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Ramya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Read this chapter once again 😉 Lovely ❤️

And the Kaakki Sattai song.. Is it 'Kattikkidum Munne Naama' ? Am I right ?

one small thing.. Shruthi is Pooja's Athai and not Chiththi.. just in case if you are going to use it in further chapters..

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Sulaayini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: ramyvijay
Read this chapter once again 😉 Lovely ❤️

And the Kaakki Sattai song.. Is it 'Kattikkidum Munne Naama' ? Am I right ?

one small thing.. Shruthi is Pooja's Athai and not Chiththi.. just in case if you are going to use it in further chapters..

Actually I'm having doubt with this song and 'kanne kattikava' from old kaaki sattai..

Only Gisel can clear our doubt..

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ramyvijay
Read this chapter once again 😉 Lovely ❤️

And the Kaakki Sattai song.. Is it 'Kattikkidum Munne Naama' ? Am I right ?

one small thing.. Shruthi is Pooja's Athai and not Chiththi.. just in case if you are going to use it in further chapters..

Updated it! Thank you! Stupid of me! Don't know how I overlooked it...

Originally posted by: sulaayini
Actually I'm having doubt with this song and 'kanne kattikava' from old kaaki sattai..
Only Gisel can clear our doubt..

Oh my God! I didn't know about that song till now! LOL! 😆

But from both the songs, the gist is clear, right? That's enough😛!

Now that I think about it, I can imagine the look of horror in Arjun's face if that song from old Kaaki Sattai plays when he and Priya are alone in a room😆...*laughing hysterically and my parents are looking at me like I have gone mad* 😆

Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Gisel ... finally manage to read all the chapters ... am so sad now as the last chapter was to be continued ... avaludhan waiting for next da

still exams are more important. All the best da ...

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vidya

@vidyasuresh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Pls update soon giesel

Iam waiting...

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: vidyasuresh
Pls update soon giesel

Iam waiting...

ya.. me too 😉

but only after your exams... 👍🏼

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Sush

@coffeebuff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

ya.. me too 😉

but only after your exams... 👍🏼

Yup... Me three 😉

I agree... Come back with a bang after all your exams! 😃

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

I m so sorry for the delay...My exams were over but I was kind of held up with what next and settling down over the same. And for worse I m without a laptop. I promise a update by this weekend.

Miss you loads. Real life is indeed hectic! 😛

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Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

*****Part 14
Chapter 15*****Life was perfect in all sense except for the climate of this city. But thankfully she didn't have to worry about it. Her father had taken absolute care that the school she went to had air conditioning, the car, their house; basically comfort in everything except for during her outdoor morning assembly which warranted 15 minutes of sun every day.Phew!*****He watched her from above his newspaper. With her back to him, she was looking out of the window, smiling, her hands working on the towel in her hair. The after shower drops on her neck were begging to be kissed off. Placing his cup of coffee and paper on the dining table, he got up and walked towards her, a playful smirk on his face.*****It had been 5 months and yet his touch sent an awe of blissful shiver through her. She had been thinking about their first time together in Ooty when he came and hugged her from behind. He buried his face in her hair and she smiled even more brightly and leaned against his chest."Office pogala?""Hmm...ponum...ana poga thonaali ae...""Apdi ya, seri enaku clinicku time achu, naan kelamburen," she said trying playfully to be out of his hold. She bit back her smile knowing very well where this was going when his hold on her tightened and a tug pulled her along with him to their room. For all she knew, they were going to be late yet again.*****They hadn't had to go to Dubai. They had arranged everything from here itself. Pooja's TC and Priya's resignation were emailed respectively. Their things in Dubai had been cargoed to India with some of her friends there. They were his in pen and paper too and he was determined not to let them go.It had only been 5 months and he was so accustomed to living with them that he couldn't imagine a life without them. His train of thoughts was cut short when he looked up and saw Priya grumbling to the mirror about him while applying her mascara. He chuckled. They had indeed had fights, small petty fights that all husband and wife's had. But the way they made for it later was pretty worth it. He looked up again, the cute grumbling was still there something about being late because of him. When he caught her eye in the mirror, she stopped and stared into his eyes in the mirror. Then, slowly a small smile grew on her face and for the first time Arjun stood lost for deduction. He was positive her eyes were trying to tell him something, but what was it? Before he could think further, his phone rang.Groaning in frustration, he picked up the call from Jai to be reminded for the hundredth time to come on time to his Wedding Anniversary function that night. Warning him about blocking his number, he cut the call. When he looked up, Priya was gone. Sighing he looked at the phone twisting the charm, their name in rice inside some liquid, attached to his phone. He smiled remembering this as her third month anniversary gift to him. Her month anniversary gifts were small, cute and thoughtful. Arjun never gave her gifts on that basis, but man really? Wasn't his credit card for anytime use speaking more? He was a man and typically he didn't know what women preferred. But he would learn wouldn't he? He had a lifetime to. For now he would just guess what he would get for their fifth month anniversary. With the fourth month gift being an autograph from his favorite musician, who was apparently her patient; he was definitely looking forward to tonight; Friday, the thirteenth.****To be continued...So sorry for the late update and small chapter...I will try my best to update frequently...it is quite difficult with the mobile alone. I'm sorry.
Part 16
*****

Edited by Gisel - 9 years ago