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Posted: 10 years ago
hi superb update! Seems like Krish ahs the same habits as Maan! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 22 - geet reliving her past memories...loved their cute text-talks...
if she had his no then she not contacting him now and straightway ask him to meet her at some place.?...why she is searching him..?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 23

At the cafeteria...

Geet hid herself from his sight and gave him a tough time...

She kept admiring him from her hide out and left asking to find her the next day if he could and that she would be here the same time next evening...

Soon Khrish caught her typing and then they became friends...

"Angel"

"Prince"

"don't call me like that"

"why?"

"you can only call me when we are alone"

"ok"

So prince doesn't want their relationship to be disclosed...

"what should I call you?"

"anything you wish"

"Mr.teddy bear, OK"

Geet teases...

"what?"

"I'll call you like that till you get my gift or you'll forget"

"ok Angel, this is gud"

"Teddy will do, haina?"

"I'm Ok with it"

"teddy, what are you doing? Bachelors or masters?"

"MBA"

"Masters? So you are a biiiggg teddy"

"what are you doing?

"Bcom"

"so you are a tiny Angel"

"not that tiny, little bigger. Look"

Khrish looks at her and smiles...

They then became friends...

"Geeet"

Geet comes out of her thoughts...

Sam comes home and shows the invitation to Geet...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Sam: tum hi dekho ye kya hai

Geet takes a look and finds that it's some party invitation for the builders...

Geet thinks that Sam is going out to a party with MK...

Geet: toh aaj tummare date hai, MK ke saath

Sam: MK aur dating? Aaj hum donno hi date pe jaa rahe hai

Geet is surprised...: hum donno?

Sam: haan, iss party mein bhi dadi ke party ke sare log bhi aayenge

Geet: tum kya kehthi ho? mujhe iss party se kya lena dena hai? tum jaathi toh MK ke saath enjoy karogi, mein kabab mein haddi nahi ban sakthi

Geet winks...

Sam: tum toh MK ko jaanthi nahi Geet, MK toh mujhe kissi party mein kabhi lekhe nahi jaatha, ussko toh parties se allergy hai, aaj bhi MK aatha hai ya nahi, kuch keh nahi sakthe

Geet: phir hum wahan jaake kya karenge?

Sam: mujhe toh lagtha hai ki aaj ke party mein MK aaye na aaye, tummra toh zaroor aayega, ussiki party hai ye

Sam doesn't want to take rahul's name and confuse Geet...

Geet: Khrish! Khrish aayega, toh hum zaroor jayenge

Sam: tum shamko tayaar ho jao Geet, mein bhi sanjeevani se jaldhi aathi hoon, phir hum donno saath mein jayenge

Geet: teek hai

Geet is excited and she wants to look great for the party...khrish se milne ja rahi haina?

She decides to wear the new Saree that Sam got her last time...

Sam said Geet would look pretty in that Saree and so she got it for her...

Geet tries it out and she looks perfect...

Geet gets ready very soon and waits for Sam to come...

She had called her already and Sam is on her way...

Sam comes home and finds Geet shinning like a star...

Sam: you look dashing in this saree Geet, Khrish toh fida ho jayega, aur hum bhi dekhthe hai ki aaj woh tumme dekhke kaise bhaagtha, aaj toh sab ke nazar tum pe hi hogi Geet, dekho, you will be the star attraction today...

Geet blushes...

Geet: Khrish ko pasand aayega na?

She is still doubtful...

Sam: of course Geet, aaj toh tum bahut sundar lagthi ho

Sam gets ready in a minute and they leave before it's too late...

At the party...

Geet is little scared for this is her first official party and she is also nervous that her Khrish is somewhere here looking at her...

Pinky and Adi too have come and they are surprised to see Geet...

Pinky: Geet

Adi: halo Geet, welcome

Geet: Pinky, tu kab aayi?

Pinky: abhi abhi aayi

Sam: Geet, tum log baat karlo

Sam goes to find Maan...but Maan is not there...

Rahul recognizes Sam...

Rahul: halo Sameera

He lends his hand for a shake...

Sam: Namaste Rahul ji, Maan nazar nahi aatha? Aap ne apne dosth ko bhulaya nahi

Rahul steps back hearing Maan's name and he knows that Sam is Maan's would be...

Rahul: Maan ke bina kaise party, I'll call him wait

Rahul calls Maan...

Rahul: halo Maan, where are you Maan?

Maan: at home

Rahul: what? still at home? It's getting late man, party has already begun, come fast

Maan: Rahul, you know, I hate parties, I'm not coming

Rahul: some one is missing you here man

Maan: what? aaise kaun hai bhai?

Rahul: Sameera

Maan is shocked...what's Sam doing there, it's rahul's party and it's not a good idea for Sam to got there that too without Maan...

Maan: Sam? Are you kidding?

Rahul: no , I'm serious, come on Maan, she's looking for a partner, and if you don't come on time then I'm always here

So saying Rahul cuts the call...

Maan had to rush to the party...

Geet keeps looking for her Khrish and she couldn't find him there...

Geet: Pinky, aaj bhi mein Khrish se nahi mil sakthi

Geet bahut udaas hai...

Pinky: Geet, tum babaji se dua karo, aaj tummara Khrish tumme zaroor milega

Geet prays to her babaji to help her find her Khrish...

All the eyes are on Geet specialy rahul's ...

He inquires about the new girl at the party and finds out that it's Sam's friend...

Rahul thinks that it's good that Sam has such a beautiful friend...

Rahul keeps a watch on her and waits for the right time to start his game...

It's good that Maan is not here...and also Sam is here to take care of Maan if at all he comes...

Sam gets a call from Armaan...he needs Sam's help...it's an emergency...

Sam asks Pinky and Adi to take care of Geet...

Pinky and Geet stay there...

Geet keeps looking for Khrish and is frustrated not to find him...

Pinky is busy snacking and Adi is after Pinky...

Geet is left alone...Rahul knows that it's time for his game...

He asks the beared to give some drink to Geet...

He had mixed alcohol in it...

Geet drinks it and she begins to lose her senses...

She becomes very emotional and becomes mad...she calls out her Khrish and runs around like a lunatic...Rahul is hooked by her looks and he tries to force her to dance with him saying that he is Khrish...he catches hold of her and tries to pull her...


Part24

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update di
big teddy and tiny angel 😆
Rahul..grr 😡
us kamina ne sirf ek kaam accha kiya...maan ko phone kiya 😉
today that Rahul will be 🤢 by Maan's hand or by geet ki krish 😆
eagerly waiting for nxt part di 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg yeh samne kya kiya
she left geet alone
rahul..grr
he says he is krish n dancing with her
hope maan comes soon
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update! well written! Geet thinks abt her n Krish! Geet n Sam at the party! Sam has to leave! Rahul has his dirty eyes on Geet! he makes her drink! he forces her 2 dance with him saying he is Krish! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 24

In the given situation, it's the perfect timing for a hero's enrty and here it should be Khrish...

Geet remembers something like that when Khrish again proved that he is a savior, a super hero...

That was a Sunday and Geet happened to be at the cafeteria waiting for her Khrish...

Manisha was waiting for Khrish more eagerly...

There was something going in his mind...

He was all pumped up and when he saw Khrish he almost ran into him and fell on him...

Ohhh Geet got irritated for she hates anyone coming inbetween her and Khrish even if it's poor Manisha...

Geet toh Khrish ko dekhne ke liye pura hafta taras rahi thi aur jab Khrish ka darshan bahut mushkil se mila aur ye Manisha beech mein kabab mein haddi ke tarah gustha toh bechari Geet ko kitna bhura lagtha, haina babaji?

And Geet didn't even know if Khrish took notice of her or not...

He had totally ignored her, haan?

Let it be, Geet also won't talk with him till he himself comes and talks with her, haina?

Geet keeps watching Khrish...waiting for him to come to her...

But this Manisha was not letting Khrish even to get in and have a seat...

Manisha: you are late

Khrish: why? U are closing now itself?

Manisha: hare buddu, today is Sunday

Khrish: I know, that's why I'm here

Manisha: but U should be at Kiran's place, she'll be waiting

Khrish: Kiran? Who's that?

Manisha: that girl, you knocked her BF on that day, don't you remember? She came to invite us for lunch

Khrish was not at all interested...

Khrish: so what?

Manisha: we have to go now, it's already noon

Khrish: as you wish, I'm not stopping you, I'll take care of this place for you

Manisha: what?

Khrish: I'm serious, U don't worry

Geet was happy that Khrish was not going out with Manisha to some girl's place for lunch

The one thing she liked about khrish was his never bother attitude towards girls, even if she was an apsaras...

Manisha: but she wants to thank you

Khrish: ohhh come on it's all over, I would have done it even if it was you

Geet was happy that Khrish didn't take any interest in that girl...

But this Manisha was not letting him live in peace...

Manisha: but you promised

Khrish: what do you mean I promised, you promised

Yes, it was only Manisha who was so excited and he immediately made a promise to be there for lunch...

Manisha: but I promised on your behalf, she was only expecting you not me

Khrish: but you are the one more interested, you go and tell her that I'm not coming as I'm busy

Manisha: she said she would be inviting a few friends as she wanted to introduce you as a hero to them

Khrish: what nonsense? I'm not a hero

Manisha: but she thinks so, poor girl, what'll she do now? All her friends would be waiting to see the hero who saved her, you can't do this, come on, let's go

Khrish stares Manisha...

Manisha: OK then, as you wish, she'll be right here with her friends any minute, then you take care of it yourself,it's none of my business

Khrish thought that he must end this drama here itself before that girl makes a huge issue out of this and that would invade Khrish's privacy, which he won't give up for he always likes to be a private person, minding his own business...

She had been following Khrish all the time, almost stalking him...

He hated such attention, he had just helped her as he could never tolerate such disgusting acts...

This girl might not leave him alone till he makes it clear to her that he doesn't like all this and she better keep away from him...

Khirsh decided to go along with Manisha...

And they left leaving Geet back...

Geet was so unhappy that Khrish didn't take her too and she kept waiting for them till evening...

Only Manisha returned and Geet was upset seeng Khrish missing...

Geet was already burning like a tandoor in jealousy and finding Khrish missing made her turn mad...

She went to Manisha and asked him what happened and where was Khrish?

Manisha narrated what happened at Kiran's place...

As they went kiran was so happy to see Khrish and she proudly introduces him as her savior to all her friends...

Geet interrupted...: friends matlab boys and girls?

Geet was so upset and one should have seen her face when she said girls?

She was saying it as if it was trash..."girls?"

Manisha: haan sare girls hi the, ab hero ko welcome karne ke liye ladhkiayn hi aayenge na?

Geet was fuming inside...

Kiran had arranged for a feast but this Khrish spoiled everything saying that he had more important work to do and warned her never to waste his time in future...

He would not encourage all this...

And when Khrish was about to take leave that rascal Karan, Kiran's ex-BF entered the house...

Karan was drunk and was furious, he was piised off b'coz of the insult infornt of his friends and also so many students...

Karan: kiraaan

He rushed towards kiran and tried to misbehave...

Karan: tumne toh meri izzat mitti mein miladhi, I will destroy you, ab dekhtha hoon ki kal se tum college kaise aathi?

So saying he tries to abuse her infront of everyone...

Karan: aaisa hi sab ke samne tumne meri beizzathi ki, aaj teri bari

He tried to catch hold of her kameez and pulled it hard...

She struggled to get off his hold and tried to save herself from further embarrassment...

She looked towards Khrish who was glaring that karan as if he wished to burn him alive...

Khrish wouldn't let anyone disrespect a woman infront of him...

Khrish went and hit karan hard that he stumbled letting kiran go...

Then he managed and roared in anger...he was looking like a wounded wolf...

Villain hai toh wolf hi haina? hsre toh hummara hero hai...

Kiran took the opportunity and moved away from that animal...

She escaped and ran for help...

Karan was after her ...

Kiran was afraid and she was running nowhere in fear when Khrish stopped her and calmed her...

She took shelter behind Khrish's broad shoulders...

Karan's anger doubled seeing Khrish there...

Karan: ye ******* yahan kya kar raha hai?

Khrish raised his fist to warn him...: itna kaffi nahi hai kya?

Karan: aaj mein tumme chodoonga nah, aaj koi tumme bacha nahi saktha, ye bhi

He stares kiran...

Khrish: tum yahan kyun aaye ho? chale jao yahan se aur phir issko tang karne ki koshish mat karna'

Karan: tum kaun hothe ho mujhe rokhnewale? Aur ye tummara kya lagthi?

He gives a dirty look at Kiran and Khrish...

That's it...the volcano erupts...

Geet was also so angry with that karan...what a disgusting man?

Geet: phir Khrish ne uski dulayi ki?

Manisha: haan, that place turned into a boxing ring

Khrish puctured his face so badly that even he wouldn't recognize himself after that...

That b****** ran away saving his life...

He'll never dare to trouble a girl again...

Kkiran once again thanked Khrish and khrish requested her not to invite him for dinner...

Then he left for his room from there...

That girl was so lucky, but our Geet is now in trouble...

Will her super hero Khrish come to her rescue or will it be our own hero MSK?

Geet prays to god to send her Khrish soon...

Part25

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
geet waiting for krish
manisha spoiled her plan n took krish to kirans party
he again became a hero there
but now..will her krish save her from rahul

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update! Manisha took Krish away! Geet annoyed! Krish was the hero! nt she is waiting 4 Krish 2 save her frm Rahul! update soon
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PART 23
NICE UPDATE
GEET GET READY FOR HER KRISH
GEET REMEMBER BECOMING FRIEND WITH KRISH
RAHUL SPIKES GEET'S DRINK N TRY TO TAKE HER ADVANTAGE



PART 24
NICE UPDATE
GEET IS WAITING TO SEE HER KRISH BUT NOT SUCCESS IN IT AS HE NEET OT VISIT KIRAN TO GIVE HER WARNING TO STAY AT DISTANCE FROM HIM

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