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Posted: 9 years ago
Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu
kahani ab tak

Maan propose madhu, but she said no to him. Daadi fix his marriage with geet, he want deny to this marriage but due to her health, he said yes to her.

Geet loves maan so much.

 

Ye toh khud geet bhi nhi janti kbse hai maan uske dil mein

Kbse chahti hai wo usko

Na jaane dil mein kbse hai tu

 

She is so much happy, she gets his love. Maan tell all truth about his love to her, but she really heard the whole truth.

Maaneet engagement & mehendi rashm happened, after this sangeet cereamony all enjoyed with happiness...

Risabh , avinash, arjun organised bachelor party for maan, madhu also make plan for spoiling his bachelor party.

In bachelor party , all mothers came and see her husband and sons busy in dancing with dancers.

Madhu plan successes. But due to all this geet became angry, after this maaneet spend some time together. This is last meeting of maaneet before marriage.

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Maaneet discussing or talking about childhood memories, all gang came and put the break on conversation.

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Maaneet take 7 vows in front of holy fire and tie in one knot...  But destiny take drastic change in geet life... All happiness became lie ...

Maan not give any right to geet as wife...

Next day of marriage, geet complete the roshai rashm and get shagun from all and maan give one promise to her...

Maan "geet tum jb chaho kuch bhi maang sakti ho "

Geet goes to handa house for pagphere rashm... here she share all pain with madhu... madhu wants help her but she deny...

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How madhu see her geetu in pain ... she take help from risabh, risabh organize get together ... Here all gathered .. but madhu not came...

Risabh try to find out the reason... in talk maan tell about one incident which happen on marriage day... Here maan hear madhu & risabh talk... but not fully...

He misunderstood ...

 

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Misunderstanding going on... and maan take one decision... he give divorce paper to geet ... and geet for his happiness sign the papers...

 

Geet tell about his promise and she want :- Maan jb tak humara divorce nhi hota

Hum kissi ko kuch nhi batayenge

Aur aap mujhe is ghar se bhi jaane ke liye nhi kahenge

Jitne bhi pal hai mein unhe Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana bnke jeena chahti hu

 

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Woh Ek Din

Concept

One day change the two lives forever, one night take close two unknown people so close to each other...

Now, how both take U-Turn and take vows with other person...


       Story so far

In this story , one day play a major role in maaneet life...that's one day changed both life... geet going back home for her marriage after completing education...and in mid she caught in some problems, and he saved her... He helped her to reach her home...

This one day changed both life... she fall in love with him, not know until to her marriage day , her baraat come at the door, and her heart so restlessness for unknown person...why ...????? How...???

 Many questions raised, but no answer , now her heart only wants him , she loves him, how she fall in love with him ...she also not know...

Sayad pyaar asa hi hota hai

Koi anjaana kb dil mein sma jaaye

Pata hi nhi chlta

.

She back out from marriage... And her dulha too...

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Another side, same happen with maan , he also back out from own marriage...

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Both souls are restless, but both not know, destiny already going to make couple and both back out

Maan unwed geet

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Maan find out soon about geet , and realize kash ye ek baar photo dekh leta geet ki

He reached handa mansion and want to talk to geet , but her mother denied...you both denied from this marriage , so what left ???

Yes, geet don't want marry with him...

He left for delhi ...

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Geet also goed delhi for some time, and for pinky help she get job In KC as her PA.

She take his number from resort where both spent the night... but she not know her number slip changed with pinky number slip... she get to know he is married...

Her heart breaks...

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At office, she meet with him, one side she is so happy to see in front of own, another side reality for her he is married...

Maan also so happy to see her here, and make promise to own self, one day she surely falls in love with him...

With the passing time he knows about geet misunderstanding and truth too, she also not sees his picture and she understanding he is married...

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SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

Concept 

She admire him ...like him...  she not know him personally... but after this her heart beating fast , if anyone take his name... its infatuation or beyond this...

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Its only infatuation ...ya... it's happen in this teen age...

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But why she thinks so much about him...

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He is dream man for her...


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 this is simple love story of one sided love... she get the love or not...if destiny give her own love...he ever love back to her or not

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Summary

She loves him, but he loves her elder sister...she stop own emotions and lost own self in her marriage preparations and exam... in sangeet function he know about her feeling towards Ash...he not loves her, she match his status, his life style, carry easily with him... she shocked listen this , she admire him , love him and his thinking about so important relation this...

But both not know, destiny playing own game with maan & geet ...

Finally marriage day come, and ash run from this marriage... due to circumstances or someone planning geet weds with maan ... he knows about ash , and own marriage with geet ... Know about on wedding night...and shocked to listen about ash betrayal...

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Now what maan do

He accepts her geet or punishes her due to ash...

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jaane dil mein kbse hai tu..


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Maan propose madhu, but she said no to him. Daadi fix his marriage with geet, he want deny to this marriage but due to her health, he said yes to her.

Geet loves maan so much.

 

Ye toh khud geet bhi nhi janti kbse hai maan uske dil mein

Kbse chahti hai wo usko

Na jaane dil mein kbse hai tu

 

She is so much happy, she gets his love. Maan tell all truth about his love to her, but she really heard the whole truth.

Maaneet engagement & mehendi rashm happened, after this sangeet cereamony all enjoyed with happiness...

Risabh , avinash, arjun organised bachelor party for maan, madhu also make plan for spoiling his bachelor party.

In bachelor party , all mothers came and see her husband and sons busy in dancing with dancers.

Madhu plan successes. But due to all this geet became angry, after this maaneet spend some time together. This is last meeting of maaneet before marriage.

.

Maaneet discussing or talking about childhood memories, all gang came and put the break on conversation.

.

Maaneet take 7 vows in front of holy fire and tie in one knot...  But destiny take drastic change in geet life... All happiness became lie ...

Maan not give any right to geet as wife...

Next day of marriage, geet complete the roshai rashm and get shagun from all and maan give one promise to her...

Maan "geet tum jb chaho kuch bhi maang sakti ho "

Geet goes to handa house for pagphere rashm... here she share all pain with madhu... madhu wants help her but she deny...

.

 

How madhu see her geetu in pain ... she take help from risabh, risabh organize get together ... Here all gathered .. but madhu not came...

Risabh try to find out the reason... in talk maan tell about one incident which happen on marriage day... Here maan hear madhu & risabh talk... but not fully...

He misunderstood ...

 

.

Misunderstanding going on... and maan take one decision... he give divorce paper to geet ... and geet for his happiness sign the papers...

 

Geet tell about his promise and she want :- Maan jb tak humara divorce nhi hota

Hum kissi ko kuch nhi batayenge

Aur aap mujhe is ghar se bhi jaane ke liye nhi kahenge

Jitne bhi pal hai mein unhe Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana bnke jeena chahti hu

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Season 2



concept on page 1

poem on page 4

prologue on page 5

part 1 on page 17

part 2 on page 26

part 3 on page 36

part 4 on page 41

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See below posts too...for seeing another completed ff's with season 2

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Wo ek din


Concept

One day change the two lives forever, one night take close two unknown people so close to each other...

Now, how both take U-Turn and take vows with other person...


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She sits in front of mirror, her friends teasing her talks about her would be husband, but she lost in own thoughts...

Her heart taking back few days ago, where she meets with him...she coming back home after her trip...

Geet : friends, I never forget this moments which spend with you all ...

Friends: we too

Geet : acha tum sb aa rhe ho na Meri shaadi mein

One said: - why you marring so earlier

He is unknown for you

You never meet with him

Geet : relax nisha

Arranged marriage mein asa hi hota hai

Nisha :- yaar phir bhi At least tujhe usse phle milna toh chaiye tha Dekhne mein kaisa hai About his behavior, his hobbies...Etc...

Geet : tu chill kr Dekhne mein acha hi honga Tum sb aa rhe ho na

Tamanna : of course yaar

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Geet timely reached airport of Mumbai and caught the flight for delhi... Then she takes bus for hoshiyapur...

From here one day journey start ...

Bus stop after two hour near to dabba...

Conductor: bus yaha half an hour rukengi

Uske baad direct hoshiayapur

 (I have no idea about time distance...its only imaginary)

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She felt someone stalking her, she turn and found no one...actually geet going washroom, which is behind the dabba...

She reached near door, before she open the door, someone pulled her by wrist and placed the hand on her mouth & take her in side of dark jungle...

She not understand, it's all happen so fast...he pushed her on mud, then someone try to kiss her forcibly, and other one held her legs tightly...she feared so much, she wriggle under beneath of him ...she panicky try to shouted loudly" help", but before this ...He tied her duppata on her mouth... she slap him hardly, he angered so much, he raise the hand slapping her, she closed both eyes, she loose all hope in this minute, she not getting what she do... before his hand touch her, she throw mud in his eyes, another one try to caught her , she bite on his hand and runs from here...

She running past few minutes but not get right path reached to dabba... She collided with someone; she feared she caught by goons again, now... how she escaped from this situation... her take step back, her foot hit with stone, before she fall on ground, he pulled her by waist and save her from falling, but she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He pushed her forcibly and she fall on ground...her fear surrounded again...but He turn to leave, then she realize if he is goon, he never turn to leave , so its means he is not goon...

Before he goes and she stuck in this jungle, she softly said "sorry"

She tries to stand, but she felt pain in foot...

Geet : aahh

He turn and bend to her level and try to see her foot, but due to darkness both felt only presence but not able to see each other...

She again tries to stand ...but he stops her and shouted on her "you are mad"...

Geet : aap asa kyun kh rhe hai

He : tumhare parr mein jb chot aayi hai toh khdi hone ki kya jaroorat hai

Geet : bina khade huye koi kaise chl sakta hai

He scoops her into arms and she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He : chup

His angered voice makes stop saying further words...

He : ab ek sbd aur kaha toh chod dunga yhi pe Fir yhi rhehna

Geet : tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rhe ho Mujhe ghar jaana hai

He :- wo toh tumhe yaha is waqt jungle mein aane se phle sochna chaiye tha

Geet : mein nhi aayi

He : fir tum yaha kya kr rhi ho

She not understanding, she tells the truth or not... she suffers horrible instances little time ago...

He : bolne ka kast karengi aap

Geet : wo mein

.

Wo mein

He : bakri ho

Geet : nhi baat krni mujhe tumse

He : as you wish

Bina kuch bataye tum ghar kaise puchongi

She said after few minutes...

Geet : yaha pass mein koi dabba tha Jaha humari bus ruki thi

He : kaunsi bus

Geet : hoshiyarpur jaane wali

He : hmm

Geet : mujhe hoshiyarpur jaana hai

He : hmm

Geet : hmmm Ke alawa kuch bolo na

He : tumhe dabbe tk chodne jaa rha ho

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He : bus hum puchne wale hai

She sees in his direction and then to him... First time she noticing his looks, his well built abs, broad chest which showing clearly due to opened his first three button of shirt, but his eyes hided...light not reaches properly to his face...she want to sees his face properly...

He sees her and sees innocence on her face, her eyes like Deep Ocean, he want to lost in this deepness & waves of dusk unfurled in her hair... in other words her hair made effect like sunset...

Aagosh mein khone ko ji chahata hai

Usse aur karib se chune ko ji chahata hai

Her sweet voice broke his thought...

Geet : aapka naam kya hai

Before he says something, one person came: - aap dono yaha is waqt kya kr rhe hai

He : woh hum rasta bhool gye the

Aap humari help kr sakte hai

Person: khiye

Both enquire about the bus, and get to know bus leaves half an hour ago...and next bus came after 3 hours...

Geet : mera sara samaan bus mein chla gya

He : relax Inke par mein chot lagi hai Koi medicine mil jaayengi

Person : aap jb tak waha jaake baithye Mein dekhta hu

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He makes sit carefully on cot... and she is busy drools him openly...

Geet : perfect

He : perfect ...for what

Geet : wo ... Kuch nhi

He : tum yaha baitho

Geet : tum kaha jaa rhe ho

He : garam pani lene

He understand she not getting ...he said "tumahre liye"

He : garam pani se parr ka shek krne se tumhe aaram milenga

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 She met with him few times back, but her feeling she known him many years ago...

Abhi toh mile the hum

Par na jaane kyun mahsoos ho raha tha asa

Hum jaante hai ...

Pechante hai

Ek dusre ko

Na jaane kbse

MG SS - Woh Ek Din


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Khawaish...pyaar ki 

Season 1

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Love is everything

Love'...love is something...but not more important than ______?

Ek ke liye pyar hi sbkuch hai'...aur dusre ke liye pyaar kuch toh hai...par importance nhi hai uski life mein

Uske liye mien kuch bhi kr sakti hu'...

Uske liye kuch krne se mujhe kya fayda honga'

Pyaar mein fayda nuksaan nhi hota

Fir pyaar mein insaan time kyun waste kre'

 

Ye hai hmare maan and geet

geet want happy life with maan...but our maan have some dream... those dreams more important than geet...


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Khawaish Season 2 

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KHAMOSHI...lakin kb tak...
Season 1

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Geet 

Nhi bhula payi unhe mein in panch saalo mein,
Nhi mita payi ''''un yaado ke nishaniyo ko''''
Choda tha ye desh'''apno ke liya
Pr sbse ajij apna to yhi chut gya
Unhone ek baar bhi sawal nhi kiya
Ek baar bhi nhi pucha
Maine apne pyaar se upar har ek rishte ko rakha
Unhe chod ke chli gyi''.
Ye sawalo ki khamoshiya hi to hai bs hmare darmiya'''''



Maan

Saline mischief in your eyes,
Small insolences,
Laughing in your smile,
Waves of dusk unfurled in your hair,
I will not forget you,
Not untill I cease to breathe,
Not untill I cease to live

You took your hand away,
You turned your shadow face pale,
You never glanced this way
You, I will not forgive
Not untill I cease to breathe
Not untill I cease to live




Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiyan
Teri hansi ki beparwaah gustakhiyaan
Teri zulfon ki leharaati angdaiyaan
Nahi bhoolunga main
''''''''''''''.

Tera haath se haath chhodna
Tera saayon se rukh modna
Tera palat ke phir na dekhna
Nahin maaf karunga main
'''''''''''''''.

Baarishon mein bedhadak tere naachne se
Baat baat pe bewajah tere roothne se
Chhoti chhoti teri bachkani badmashiyon se
Mohabbat karunga main
'''''''''''''''''.

Tere jhoothe kasme vaadon se
Tere jalte sulagte khwabon se
Teri be-raham duaaon se
Nafrat karunga main

''''''''''''''.

Usse kis hq se rokta

Kbhi maine kuch kha hi hi nhi ussse
Mujhe lagta tha smjhti hai wo meri khamoshiyo ki jubaan'''''

Pr uske is kadam ne mujhe galat kyun sabit kiya''''..
 
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Kya pyaar karonge mujhse

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I start this story from where maan lost his memory...he forget beloved wife geet...

In conference room, he knows about the marriage with geet..he blame geet but dev tell the whole truth to him...

Geet is your wife bro...geet leave the mention but maan stop her...but not accept her as wife...


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thread 2

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Kya pyaar karonge mujhse is first phase of this story..where you read geet wait for maan or his love...for his happiness she scarifies own happiness ...

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kaisa ye pyaar hai
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khte hai pyaa mein hadde nhi hote
pyaar un sb hado se upar hota hai
kya ho
jb koi apna , kissi aapne ke liye
khud ko kho de
ek asa pyaar jo pura hoke bhi pura na ho saka


Geet ye tumhara kaisa pyaar hai,
Jo tumne khud ke liye maut,
Aur meri liye zindagi ki sja chuni, 

Maan apki zindagi, mere liye sabse anmol hai,
Geet jitni baar bi janam le,
Ydi usse apne maan ki zindagi aur khud ki zindagi mein se kissi ko chunna honga,
To wo apne maan ko hi chunegi.

Geet kyun kiya mujhse itna pyaar

Maan pyaar khud ke bas me thode hota hai,
Pyar kiya nhi jata, ho jata hai,
Is dil ne apko chaha,
Aur sb kuch apko sop diya

Geet maan ki zindagi tumhare bina adhuri hai, ab wo kaise jiyenga

Maan aap akele kaha ho,
Aapke sath mera pyaar hamesha rahenga

Dhoop ki phli kiran ki tarah,
Phoolo me bikhri khusboo ki tarah,
Saawan me barsi boondo ki tarah
Raat me aakash me chaye taaro ki tarah
Aur aapke dil me basi dadkano ki tarah

To fir apse dur kha huyi maan,
Mein to aapki perchai hu,
Aapse juda kaha hu maan

Geet tumne apni zindagi, mere sapne ki khatir kyun kurban kar di

Maan wo sapna apke akele ka kaha tha,
Wo hamara sapna hai,
Hamara pyaar,
Hamari jaan,
Hamare pyaar baare palo ki khushiyama tohfa

Daadi: maan bete khud ko sambaliye

Maan : daadimaa kaise khud ko smjhayu,
Geet ne asa kyun kiya,
Usne mujhe kyun nhi kaha,
Wo kyun nhi smjhi,
Uski zindagi, akele ki nahi,
Meri hai
Tu usne asa fasla kyun liya

Daadi: bete unhe kuch nhi honga

Maan : daadimaa use kuch nhi ho sakta
Uske bina maan kuch nhi h,
Geet tumhare bina maan kuch nhi h,
Kuch bi nhi hai
Mujhe nhi padna uska ye letter,
Geet ye tumhara
Kaisa ye pyaar hai

Geet apne maan ko kbhi sja nhi de sakti, Maan kash mein apko sb bta pati 

Andekhi anjani se ye mohabbat hai,
Chupke se milte dilo ki ye aahat hai,
Jis pyaar ke sab deewane,
Jo kho gya, wohi jaane,
Baatein kitabo ki,
Raatein hai khawabo ki,
Hr khwab ijhaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai
Kaisa ye pyaar hai

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kyun na ab pura kiya jaaye is mohabbat ki adhuri dastaan ko 



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