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Posted: 10 years ago
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Appologies for errors, can;t be bothered about auditing,sorry




N.B._-- Chapter 3 and Chapter 5 has embedded music files
CHapter3---, in aankho me tum...
CHapter 5--- SO SO BAAR MAINE JANAM LIYE
so using Falsh player is gud, if in ur in reach of one

Chapter 1

Jalal ne tirchi najar se uss canteen corner me baithi ladki ki taraf dekha, woh abhi bhi usse uphaas bhari najaron se dekh rahi thi, Jalal ko bahut gussa aya

, aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua, kissi ladki ne usse ignore mara ho, yah to yeh ladki college me nayi hai, yah phir visitor hai

"Jalal yeh lo- party ka schedule" Ruk ki awaz ne uski concentration todi, woh log canteen me party celebrations decide kar rahe the.Jalal ko uski heaps GFs ne Gher rakha tha. Yeh unka college me last day tha. Jalal was the Gold-medalist. College ki hurek ladki uski bahut close frind yani ki GF thi. But he was not interested in any one.Otherwise everyeavery girl was fida on him, and ho bhi kyun na. Woh bade industrial ka beta, studies me Gold-medalist aur physique to no comparison and last but not least bada aur nek dil, hamesha her needy ki help k liye ready.

Uske father ki death ho gayi thi when he was only four, From that time, his mother was luking all the industries with help from General Manger. Woh to bus aaj k din ka hi intjaar kur rahi thi, aaj woh Jalal se uski shadi k bare baat karegi, Woh janti thi, Jalal ki uski cousin RuK se achi banti hai, dono ki shadi ho jaye to Gud, waise bhi Jalal abh 20 yrs ka ho Jayega, Usne Socha, aaj woh Jalal se is k bare me jarur baat karegi

Party apne full swings me thi.. Dance k naam per hur girl Jalal se chipak jana chahti, per Jalal , uski najren to kuch aur hi duund rahi thi, woh ladki jo canteen me corner me akeli baithi usko uphaas bhari najron se dekh rahi, but woh usko kahin nahi dikh rahi thi. Yeh mere saath kya ho raha hai, Jalal ne socha.

Aaj-tuk kissi ko usne nahi duunda tha, sub usko duundte the, woh ladki me aisa kya tha, ki wo usse dobara dekhna chahta hai

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Paradise_1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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di I can't read bohat chota dikh rha hai...
phone se mujhe dikhai nhi deraha!
please likhke do na... Screen captures mat do :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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di I can't read bohat chota dikh rha hai...
phone se mujhe dikhai nhi deraha!
please likhke do na... Screen captures mat do :([/QUOTE
OK sonu, will do that, woh I was trying to write in hindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vtui

thank u di!! I'll be waiting to read it :))

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Posted: 10 years ago
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di even im reading through phone its difficult to read hindi part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow dii nice start.
Jalal ki tirchi nazar jo ko dhund rahi hai
Aur yahan uski ammi ruk se saath uski shaadi ke baare mein soch rahi hai 😆
Dii continue soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love start di I zoomed nd read it... its superb... di...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank U Avika, Raksha, Sonu, for appreciation. I hope I will be able to complete it. 😉Updated in word, took some time sorry,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vtui

Thank U Avika, Raksha, Sonu, for appreciation. I hope I will be able to complete it. 😉Updated in word, took some time sorry,


Dont be sorry dii
Its ok
Continue soon pls
Its interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u so so much Di!!!!
superb start!!!🤗
jalal has his eyes for jo and his mom wants him to marry ruku... Us ruku ko jaldi bahar pheko di... Hope is mom doesn't come in between the ja jo...
thanks for pm :))
continue soon!!!

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