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Posted: 9 years ago
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#22

do pyar karne wale kabhi juda nahi hote ,
sirf sarir se juda hote hai
mann se nahi
kya malum ek din zingi ke do rahe pe phirse wo mil jaye...?
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jise hai kho jana milte hi kyun hai...?
agar chod na tha hath
to pakd te hi kyun hai..?

abhi abhi to hua sache pyar ka ehsas?
daman chudake wo chale jate kyun hai?

unlogono ki judai pe
do aks bikhar gaye
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.
.
phir dil ne kaha
ye to saruat hai yaro
picture to abhi baki hai.
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phirse milne ki tamana mein alwida karte hai,
hum mile na mile phir bhi milne ki dua karte hai

chahe hum kal na rahe,
chahe hum kal na mile
par lekin ye wadiya
humesha yenhi pe rahegi
aur doharati rahe gi pyar ki har dastan..
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phir milenge chalte chalte.

************
credit goes to idunno👏
Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: susm

Congrats for new story. Waiting for prolong n CS.


😃

tks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Geet

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Geet

Geet : ji aayi

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He : geet where is my wallet

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Aur wo file bhi nhi mil rhi hai

Jispe mein raat ko work kr raha tha

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Why you standing like that

Search my things

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Geet : phle aap bol lo

Uske baad mein kuch kahu

He : bolo

Geet : aapka wallet drawer mein rakha hai

Yaha toh aapne dekha hi nhi honga

.

Am right

.

Aur ha

Rhi us file ki baat

Wo already maine aapke bag mein rakh di hai

He : thanks geet

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Another voice comes from door

Agar tum na hoti

Toh humara kya hota geet

.

Right bhai

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Geet : sia ko ready kiya tumne

She : yes boss

Geet : ab tum yaha kyun khadi ho

Jaake khud bhi fatafat ready ho ho jaayo

She : geet

Geet : payal

Go

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Bhai

Aap isse kaise jhelte ho

Geet : tum harshad ki fikr mt kro

Jaake ready ho

Payal : yes boss

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Sia : mu__ma

Geet take her sia in arms and kissed her both cheek...

Geet : so meri princess ready hai school jaane ke liye

Sia : ha

Harshad : princess ko papa

Khud school chodne jaayenge

Sia :mu_ma aa_p

Geet : mumma bhi papa ke sath apni princess ko school chodne jaayengi

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Dad_u

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Dad_u

He : geetika beta

Dad_u yaha hai

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He takes her in lap...

Kya huya

Geetika : mein mom ke sath nhi rh sakti

He : kya kiya aaj mom ne

Geetika : mujhe choco nhi khani di

He : oh

Ye toh bhut bdi problem ho gyi

.

Dad mom ko daatenge

Geetika : schi

He : muchi

.

She : geetika

Apna dhood khatam kro abhi

Geetika : dadu

He : wo baad mein pe lengi

She : geetika

Idher aayo abhi

.

Aur tum

Isse jyada ser pe mt chadayo

He : madhu

She : maan isse phle mujhe gussa aaye

Apni is ladli beti se kaho

Ye dood pe le

Maan : geetika beta

Phle milk khatam kro

Fir dadu pakka choco denge aapko

Madhu : maan

Maan : madhu bachi hai

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Madhu : meri toh is ghar mein koi suntan hi nhi hai

Kro sb apni manmaani

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I hope you all like this starting...waiting for your views...


see concept on page 1

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
nice ...maan ko geet ke sath hi ache lagte hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awesome start dear. Waiting for update. Plzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
congrats priya dear for the new story
nice concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice prologue.
Is this season 2 of jaane dil me kabse hai tu.
Edited by kabslocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
congrats for new ff
nice prologue...
geet with harshad n maan with madhu n sia n geetika...ummm ye dono mumma aur papa ki princesses ...
pata nahi ye rishabh kaha gaya!!
waiting for part 1

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