki secretary hu

Toh mujhe toh jaanana hi padenga

.

He take step back and fold his hand on chest...

So disaster Queen

New Secretary hai

.

Geet : you

.

Sshhh

Listen me carefully

15 minutes mein conference me meeting hai

Came fast ...

.

He left...

She not realizes when he starts the lift...

.

She is so angry on him, how dare he, he order her...

.

Geett

Geet : adi sir

Adi : geet what is this

Aaj tumhara phla din hai

Aur tum half an hour late aayi ho

Geet : sorry sir

Wo

Adi : geet now I have no time

To listen your talk

Aaj ka din tumhara koi acha tha

Jo maan sir bhi abhi aaye hai

Nhi toh tum first day hi yaha se out ho jaati

Geet : sorry sir

Next time asa nhi honge

Adi : I hope

.

First clear this mess

He pointed towards her dress...

Then take notepad and pen, and go directly to conference room...

You have 10 minutes

***********

She opened the door and bumped with him...

Geet : sorry

She stop sees him here...

Geet : what are you doing here

.

I think you forget miss handa

I call you here

.

Before she says, Adi come...

Adi : sir client aa gye hai

Maan : hmm

Adi : sir

Meet with Miss geet

She is your new secretary

Maan : adi

I already meet with her

.

Miss handa

Fastly arrange the papers in this file

Geet : yes

**********

Oh god

Geet ye tune kya kr diya

Boss se panga le liya

.

Geet ye meeting khatam hote hi

Sbse phle sorry bol dena hai

********

After meeting, she tries to talk with him, but he not gives chance to

her, giving work upon work...

Dust

Danav

Hai pure

.

Dekha aapne babaji

Mujhpe gussa kaise nikal rhe hai

Aaj mera phla din hai

Aur itna saara kaam krwaya mujhse

.

If you complain completed

So can I say?

.

Geet : phle mein kahu

.

Sorry

Maine jo lift mein kaha

Sorry

Aaj mein late ho gyi

Schi mein time pe puchti

Wo idiot car

.

Maan : wo car meri thi

Geet : maine

Maan : sshh

Galati driver ki thi

Tumhai nhi

Usse dhyan se chalani chaiye thi

.

She smiles...

Maan : now you go to home

Geet : par ye file

Maan : kal kr lena

Geet : pakka

Aap gussa nhi karonge

Maan : nhi

Driver tumhe chod denga

Geet : aapko ghar nhi jaana

Maan : abhi mujhe kaam krna hai

You must go

Geet : thanks

*********

One month passed, maan and geet happily work together...but

some emotions changed, but both not realized. Or running from

this change...He likes her smile, her antics, everything about her,

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and she also start liking his attitude, his style, his nature...

Maan : geet

Ye project hume kal hu submit krna hai

Aur abhi iska kaam pendin hai

Geet : ok sir

I have no problem

Maan : hmm

Both start understanding each other words without saying...

************

Location: conference hall

From past two hours both lost into work, in this mid, power cut

off...

Geet : ye lo

Isne bhi abhi jaana tha

Maan : geet abhi aa jaayengi

.

She stand from chair and goes towards window... She opened the

window...and cool wind touch her face... seeing her lost, maan also

came near to her and see her smiley face...

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.

What happen geet

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Where you lost

When wind blows through trees
I pause to listen and in its passing
I hear the tenderness of your voice
that fills the spectrum of my soul.

.

Nothing sir

Bs hawa ki awaaz sun rhi hu

.

Feeling so peace

.

Raat ke sanaate mein

Saanti hote huye bhi

Kuch awaaz hai aaj

.

His hand automatically moved towards her cheek, he tucked curl

behind her ear...

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She closed her eyes; his simple touch doing magic...the voice of

thunder awakens from beautiful dream...

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The gentle music flows

from every drop of rain,

as it just lightly taps

Against, my window pane.

The wind begins to whistle

It's own melodious song,

While the wind-chimes

dance and play along.

She turn to go , but he stop her by placing hand on her shoulder,

and came closer to her...

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The curtains blow inward

the breeze itself is warm,

my mind is so peaceful

in the calm before the storm.

.

He bends and kissed on her collarbone...

The gray clouds are parting

and a bright rainbow forms,

proving that something beautiful

can come from such dangerous storms.

.

She came out from his embrace...

Maan : geet stop

I want to say something

.

She turns and gives smiles to him & left...he runs behind to her up to terrace...

*********

He held her wrist and pulls her, she fall on his chest...

Maan : geet meri aankho mein dekho na

Look into my eyes

Follow me into a world of ecstasy

There and only there

Will you find the peace to unwind?

.

.

She sees in his eyes , only love for her...

I Share--I take

I LOVE--I HATE

Into my arms

I am the charm

Around your neck

Around your wrist

Listen to the voice from my beating heart

It yearns

The freedom of touch

The freedom of speech.

Of love,

Of purity

Like the wind

I'll find my way

Into your heart

Rain drenching the both, and both lost into love world... no one

saying anything, heartbeats increasing with the passing time...

I am here
tracing the hair
under your chin
watching your eyes
get moved
by the blowing
of the wind
and the pattering
of the rain.

.

Stop looking another side

Geet : hmm

.

Aap kuch khehna chahte the

Maan : jaise tum nhi khehna chahti

.

I love you

.

I love you geet

.

Kuch bolo na

She hugged him tightly...

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As we embrace each other and indulge in a kiss,
The warm raindrops fall as we touch lips.
Each drops signifies the passion we share,
Running down your cheeks and gliding through my hair.
Underneath the moon in the sky,
This is one of them moments that could never die.

.

.

Slow strokes, kissing and caressing then the whispers of our names.
So sensual and passionate this time we are sharing,
Love making outside in the rain and not even caring.
This moment right I do not want it to stop,
Intimacy being shared under the raindrops.

The way we do this is as if we have no shame,
Nevertheless, I love being with you making love in the rain...


part 2 (pyaar mein takraar)

part 3 (breakup) on page 12

part 4 (lets play game) on page 20

part 5 on page 29

part 6 on page 40

PART 7(A) ON PAGE 51

Part 7(b) & 7(C) on page 54

Part 8 on page 67

PART 9 ON PAGE 77

part 10 on page 88

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Another Work



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lovely os...👍🏼...Geet is Maan's secretary...😎...they worked together and soon began to like each other...👏👏👏...once when they were working in the conference hall the light went off and Maaneet got close to each other...☺️😳...finally they confess their love for each other......loved their nok-jhok in the beginning...😉😛...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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😛simply best...i dont have blog account😭
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Originally posted by: abba12

That's so lovely 😛


thnks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os...
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful... I loved the start
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Lovely so Good

keep writing more like that
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Beautiful os .
liked it ...

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