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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept and prologue... Update soon
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Nice prologue. Waiting for the first part
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Congrats on your new story...
nice start...
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HY FRIENDS

I know some friends so angry on me after reading prologue ...hehe ... but I loved it...


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Part 1

Maan kaha jaa rhe ho

Maan : madhu

Thanks

.

Par mein yaha nhi rh sakta na

.

Tum toh sb jaanti ho

Risabh : maan

Kb tak bhagta rahenga

.

Ghar jaa maan

Maafi maang le

Aunty se

.

Maan : risabh

Maa

Toh meri taraf dekhti tk nhi hai

.

.

Unhe mere wha hone se takleef hoti hai

.

Madhu : kb tak tum dono ase jiyonge

.

Kb tak tum kaam ke bahane

Ek sher se dusre sher bhagte rahonge

.

Jbki tumhe pata hai

Sakoon tumhe bs apne ghar mein

Geet ke sath milenga

.

Maan : madhu

Mere pass in swalo ka koi jwab nhi hai

.

Take care my princess

.

Aur ha

Apne mood swings control kro thoda

Aur meri geetika ko pareshan mt kiya kro

.

Madhu : tum bhool rhe ho

Wo meri beti hai

.

Maan : acha

Mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha

.

Madhu : you

.

Rishabh dekha tumne isse

Jb dekho

Topic change krta rhta hai

.

Maan : fatty

Take care

.

Aur ha

Risabh ka khana mt khaya kro

Bechara

Kitna patla ho gya hai

.

.

Madhu : jb tum baap banoge na

Tb mein dekhti hu

.

Geet kaise tumhe apni ungli pe nachati hai

.

Maan : ussi ka toh intzaar kr rha hu madhu

.

Thanks both of you

Now am getting late

Flight hai meri

**********

Main jahaan rahoon main kahin bhi hoon
teri yaad saaath hai


main jahaan rahoon main kahin bhi hoon
teri yaad saaath hai


So mrs. Khurana

What's your decision?

Maan : geet bola na judge ko

Wo tumse puch rhi hai

He is so excited but geet words break him totally...

Geet : madam

I want divorce

.

Maan : geet what you saying

Judge : mr. khurana

Aap inhe disturb mt kriye

Inhe bolne dijiye

.

Mrs. Khurana

That's your last decision

Geet : yes madam

I want divorce

Mein ab inke sath nhi rhehna chahti hu

kisi se kahoon ke nahi kahoon
ye jo dil ki baat hai

Kehne ko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai

per chhup ke is dil mein tanhaai palti hai

bas yaad saath hai

Geet : maan yhi thik tha

Ek unwanted relationship mein rhke kya fayda

.

Maan : kya tum khush ho

Geet : of course maan

.

Maan I want to see your smile last time

.

Maan : geet tum asa nhi kr sakti ho

Geet ; maan divorce aapne hi maanga tha

Maine toh bs diya hai

.

Sayad yhi hum dono ke liye thik hai


teri yaad saath hai
teri yaad saath hai
teri yaad saath hai
main jahaan rahoon main kahin bhi hoon
teri yaad saaath hai

Why geet

asa decision kyun liya

.

Dekho aaj mein kitna khush hu

Par tum nhi ho

Meri khushi dekhne ke liye

Mere pass

.

.

*******

Bye mumma

Bye papa

Geet : bye beta

Jb teacher kahe

Lunch krne ko

Toh bilkul aaram se khana

Koi jaldi mt krna

.

Aur job hi teacher sikhaye

Usse dhayn se sunana

.

.

Aur

Koi aapko pareshan kre

Turant teacher ko batana

.

Sia only nodding...

Harshad : sia beta aap jaayo

.

Aapki mumma

Ek baar shuru hoti hai

Toh rukna kha hai bhool jaati hai

.

Geet : sia beta

Sia : bye

Geet : apna dhyan rakhna

Harshad : wo school gyi hai

Kissi jung mein nhi gyi

Geet : uda lo

Mera mjak

.

Mein di se aapki sikayat krungi

Fir dekhna

Wo aapko kaise daatati hai

.

He sadly smiled to her & said uski dant sunane ke liye mere kaan taras rhe hai geet

Geet : wo mein

Harshad : its ok

Geet

.

Jyada mt socho

Ab hume office chalna chaiye

Geet : hmm

********

She picked his frame and wished him happy birthday

.

Happy birthday Maan

Babaji aapko har khushi de

Bs har din yhi dua krti hai

Aapki geet

.

.

Kahin to dil mein yaadon ki ek sooli gad jaati hai

kahin har ek tasveer bahut hi dhundhli pad jaati hai

.

Geet tum chahe ke bhi

Mujhse durr nhi jaa sakti

.

jaa sakti hu maan

Aapki khushi ke liye mein aapse durr bhi jaa sakti hu

.

.

really

.

.

: yes

Maan

For me your happiness always comes first

And for this

I do anything

Mujhe aapse dur bhi jaana honga

Toh mein jaayungi

Maan maine aapna promise pura kiya

Am so happy for you and madhu

.

Somewhere a stake of memories penetrates the heart

somewhere every picture gets blurred

.

Oh god

Why this tears coming

She hurriedly wipes own tears ... And again put smile own

face...

.

.

**********

Geet : Harshad

Wo mujhe kuch kaam hai

Mein jaa rhi hu

.

Payal se maine kh diya hai

Wo sia ko pick kr lengi

.

Harshad : tum thik ho

Geet : ha

Am perfectly fine

.

Mujhe kya honga

*********

Harshad : geet

I know

Tum maan ko miss kr rhi ho

.

And I know

Tum kha gyi ho

.

********

One side geet doing pooja for his well being and another side,

in India no one wish him on birthday except daadi...

Daadi : happy birthday beta

.

Aap humare pass aa jaaiye na

.

Maan : daadi

Mein aaya

Toh maa chali jaayengi ghar chodke

Jo mein nhi dekh sakta

Daadi : geet ka kuch pata chala

Maan : nhi daadi

.

Wo jha bhi hai

Khush hai

Apni duniya mein

Daadi : aap kb tak ase rahenge

Maan : daadi

Meeting hai meri

Mein aapse baad mein baat krta hu

.

Bye

Take care

.

.

koi nai duniya ke naye rangon mein khush rehta hai
koi sab kuchh paa ke bhi ye man hi man kehta hai
kehne ko saath apne ek duniya chalti hai
per chhup ke is dil mein tanhaai palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai
teri yaad saath hai
teri yaad saath hai
teri yaad saath hai

*********

i hope you all like the starting ...share your thoughts...

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

😊
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#98
It's nice starting. One misunderstanding made maneet apart from each other. But still they are living in each other's heart . waiting for next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc start ,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh god Maaneet are separated nice prologue thank you

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