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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Both the parts were amazing.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
hyee nice starts and amazing parts...liking it...
loved ishra nok jhok...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
This is fantastic...I love their fighting... continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Aws0me update..
Ishra N0kJhok is cute.
Update s0on.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
interesting story
loved ishra nok jhok
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 6
At morning :-
In the car mihir sit on driver seat shlok want to sit next to him but mihika request him to sit at back seat with shagun so she can sit with mihir...
Shlok sit with shagun.shagun smiles at him and offers him chips .he smiles thinking shagun is sitting next to him...

Scene 7 :-
Raman and ishita finish their work and get into the car ...
R:- madrasan tumne apna bag rkh liya na...
I:- han shagun di aur miku ne subah hi mera bag pack kar diya tha...
R:- chalo meri bhn ne kuch to achchha kiya warna tum bag pack karne me poora din lagati.
I:- ravan Kumar ab chalo baki k taunts raste me mar Lena...
They speak to other guys on phone they have reached to farmhouse...

Ishita:- u knw right address na????
Raman :- nhi tumhe agwa karke le ja rha hu...
Ishita :- tumme himmat nhi hai mujhe agwa karne ki...
Raman :- himmat to bht kuch karne ki hai,but agar kuch karna hi hai to tumhare sath kyu karunga...
Ishita:-to phir kiske sath karoge...
Raman :- HR department ki sheela kejwani ko dekha hai...sooo hot..soch rha hu use apni personal secretory bna loon...bht kam aayegii
Ishita got irritated...and angrily glares at Raman ...
IShita:- I hate u ...
Raman :- I hate u too madrasan ,but I looove sheela...
Ishita :- OK if u love sheela to tum use hi manager bna lo me subbu ki company join kar leti hu ...subbu is so handsome and sweet unlike u...hme sath me time spend karne ko bhi mil jayega...
Raman gritted his teeth and say:-koi jarurat nhi hai me nhi chahta ki mere hathon kisi bechare ki kismat kharab ho.tum meri manager Hi theek ho...
Ishita:- to phir no sheela...
Raman:- han meri ma..no sheela ...wese bhi us mini skirt ko tumhari kanjiwaram dekh k acidity ho jati...
Ishita pouts and Raman smiles seeing her...



Scene7
Farmhouse:-
Shagun:- miku jab ishu ko pta chalega ki hmne uska bag change kar diya to kya hoga...
M:- kuch nhi di thodi der wo chillayegi Tamil me galiyan degi..phir dress pahan legi..
S:- but me uske liye ek kanjiwaram sari le aayi agar wo jyada uncomfortable hui to we will not force her...
M:- OK ,di aapne kbhi kanjiwaram try ki hai...???
S:- noo sari is not my cup of tea...
M:- aap ek bar try to karo..
S:- but mujhe pehnna nhi aati...
M:- me phna deti hu ..ishu ko kai bar phnte dekha hai mujhe aati hai sari pehnana
S:- OK
Mihika help shagun to wear sari...shagun was looking so beautiful in kanjiwaram...
M:- di u looking so beautiful aao photo session karte hai ishu ko dikhayenge...
Shagun comes out of the room,shlok were preparing the room for everyone he saw shagun and his jaw dropped..
Shlok always wanted to see shagun in kkanjiwaram...
Shagun got conscious with his glare and asked him:- aise kyu dekh rhe ho jaise bhoot dekh liya ho achchhi nhi lag rhi kya...
Shlok:- achchhi nhi bht achchhi lag rhi ho ,isse phle kanjiwaram me itna khoobsurat koi nhi lga...
Shagun:- blushes ,ek bat to pakki hai tumhari biwi bht lucky hogi,jhooti tareefen karne wala husband Jo milega use...
Shlok:- meri hone wali biwi ki jhooti tareef karni hi nhi padegi mujhe...uski tareef me nikla har lafz mere dil se niklega...
They both share an eyelock...shagun backs off and say:-
S:- do u think Ashok ko ye kanjiwaram sari pasand aayegi...??
Shlok got hurt by listening ashok's name and leaves from there...
Shagun got confused..mihika asked her for photos and she got busy in posing for pics..

Scene 8:-
Raman ishita in the car:-
I:- kitni door hai aur???
R:- do ghante aur lagenge ...bar bar pooch k dimag mat kharab karoo gadi hai tumhare appa ka plane nhi...
I:- oye appa par mat jao han...
Some guys on a jeep walk past by ishita's side..and winks at her and whistles...ishita thinks to tease Raman and waves at them...Raman got angry and apply break to car with jerk..
Ishita:- what??
Raman:- what were u doing??
Ishita:- mene socha tumhari khatara ydi band pad gyi to me unse lift le lungi...
Raman got irritated and accelerate the car with full speed...
Ishita:- Raman slow down...are baba nhi loongi unse lift.. Slow down ...
Suddenly car stops...
Raman smirks at ishita...ishita let out a sigh...
After a small eyelock...Raman try to start the car but it did'nt start

I:- ab kya ho gya???
R:- gadi band pad gyi ...
I:- what??? mene kha tha ye khatara band ho jayegi..
R:-tumhare lal dabbe se to achchhi hai...
I:- problem solve karne me dimag lagao one liners Marne me nhi...
R:- tmhare sath rhta hu to mere dimag aur kismat dono k tale band ho jate hai...
Ishita:- ayyoo murgan network bhi nhi aa rha warna bhai hme pick karne aa jate ab hum kya Karen...
Raman:- yha par koi transport facility bhi nhi hai...
Ishita :-isse achchha to me un ladko se hi lift le leti ...
Raman got irritated and take out their bags from the car...
Raman :- kisi se lift nhi lena hme itni rat ko ,yha pas me ek bada hotel hai wha rookenge ...aur gadi repair karwane k bad subah farm house chale jayengee...
Ishita:- iyyoo murgan ye kha phasa diya aapne...
Raman:- un par ilzam mat lagao wo wese hi sadme hai ki tumhare jaisa cartoon bna diya unhone...
Ishita :- kal Tak tumhe zinda chhod du ye prayer kar lo tum...
Raman:- darling bas karoo abhi hme rat bhar ladne ke alawa kafi kam karne hai...
Ishita :- kyaaa????chheee...
Raman:- are muh band karo aur chalo hotel mujhe khana bhi khana haiii ...
Ishita:- bhukkad kumarr...
And they both walk to hotel...

Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I was a silent reader at India forum till now ...but I was so obsessed with stories here that this idea popped up in my mind and I try to write a story...I have a really important exam in a month and I will be 😊able to update further only after that .if u like my little experiment please comment and let me know..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nice update... Shagun in kajjevaram saree aww... And jealousy Raman and Ishita are good to watch... Now am looking forward to see hw Raman reacts by seeing Ishita in western wear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey i loved it..:-)

Im loving ishra nok jokh..:-)

Iyers,bhallas,aroras new generation is so positive..without any negative issues..

OMG subbu ..raman nok like ishita closness with subbu,

im loving shlok..ashok creep...
mimi love story..

All is going so peacefully

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Cute cute cute update... Haha. I love jealous raman bhalla...
Realy nice. Update s0on.

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