akdha os~ Her crazy boy ~last part updated pg31(13/10/2015)

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hey guys I'm back with my crazy os..sorry for the mistakes..will update next part after few days but only if you like to read further..😉 please leave your comments and hit like button..love you all🤗"papa..i don't want to talk anything about my marriage and proposals..please,i want to study.."jodha almost request from her father. 'but jodha..'her mother was going to start her usual lecture but she stoped by her father.'leave it maina..i also think she must stay like this some more time..she is still 22..'barmal said making his wife face annoyed.hearing her father's words jodha breathed a sigh of relief."huh marriage proposals " she cursed to that word on her mind.it is the most irritate topic of her life.then she slowly looked at the person who is sitting infront of her enjoying his dinner and their converasation in the same time with her brother sujalamal.her lips curved in to a smile.her eyes spoke lot of things as ever.she came to her scene with hearing others voices and before anyone see her smile she hid it and started to eat her dinner.they ate silently but after sometimes he broke the silence and asked from barmal "uncle..can i arrange a party tommorow.."hearing his words barmal surprisingly looked at him and asked "a party..is anyone b'day tommorow"he asked looking at everyone's face.jalal chukeled and got from his chair,went near to barmal and said leaning over his sholder and making a cute annoyed face"uffo uncle..its not a birthday party..its ad party for me,abdul and maan..and i'll promise you,we will stay only in my room..i just want your one yes..please please mr.singh you are agree na.."he asked making a puppy face.'Jalal..'barmal was about to say something but he stoped by jalal "thank you uncle thank you very much..i knew that you will agree"saying he kissed bharmal's cheek and went sujamal and said kissing his cheek "thank you buddy..you are lucky to have a great father like this.."saying he winked at sujamal making his lips thight together to control his laugh.Then he went to maina and kissed her cheek saying"thank maina..your husband is great.."then he unkowingly went to jodha and was about to kiss her cheek but before he came to his scene and stop for a moment.he couldnt take his eyes from her.he could feel her closeness and fragance same as to her.her eyes slowly met with his.their faces are very close to eachother.he couldn't stop himself kissing her rosy cheek.he softly kissed her cheek and said"thank you too ms.singh.."saying he went from their saying "good night all.."all were laugh at his antics but she didn't here anything.she still could feel his lips on her cheek sending shivers down her spine.she feels her cheek heat up and her heart started to beat fast and jumped with joy.she wanted to scream while jumping.she could feel her eyes are going to wet with happy tears.but she controled them.she looked at her plate.she don't want to eat anymore.her heart filled with joy.its enough to her.it was unexpet but the first kissed he gave to her.Only she know how much she yearned for it.but she never thought that it would be happened like this.He is the man she could think about in every second.he is the craziest boy she ever met.only she she know how madly she love this crazy boy.how much she love his craziness.she don't want anything in her life other than this crazy boy.He is the man everyday she secretlly admired.
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Savi.23 thumbnail
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last part(a)
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nice os
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lovely os
eagerly waiting for next part.
update ASAP.
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Sweet and lovely OS.
Continue soon.
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Lovely OS
plz continue
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nice update n update soon n thnxx for pm
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awesome os.waiting for next part.😊
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Originally posted by: Abi23

nice os

waiting for the next part

thank u soo much dr..will update asap
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lovely os
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update ASAP.

thank u soo much dr..will update asap..

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