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Posted: 18 years ago

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I find it good plz continue

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Usha

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Posted: 18 years ago

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I think I will post the next part next week.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)

Hello friends. Back with 3rd part. I got many comments. Thank u for that :). Hope u all will like it. If I'm wrong anywhere then plzz tell me about it.

One more thing. Old party doesn't know anything about Mahu's plan. The last para of 2nd part is given below:

Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)

Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…" She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge." All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do." PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno…." Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.

Next day, at 8am, Angles climbed down the stairs. Mahe: Maa We r getting late. Kuch khane ko dona." In kitchen Sumi replied: Laa rahe hoo. Bas do minute." Then she came out with a bowl and a food box. The box had parathas and in bowl it was pickles. Angles did their breakfast. Suddenly Mahek's cell phone started ringing. Accepting the call she whispered: Haa Arjun( Alek from LRL). Kuch pata chala??" Arjun: Ha. Pratham toh kal he Darjeeling me aa cuka hai." Mahu: Fine. Tune tickets toh book kiye hai na??" Arjun: Haa. Don't worry. Woh sab hoo gaya hai." Mahu: Fine me rakhti hoo. Mom ko tu yaha aa aur bata ki hum trip ke liye Darjeeling jaaa rahe hai. Ok??" Arjun agreed and cancelled the call. After canceling the call Vicky enquired Mahu in a low voice: When r we leaving for airport." Kasak: Soon." Then after few seconds Arjun with his GF Tanu( Tanu of Kutumb) reached Sumi's house and said her tht they r getting bored now-a-days, so they have decided to visit Darjeeling. But they need her and others permission. Netheir Sumi nor dadi nor Shanti restricted their children to go anywhere. They knew they can take care of themselves as well as of others. So they agreed and gave permission to visit Darjeeling. Angles had already packed their bags as they knew their parents would agree.
At 2pm they had their flit. They reached Darjeeling at dusk. Arjun had a house in Darjeeling. Mahek had already informed Sumi that they had reached their destination in one piece. Then Mahek made dinner for others. And at night they discussed their plan.
At cock-crow they got ready to start their plan. At 8 Arjun called in CID office from PCO. He asked for PM. When PM took the phone Arjun started crying (in a offend tone): Sahab…." PM( in bold tone): Yes." Arju: Saheb maine maara jaoonga. Woh muhje maar dalengi.." PM: Kon?? Tum kaha hoo??" Arju: Maine shooping center ke paas… "Saying this he cut off the line. Arju turned and smiled at others. Mahek( smiling): Ab aayega mazza."
Parked his car beside the shopping center, PM came out of the car. On the other hand, Angles were sitting in their Scorpio car. They saw PM coming out of his car. Angles had parked their car behind the wall opposite to PM. PM2( Mahu) Came out of the car. She was wearing a black gown which had a slit at the side. It had little bit deep neck. She had worn diamond necklace with similar earrings gifted by dadu to her. Arju and Vicky just kept on staring at her keeping their mouth wide open. Mahek( in stylish tone): How I'm looking???" Vicky and Arju both: Hot and Sexy." Girls too nodded on this comment. Kasak: Di agar PM apko iss roop dekhega toh toh faint hoo jayega." Mahek: I know darling. Well toh maine chalti hoo." Vicky: Kaha???" Arjun: Kyun tu nahi janta??? Tune file nahi padi??'" Vicky: Kunsi file????" Niharika: Well leave it now. Baad me padna. Abhi PM di aap joo." Mahek nods and goes away from there.
PM was working on his mobile. He had worn stylish glasses. His back was facing Mahek. She kept her hand on PM's shoulder. First he looked at her hand and turned towards her to see who she was. He was shocked to see her. He couldn't believe his eyes. He remembered her. He had never forgotten her. He remembered each and every moment. He used to pray that once he could she her. And now his aspiration was full filled. She looked dashing. She too had worn light blue glasses. She was grinning at him. Mahu: Hello." He remembers me, Mahu thought. PM(Smiling): Hi." Mahu; Kya aap ke address kaha hai jante hai????" She could recognize smile fading from PM's face. He was not expecting this type of question. PM: Sorry???'" Mahek: Well dekhiye Maine yaha nayee hoo. Toh kya aap muhje VICEROY HOTEL ka rasta batayenge???" PM; Actually maine yaha khud naya hooo. So Sorry..." Mahek: Oooohhh it's ok. I'll ask someone else." Saying this she turned her attention towards his car. She saw a laptop in PM's car. PM said to her: Wow nice chain(the chain was made of beeds)." Mahu: Ha. Maine kal mele(FAIR) me se liya tha. AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI. Well nice car. Maine chalti hoo." Saying this she went away. PM realized that he should have asked her for lift. When he turned to ask her she had already gone away.
Vicky was watching the whole scene through his binoculars. Vicky: Yaar ye PM kaha gaye." A voice came from behind. Yahi toh hoo." " Tu itne jaldi kisse??" Vicky asked. "Bhagkar aaye hoo" PM2( For mahu PM2) said. Turning to her car she removed a gaun which covered her head and face. It was of black colour. Wearing that guan she asked Komal: Komo tujhe pata hai na ki kya karma hai???" Komal nodded in +tive. Komo went infront of the wall opposite to PM.
Pratham was searching Mahu here and there. He didn't even ask her name. Then suddenly his attention turned towards Komal who was reading a newspaper. She was wearing black skirt and blue top with her hairs open. He had worn brown shoe with hill. She smiled at him and vice- versa. Then he again started searching for Mahu. He had already forgotten y had he came there. Then again he was attracted to see Komal due to her expression. She was just staring at him. She looked stunned. When he asked her what happened through his actions she pointed towards his back. When he again asked her she did the same. When he turned back he saw a man wearing gaun had his laptop. Then he turned towards Komal. Realizing tht what idiotic thing he has done PM again turned back. That man started running. Pm sat in his car. Then he realized that the car's key was missing. He knew it must have been taken by that thief. He came out of this car and started running behind tht thief. Nearly 30mins he was running behind that thief. They were running through fields, roads and now near lake. Then PM was at 10 feet away from that thief. Now btwn them at least 2 feet distance was there. He snatched that thief from his back and threw him towards the tree.
PM turned tht thief and was astonished to observe tht thief's face. It was Mahek( I know u all must have expected her). Shocked PM shouted: TUM!!!!" Mahek gave him a wicked smirk. She praised him with a smile: WOOOOO!!! U run really good. HATS OFF TO U." PM who was still in the state of shock said: Tum ek chorr hoo??? I just don't believe this." Mahu: Tuh ab believe kar loo." PM has holded her both hands. She warned him to leave her hands. But he didn't. Mahu in anger: Leave me." PM: Nahi. Pehle batao mera laptop kaha hai???" She warned him again and again. But all in vain. Now he has crossed his limits. She got enraged and kicked him from down with her legs. Then wht???? " OOOCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The pain was unbearable. He turned towards the lake. And PM2 again kicked him from backside. And he fell inside the lake. And Mahu started running with gr8 speed. Angles came there and stopped the car in front of PM2. She climbed inside the car and it rode off. After few mins PM got up from the lake. He was full drenched. He searched for Mahu but she was no where. Then he came back to his car. He was shocked to find car's keys in the car. But laptop was missing. There was a letter in the car. E opened the letter and read it. It was written: "THNKS FOR COMING." He threw that letter, sat in the car and went away. Mahu and others was watching this and burst out laughing noticing his condition.
PM parked his car in the parking lot and went inside the office. He went inside his cabin where Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit were doing their work. After watching PM's condition everyone burst out laughing. Aryan laughingly: Yaar PM ye kya halat bana rakhi hai apni??? Bahar barish toh nahi diri toh tu itna gila(wet) kaise???" Kunal: Aur bhai uss insaan ka kya hoa jisne aapko phone kiya??' Pratham in anger: Aree ohh gya khade me. Tumhe pata hai aaj maine kissko dekha??" Punit: Yaar humme kaise pata hoga ki tune kissko dekha." Pratham in stern voice: Dekh maine aaj mazak ke mood me nahi hooo. Samjha??" Yash getting up from his seat: Bas. Chood. Ab bata PM tune kissko dekha??" Taking Punit's laptop Pratham opened Mahu's photo taken in Nainital he pointed at her: Isse." All surrounded him. Aryan(with a smie): Kya baat hai yaar. Toh tune usse baat ki." PM: Ha. Tumhe pata hia woh kun hai???" Yash and Punit: Nahi. Kun hai woh." PM; Ek CHORR." All shouted in surprise: Kya!!!!!!!!!" PM told them the whole story what all happened. Punit: Yaar. Kya ladki hai. Lekin uss insaan ka kya hoa."
Suddenly PM's cell started ringing. It showed RIYA CALLING. He answered the call: Ha riya. Bol. Kaisi hai??" Riya: Maine thik hoo. Aap kisse hai??" PM; Ha. I am fine." Riya: What happened bhai?? Any tension??" PM told her everything. PM(moving his hand through his soft hair: Ab pata nahi muhje aapna laptop milega ya nahi." Riya; Milega. Jaroor milega. Aap mele maien kyun nahi jate??" PM: Me mele me jake kya karonga??" Then he suddenly remembers something: AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI.. PM: Muhje pata hai riya ab muhje kaha jana hai. Thnks for reminding me baccha. Me rakta ho?? OK?? Bye." Riya: Bye bhaiya." She cancelled the call and dialed the no. of PM2. Riya: Hi PM. Tera kaam hogaya. Maine bhaiya ko Mele ki baat yaad diyae hai. Ab woh jaroor aayenge. Dekhna." PM2 (smiling)(the call was on speaker): Thnks riyu. Tu janti hai me hum bohot miss kar rahe hai." Riya: Me too guys. Chal me rakti hoo. Ok. Bye." PM2: Bye."
In fair, PM and his bro's were searching Mahu. Atleast PM found her. She was 20 feets away from him. Mahu was chewing chewing gum. She was wearing black panjabi suit. The top was short and pants were parallel. She was wearing ox raise earings, chain and bangles. Her hairs were open. She was looking incredible. His knees were getting weaker and weaker as she was coming closer to him. Not only did PM was losing his control but also others. She was busy playing games in her mobile. She didn't even realize PM. But abruptly KOMU came btwn them. KOMU: Di. Ye loo. Pani ka bottle." PM2 looked at her and took the bottle with a smile thanked her and took a mouthful of water. When KOMU was having a mouthful of water she noticed PM at least 5 feet away from her. PM recognized her. Smiling at PM KOMU said: Di Pratham." Mahu looked in the direction of Pratham. Smile appeared on Mahu's face. Her smile had PM barmy. He lost his control and fell on the ground, head first. Mahu and Komu burst out laughing. Due to her laugh Komu had made a place in Aryan's heart.
PM got up and walked towards Mahu. Still smiling Mahu said: Hello ACP PRATHAM MITTAL. HOW R U?? Kahi lagi toh nahi??" PM: Tuuuum mera naam kaise janti ho??" PM2: Maine toh sab janti ho. Each and everything about u and ur family." Punit came near PM and whispered his ears: Yaar ye toh bohot pohoci hoe cheez hai." Komu: Tum lago se zada hum pohoce hoa cheez hai." PM to PM2: Dekho mera labtop do." PM2: Kunsa laptop???" PM: Jo tumne chori ke thi." PM2: Maine kaha chori ki tumhari laptop." PM: Dekho jhot mat bolo. Maine dekha tumhe mera laptop chori karte hoa." PM2: Any clue??? Sabut???" PM opened his maw to talk but kept silence. He had no clue. PM2: Kya hoa?? Chup kyun baat gaye. Still he kept silence. Saying this PM2 and Komu went towards there car. At least PM broke his silence(to Mahu): Apna naam toh batao." Mahu turned towards him and said: Tumhare peeche jo dukan ka naam hai wahi mera naam hai." Pm turned and read the shop's naam. Turning towards Mahu he said: NANDINI??" Mahu smiled and went towards her car. Angles were watching this sitting in their car. PM noticed them. She sat in the car and went away.

Coming up: PM: Tum DIAMOND CHORI NAHI KAROGI NANDINI." PM2: Accha kun rokega muhje??" PM: I'll stop u" PM2: Ok. Then try it."

I know u all must be wondering yyy Mahek said wrong name to PM. Thtz bcoz she didn't want to reveal her identity that she is Shekar Punj's daughter.

Hope u liked this part. The 3(ii) part will be sent soon. Do comment.

USHA.

Edited by gauriandme - 17 years ago