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This is my first ff so if their is any mistakes please kindly let me know i'll try to improve.

Characterskech:-


Raman Kumar bhalla:- (Karan Patel) 27 years ,head in marketing department at AK enterprises .belongs to a middle class family.very handsome.used to taunt and fight with ishita.neighbour of iyers.

Ishita vishwanathan iyer:-(divyanka T)25 years marketing manager in AK enterprises .very beautiful and kind but traditional girl.works under rkb.family same as the show.she is also in search of true love.behave very sweetly with others but always fight with rkb.

Ashok khanna:- (sangram singh)ceo of AK enterprises .he is a famous playboy and very arrogant with his employees.

Shagun arora:- (anita H)very beautiful,secratory of Ashok khanna .she truly loves Ashok.Ashok only use shagun to complete his motives.friend of iyers and bhallas.


Shlok vishwanathan iyer :- (Karan wahi)very protective brother of ishita but sweet in nature.manager of ceo Ashok khanna but hates him. Madly in love with shagun.rkb and shlok were in same collage so there is a healthy competition b/w them.

Mihika bhalla:- sister of Raman and best friend of ishita.she is designing head at ak enterprises. In love with mihir arora.

Mihir arora:-younger brother of shagun arora.manager at HR department.loves his sister but she does not listen to him. Best Friend of Raman bhalla and in love with mihika

Index:-

Part 1:- page 1
Part 2:-page 2
Part 3:-page 3
Part 4:- page 6
Part 5:-page 7
Part 6:-page 8
Part 7:-page 9
Bonus part:- page 11
Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene:-1 iyer house
Mihika enters in the house and shout- ishu ,shlok bhai jaldi aao dekho mummy ne aapke liye garmagaram pakode bheje hai...
Shlok comes wearing track pants and t shirt and pulls mihika's cheeks.
S:-miku thanku yar subah subah Aunty ne dil khush ditta.aise hi hote hai na Punjabi me??
Mihika smile cutely and feed him a pakoda when he about to put the pakoda in his mouth someone snatches it,our one and only Raman bhall.
R:- abe madrasi Jake apne sambhar bade kha meri ma k bnaye pakode meri hi bhn k hath se mujhse phle mat kha...and when he about to put pakoda in his mouth a girl come in front and eat pakoda from his hand...
R:- abe pagal madrasan mera pakoda kha gyi...and start running before ishita .ishita comes from behind and threw a glass of water on Raman...
I:- ravan Kumar kabhi kabhi nha liya karo dimag thanda rhega..
R:- pagal madrasan tu office aa isi garam dimag k sath tujhe fire kar dunga ,boss hu me tera.
I:-office me boss hoga ghar par to tu ravan hai ravan.
Mihika comes from behind and coughs
M:- ishu ek bat bta ydi tere bhai mere bhaiya hue to mere bhai bhi to tere...
Raman cuts her in middle and start shouting :- pagal ho tum dono ,ye pagal madrasan hi thik hai isse koi rishta nhi bnana mujhe...
I:- han to tum bhi koi respect dene layak bande nhi ho ,office me to majboori hoti hai.mihika tap her hand on head and went inside. At that time a handsome tall boy subbu enters in the compartment ,ishita runs towards him and hugs him tightly.
I:-subbu ,how r u ??I am meeting u after a long time.
Raman burns in anger by watching them hugging and chitchat ing ,he does not like a bit when any man stand beside ishita and here she is hugging someone else..
I:- Raman meet subbu ,he is my school friend.
Raman shakes hand with subbu arrogantly and drags ishita from there and said:- subbu ishita will catch u later .we have to attend a very important skype call. So bye bye.
Subbu gets confused and leave from there.
I:- what r u doing ??chhodo mera hath me apne bhai se bol dungi...bhall se bharta bna denge tumhara...
R:- are chup ho ja pagal madrasan.tere bhai se darta nhi hu me do bar wrestling competition me hara chuka hu me use...
I:- bhai ne char bar ttumhe haraya jyada akdo mat..aur me kisi se bhi bat karu tum kyu jal rhe ho.
Raman leaves her hand hand and get close to her
R:- mujhe bht bura laga jab subbu tmhare pas aaya
I:-(huskily)kyu??
R:-kyuki..
I:-kyuki...
R:-tum meri...
I:-me tumhari...
R:- tum meri manager ho ,aur aise gadho se bat karke tmhara bacha khucha dimag kam karna band kar diya to mere kam ka band baj jayega...
I:- ishita push him hardly and murmurs ravan Kumar,arrogant ,rude and leave from there.
Raman smirks and smile dreamily...

Scene 2 bhalla house:-
Mihir and shagun enters bhalla house.mihika hugs shagun
M:- shagun di aap Europe trip se wapis kab aaye??
S:- kal hi aayi me.u know mihika AK (Ashok) mujhe itni sari jagahon par ghoomane le gye.aur shopping ka to poochho mat .me tumhare aur ishita dono k liye best dresses lekar ayi hun.ishu kha hai????
M:-uska bhai k sath fight session abhi khatam hua hai thak kar aaram karne chali gyi.
S:- koi bat nhi ham use surprise dete hai.
Shagun enters iyer house shlok was going out aaccidently he bumps into shagun.
Shagun rubs her head and say:-
Shagun:- shlok tum kabhi dekh k nhi chalte bachpan me school me ,phir college me,kabhi office me aur ab ghar par bhi mujhse takra jate ho...majra kya hai...
Shlok stammered:- kkkuch nhi shagun wo me jaldi me tha na isiliye...shagun throws her hands in air enter in the house.
Mihika smirks and tease shlok:- bhai wese to aap bade rajnikant bnte ho but shagun di ko dekhkar aapki gadi atak kyu jati hai..
Shlok:- chup kar lagta hai tere bhai k one liners tere dimag me bhi ghusne lage...
Mihika :- wese raman bhai bta rhe the ki school k dino me bhi aap shagun di par marte the ...mihika giggles
Shlok:- wese me soch rha tha ki tere bhai ko bta du ki tu bhi kisi par school k dino se Marti hai...abhi wo tere bhai k sath hi baitha hoga chal bta k aata hun...
Mihika blushes and stop him...
M:- no no bhai , me to majak kar rhi thi...bhai ko mat kuch bolo..
Shlok:- ab aaya na ooont pahad k neeche...wese tera bhai bhi andha hai Jo sab ko dikhta hai use nhi dikhta ...
M:- ye problem bhai ki hi nhi aapki bhi hai aapko bhi kafi cheezen dikhai nhi deti...
Shlok went into thinking mode and mihika leaves from there...



Scene 3 :-
Ishita's room:-
Ishita sleeping into bed ,shagun comes slowly and start tickling her...
I:- mihika chhod mujhe ,ek to tera bhai mujhe sone nhi deta aur ab tu bhi...
S:- ohhho aisa kya kiya mere best friend ne Jo tu so nhi pati...
Ishu wakes up immediately and hugs shagun tightly
I:- shagun di aap kab aaye???I missed u so much.
S:- bas abhi aayi tere aur miku k liye gifts layi hun...
Mihika enters they hug together and opens all the gifts ...
Mihika get excited to see all the dresses...
M:- are wah shagun di sari dresses ,ishu ab tera kya hoga...
S:- kya hoga Matlab ishu bhi pehnegi dress.
I:- no di ..me kese pehnoongi...me comfortable nhi rhungi...
S:- are hme phn k dikhane me kya jata hai ...ek bar try to kar...
I :- di abhi nhi bad me pakka..abhi aap hme apni trip k bare me btao...
Shagun excitingly tells them about Europe,Ashok and shopping...
Ishita does not like when she talks about Ashok because she knows her brother's love for shagun,but for shagun's happiness she keep quite..


Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊i am posting an ff for the first time ,please comment if u like it,I will be really glad...
Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its solo gud yaar.
Luved Ishra Chemistry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Precape:- dinner at bhallas ,mihika's birthday outing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Datz a wonderful start looking forward for d next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Realy interesting and aws0me.. L0ved it..
Update s0on dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start👍🏼
update d next part soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 4
Dinner at bhalla house:-
Ishita's parents and shagun's parents went to vaishnodevi...due to poor health of Mr bhalla,toshiji cannot go for the trio so she invited all the children for the dinner at bhalla house...
Ishu ,mihika,and shagun were helping toshiji...
Mihir and Raman were drinking in their room. Shlok enter in the room
S:- abe kya kar rhe ho tm log ...bahar khana ready hai aur tum log yha pee rhe ho...
R:- are to kya kare tere aur Teri madrasan behen k chakkar me MA ne ghas phoos bnaya hoga...
M:-shlok tu bhi aaja kisi ko pta nhi chalega...
R:- oye nhi , tu piyega to sab ko pta chal jayega yad hai college me ek pag me shagun shagun karne lga tha...
Shlok signaled Raman to be quite as mihir was there...
M:- shlok why were u taking my sisters name...wait a minute u love her ..oh God why can't I figured it out u tottaly in love with my sister..
Shlok:- mihir please yar don't tell her anything its not love .she doesn't love me ,she loves Ashok.I only likes her and wese bhi koun nhi karega use pasand...
R:- shlok yar Ashok kameena hai ek no. Ka..shagun ko ye realise karwana padega...
S:- but wo usse bht pyar karti hai ,uska dil dukhega to me khush nhi rh paunga..
Raman was about to speak something but mihika enters and shout:- bhai ye sab kya hai MA aap teeno ko dande se maregi .me to aap logo ko khane k liye bulane aayi thi aur aap log...
R:- oye miku ma ko kuch mat bolna...tera rakhi gift nhi dunga warna...
S:- nhi re miku sari pol khol de in logo ki...tera rakhi gift me de dunga ...
M:- OK shlok bhai
R:- han miku bol de mujhe bhi bahar kuch logo ko kuch logo k secrets batana hai...
S:- no miku stop..yar ye to chalta rhta hai ,ham aa hi rhe hai khana khane tu ja...Aunty ko kuch mat bolna...
Raman smirks...

Scene 5

At dining table:-
R:- guys meri miku ka birthday hai do din bad abhi office leaves teen din ki baki hai kahi outing par chale...
I :- plan bnane wale ko ye bhi yad nhi hai ki kal subah marketing department ki presentation hai ,we cannot go...
R:- aisi khatara manger hai to hal to yhi hal hoga na mera...
Mihika :- bhai but mera birthday hai...
Mihir :- Raman ek kam karte hai sab hamare farm house chalte hai ham sab subah nikal jayenge aap log kam nibta kar sham Tak nikal Jana...
Ishita:- me is ravan k sath akele nhi aaungi...
Raman :- khud ko hoor samjh rkha hai me tumhe khaunga nhi...doosro ko enjoy karne diya karo kbhi ..kamse kam tumhare bina ye log to chain se rhenge..me to hu hi badnaseeb...
Ishita got irritate and throws water on Raman .Raman was about to throw water but shagun stops him
Shagun:- guys kal poora din hai tmhare pas ladne k liye, hme kal jaldi uthna hai please abhi nhi...
Raman stops and glares at ishita .ishita giggles...
Mihir:- mihika shagun shlok aur me to hmari gadi se chale jayenge. Par Raman tum dono ko address pta hai na hmare farm house ka...
Raman:- han mujhe pta hai...
Ishita:- iyyo murgan please help ...
Raman :- aaww tum mere liye help mang rhi ho tmhe jhelne k liye so sweet...

Ishita tap her feet on ground and leaves...

Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Raman and ishita's nok jokh are superb and raman balckmailing shook is damn cute nice update dear

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