AkDha OS ||My First Love||

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Hey everyone 😉 Back with an OS 😃 Its a proposal OS , i hope u all like it 😳
|| My First Love ||
All her expectations , all her dreams were trashed in a couple of few minutes when she saw Jalal with Rukaiya. The entire ball room fell silent for her. She felt as if someone have hit her very hard on her head , that she couldn't gulp down anything at all..

Just then the host announced 'So ladies and Gentleman.. lets begin with the dancing session..' She felt a dagger inside her heart. How many dreams were in her eyes regarding this day. She thought she'll finally tell Jalal how much she love him. Desire him. Want him. Need him.

Her world turned fully today. This was a new world she was facing today. Just then a song started playing. 'So let Mr Jalal start the dance guys !' the announcer yelled above his voice !

Her heart sobbed a beat..

Tere liye hum hai jiye hontho ko siye..

She turned around as she saw Jalal singing this song. His eyes were fixed on her . Only her. Without blinking at all. Every eye focused on him while his eyes were only focused on the most beautiful girl. A girl with hazel like doe eyes , beautiful , full lips. Eyes that sparkled , skin that glows like nothing could.

And just then Jodha didn't know how , but she started singing the woman's line.

Tere liye hum hai jiye har ansu piyee..

A tear rolled down her eye but she stood still.. Jalal started walking towards her.

Dil mei magar ...
jalte rahe..
chahat ke diye tere liye.. tere liyee

both sang it together.
We can't predict the future , but we could only hope. Still , somewhere in her heart , Jodha believed that Jalal would come to her. They were now close enough to each other.. but not that close even they should be..

In between the entire music they both had a great welcoming memory of their flash backs.

*flash back starts*

'Uh Jallad..' Jodha yelled . ' Nah. Don't..' Jalal said grabbing his ice-cream even tighter and then brought his mouth and lick the icream.. Jodha rolled her eyes at him. And started walking , leaving him behind her. Just then, after a couple of few seconds , she felt strong arms on her shoulders and a manly chest pressing against her back. She stopped with the wild sensation of feeling the electric spark between them.
'Take it..' Jalal whispered softly in her ears , moving his hand forward to give her the ice cream. She stood still , paralyzed by the sparks in her body.

*flash back ends*

zindagi le ke ayi hai bite din ki kitaaab
gherein hai ab humein yaadein behisaab

Jalal sang these lines , remembering that scene when Jodha had fallen down and got her foot twisted , the pain was incredible , and he could feel her pain too.. he picked her up in his arms..dashing her against his chest, while he could see from the corner of his eyes that Jodha have been looking at him without blinking..
While Jodha's voice broke his chain of thoughts.

Bin pooche mile mujhe...
kitne saare jawab..
chaha tha kya paaya hai kya
humne dekhiye

Reality hit Jodha sooner. She too believed the rumors of Jalal and Rukaiya sharing a intense relationship. And now she was broken. She thought something else , but her fortune had something else for her. But what was it ? what was Jalal doing ?

Dil mei magar jalte rahe
chahat ke diye .. tere liyee..
tere liyee..

Jalal sang these lines , a little breeze left Jodha's hairs on her cheeks.. What was going to happen next ? Nobody knew. It was all luck. Fortune. Something which was going to create a History..

Jalal strolled the strains of her hairs back of her ear , doing this ... his fingers touched her cheek and her ear... she felt the same sensation in her body which forced her to shut her eyes , and all her pain came out just then... tears rolled down her eyes. She was broken inside and embarrassed outside .. for showing the world about her desires by doing this..

A soft moan escaped her throat as she felt warm but soft lips on her cheeks , sucking her tears , and her cheek. She opened her eyes rapidly and saw Jalal looking up at her , while his lips were stucked with her cheek. This all happened so rapidly. All eyes had a great scene to see before them.

Jodha felt her legs squirm. She felt as if she's going to fall with the pleasure , but before that Jalal held her tightly by gripping her tightly by her upper arms. Her lips shivering , eyes blinking , heart racing...

And her heart beat even fastened when she saw Jalal kneeling before her , and taking out a small piece and opening it 'Will you marry me , Jodha ?' The entire ball room fell silent. Jodha felt paralyzed.. She knelt with him and cupped his face in her soft palms.
'Jalal...' she groaned softly , rubbing her nose over his nose she said 'Yes... I want to be yours forever..' both shut their eyes closed. Tears flooding down her eyes , but these tears were of happiness.. For everyone present in the ball room this was some romantic film moment which they never thought they'd witness in real life , but for these two it was the moment of the life time.

Both of them were truly lucky to get their 'First Love' . 'Jodha...You are my First love.. and my last love..' Jalal murmured.. Both of them were lost in each other. They realized where were they when they heard a huge round of applause by the audience witnessing their romantic Love story moment.. Both of them opened their eyes in embarrassment..

Jalal wiped tears off her cheeks , and both of them stand then... 'Everyone.. thank you very much for coming here today.. ' Jalal said , eyeing Jodha..'This was the truest mean for throwing this party today..' he continued rubbing her knuckles gently with his thumb in circle ..

'She is Jodha... my first love.. my to be mistress and ...' he smirked and continued ' and the mother of my to be born 100 children..' the whole room filled with laughter while the couple shared few giggles too..

So , finally... both of them got their first love .. Lucky are those people who spend their whole life with their first love and Jodha and Jalal were one of those lucky people.
We can't predict the future , but we could only pray and hope for the best.. And for Jodha , Jalal was her best..and for Jalal..Jodha was his best..

And they lived happily ever after ! x)

That was something out of reality though 😆 but i just wrote my imagination 😆 Hope u all like it 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS 👏
Jalal is so romantic he confessed his love to jodha in front of everyone...
Congratulations to both of them as they are going to be future parents of 100 children's... 🤣
Me first...yipee
🥳
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Originally posted by: jodhaandakbar

Lovely OS 👏
Jalal is so romantic he confessed his love to jodha in front of everyone...


Thank you so much 🤗 Yesh , he's so romantic.. Ahh ^^ like our dream guy ☺️😆
Congratulations to both of them a
s they are going to be future parents of 100 children's... 🤣
Me first...yipee

Requires too much stamina 🤣
🥳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will comment after reading dear!!!!

mamtasingla thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice shot dear👏👏👏
jalal confessed his feelings and proposed her in front of everyone and how can jodha turned down the proposal😉
indeed a very sweet confession😊
thanks for pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice tittle and nice story thanks for pm update ur stories nest chapter soon pm me don't be late
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simply awesome os dear. I liked that way jalal confessed his feeling. Wow my love birds😳
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Hey dear what about your other stories.plz complete them ok
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Really cute update dear :)

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