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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Wow awesome update..
Raman teasing mode is hilarious.
Shagun ke love lecture..i feel bad for shlok..
Raman ke ganti baji ishita ko dekh kar...

Money toh save hogaya...free food ..hu hu hu..
O they losted in eachother..
Raman memerised by her beauty..

Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
It's so romantic... beautifully written... love the way Raman looks at her. continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
nice update...they know each other feelings still didnt confess it...
shagun should realise that her true love is shalok...Loved raman possessiveness...liked it...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5:-

Raman and ishita finish their dinner and head to their suit.they both were really tired from the whole day's hardwork so they both laid on the bed and get sleep peacefully...

The morning rays fall on them both stir in sleep and open their eyes,they were laying cuddle to each other in the last night's attire..they both get shocked and jump off the bed...

Ishita stares at Raman...

Raman:- kkkya ghooro mat mene kuch nhi kiya ,kal ham thak gye the neend aa gyi so gye...apne dimag k ghodon ko galat direction me mat le jaoo.

Ishita got embarrassed :- mene kya kha me to bas bol rhi thi ki washroom phle me use karungiii..

Raman:- han han jao..

They both turn their back towards each other and then suddenly turn to each other and say together :- is bare ham kisi se bat nhi karenge...

They both nodded to each other and start to get ready to leave hotel...
The ride from hotel to farmhouse was a silent affair..
Scene 1:-
At the farmhouse:-

Shlok :- ye log kyu nhi aaye abhi Tak...

Mihir:- aa jayenge unki ladai dekhkar log coma me chale gye honge...unhe admit karwa k aa rhe honge...

At the mean time Raman's car arrived:-

Ishu climbed down the car and hugged shlok:- Anna ,aa gyi me...
Shlok :- ishu kha fas gye the tum log??

Shagun and mihika comes out in the garden and hugged ishu...
Raman hugged mihir and shlok...

Shagun:- thank God ,tum log aa gye warna mujhe lga ki rat bhar me khi ek doosre ko kha na jaoo..

Mihir :- han wese btao kitne log shaheed hue tum dono ki ladai rokne me kal rat...

Raman and ishita looks at each other and share an eyelock..

Mihika hug Raman :- koi mat tang karo mere bhai ko...

Mihir:- tumhare bhai ko koi tang nhi kar rha ,ye log to kahi five star ka khana kha kar aaye hai aur hme in do chhipkaliyon k hath ka khana khana pada...

Shagun and mihika rolls their eyes...

Ishu:- mihir,that's not fair ek to un dono n khana bnaya aur tum taunt mar rhe ho ye sab Raman ki sangat ka asar hai...

Raman:- are me kha se tapak gya beech me ,aur sahi to kh rha hai ye tum logo ko khana bnana aata kha hai...shagun aur mihika to phir bhi omlet bna lete hai..par ye madrasan , maggi k alawa kuch nhi bnana ata ise...lo ab to maggi bhi ban ho gyi madrasan ab tera kya hoga...

Shlok whispers in mihir ears :- isko chup kara ladkiyon ka para garam ho gya to ham teeno ko paka dengii.

Ishita murmures under her breath and mihika shouts :- chup ho jao aap log,aap log ko lagta hai na hme khana bnana nhi aata to theek hai ab aap lo hi khana bnaooo...

Ishu:- han aur grocery bhi le aana kyuki ghar me sirf ek packet maggi hai...and shouts at Raman aur wo bhi ban ho gyi hai...

Raman and mihir looks on each other shlok taps his forehead with palm...

Raman:- han jao aisa khana bnayenge ki tum log oongliyan kha jaoge...

Ishita:- OK jao ham log to aaram karenge ab ,sshagun di ,miku chalooo

Shagun massaging ishita's hair and showing pictures of her in kanjiwaram...
Ishita :- dii aap bht pretty lag rhe ho...
Shagun:- han but ye kanjiwaram to mene first and last time hi phni hai ,Ashok se shadi k bad to me full Punjabi bride ban jaungii..
Ishita gets sad and ask shagun:- Ashok sir ne aapko propose kar diya???
Shagun :- abhi use lagta hai ki wo ready nhi hai par me use mana loongi...
Ishita gets sad for shlok but she compose herself and say :- di ab chalo bahar kya ho rha hai dekh kar aate hai...

Mihir was cutting vegetables shlok and raman went for grocery shopping..
Mihika comes from behind and hugs mihir and give him kiss on cheeks.
Ishita and shagun enters in kitchen and coughs..
Mi-mi jerks away from each other and looks down embarrassingly...

Ishu:- miku ye kya ho rha hai,filmo me to hero heroine ko backhug karta hai khana bnate waqt yhaa to role reversal...

Shagun:- now I got it...isiliye miku ne in logo ko khana bnane k liye kha aur mihir ne un dono ko shopping par bhej diya...

Mihika:- nhi di aisi bat nhi hai...ishu tu chup ho ja...

Shagun:- hme sab pta hai kaisi bat hai...par tum log Raman aur shlok se chupte kyu hoo..

Mihir:- shlok ko pta hai bus Raman ko nhi pta...

Shagun:- par kyu ,mujhe nhi lagta Raman koi objection karega...

Mihika :- objection to nhi karenge bhai par overprotective or emotional ho jayenge...sagai aur shadi Tak pahuch jayenge...and we want to go slow in our relationship...

Mihir :- han aur wese bhi maja to chhup k pyar karne me hai..

Mihika blushes...shagun and ishu smiles...
Raman and shlok enters in the house ..
Guys prepare the lunch and girls prepares the dining table...
They start to eat guys actually prepared nice food
Shagun:- wow guys... I am impressed ...shlok smiles

Mihika:- mihir shadi k bad apni biwi k liye khana tumhi bnana bht khush hogi wo mihika blinks...
Mihir:- han sochungaaa...

Ishu:- khana to achchha hi banega na in logo ne Jo nhi bnaya...

Shagun miku:- kya Matlab???
Ishu:- Matlab ye ki in grocery ke bags me neeche packaged food hai..raman hme budhdhhu bna rha tha...isne to mere seedhe sadhe Anna ko bhi apne jaisa bna diya...

Raman:- oooj ames bond ki poti ,tujhe kaise pata chala...

Ishu:- kyuki aap logo ne packet chupane k liye jis almari me rkhe us almari ki chabi mere pas bhi hai...

Raman :- mujhe pata tha ki ek madrasi doosre madrasi k dimag ko pad lega...

Ishu:- kya Matlab ?????

Raman :- ye idea tmhare seedhe sadhe Anna ka tha...

Shlok touches his ears and say sorry mihika and ishu pulls his cheeks...
Shagun :- ab ye sab challenge throw karna band karo jaldi se khana khao...phir ham yha pas me ek tourist spot hai waha challenge...

Everybody finish their food and get ready to go for tourist spot...


Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Lovely update as usual..
I love when ishra sharing eyelocks...
I love morning scene of ishra..both are silent..

shlok is a protective and caring bro..
Cooking challange for boys is atka..
Boys cheated girls by brining packet food...jasoos ishita pakad liya..
Shagun truely love ashok..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Lovely update as usual..
I love when ishra sharing eyelocks...
I love morning scene of ishra..both are silent..

shlok is a protective and caring bro..
Cooking challange for boys is atka..
Boys cheated girls by brining packet food...jasoos ishita pakad liya..
Shagun truely love ashok..

Thanks your comments truly means a lot to me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Nice update. Love the concept new and refreshing
Bonding of all of them is nice specialy mihika, ishita and shagun😊

Thanks for PM
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Lovely update...
Jaga Jasoos ishita se koi bhi bach nahi sakta seede Sade shlok bhi wise kar raha hein kya bath hein... I hope shagun realizes shlok' solve for her I feel so bad for him
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
beautiful story..i read all parts in 1 go..
loved ishra nok jhok..and you doing fabulous work

cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update...like this fun play...continue soon...

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