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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vtui

Thank U Avika, Raksha, Sonu, for appreciation. I hope I will be able to complete it. 😉Updated in word, took some time sorry,

arey sorry kyu bolaing???😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow its really superb luved evn if its ur 1st attempt bt stil really gd rathr interesting 2 read more do continue want 2 knw wat happns next... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CONTD UPDATE 1😉, Galati Muaf karna
Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

wow its really superb luved evn if its ur 1st attempt bt stil really gd rathr interesting 2 read more do continue want 2 knw wat happns next... 😉

Thank u so much Harshu for appreciation☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

arey sorry kyu bolaing???😆😉

OK return my sorry😃, BTW I m trying to post on next page update1. EK problem hai ki muje apni hi SS padk bahut boriat ho rahi hai so mai bina audit k daal rahin hu , so girls please bear with me😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update 1 on page 3
Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avika444


Dont be sorry dii
Its ok
Continue soon pls
Its interesting

U think so Avika, to jaldi finish karti huun, muje boring lag raha hai😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Click for different chapter

CHAPTER 2

Jalal stepped inside the house, 3am hone ko the.
Party khatam hone me nahi aa rahi thi. Girls usse chodne ko ready nahi thi,
waise bhi usse yeh party-time acha lagta tha. Time-pass ho jata tha, but
aandher kahin woh apne-aap ko bahut lonely feel karta tha. May be kissi ko nahi
lagta tha, ki itni GFs hote hue bhi, jaise uska dil khali tha, usme jaise koyi
fit nahi ho rahi thi. Ruk uski bahut achi friend thi, but heart me nahi ja payi
thi. " Sir, aapki coffe" uski personal baai ne uske bed side stool per coffee
rakhte hue bola. Woh janti thi, Jalal sone se pehle coffee jarur leta hai</font>


Morning Jalal utha to uska sir heavy tha. Tabhi
Hamida(Jalal's MUM) room me aayi aur pyar se uska sir sahlane lagi. Usne bataya
ki kaise sub industrial work acha chal raha hai, bus woh Jalal ki marriage kar
dena chahti hai soon as possible, "waise bhi RUk ki ammi bhi yahi chahti hai"
hamida said</font>


Jalal isk liye ready nahi tha, usne saaf lafjon me
apni maan ko bola ki woh shaadi nahi karega, kissi bhi ladki k saath, RUK uski
achi friend hai, but not that he want to marry her. She is not her love and
probably her love don't exist on this earth. But na jane kyun yeh sub kahte
waqt usse kul wali ladki yaad ho aayi. Hamida chup rahi. Young ladka tha, bahas
karna fizul tha. Aligarh ki June ki garmi thi, but A/C rooms and own generators
, A/C cars ki wajah se Jalal Ke liye Garmi Sardi me koyi khaas pharak nahi tha.
Unki industries Mumbai aur Calcutta tuk faili hui thi. Uske alawa sikri me heaps farming
land thi. Jalal ka dil khokhla tha. Woh iss paise ki duniya se door natural word
enjoy karna chahta tha.</font>


Six Months later::


Hamida was doing preparation to celebrate jalal's
Bday, but Jalal told her that he does want all that party things now. Some-how
he has lost interest in all that. Also he told her that next day they wud be
leaving for their farm-house, and there will be staying there from now-on
wards. He wud set-up office there to manage industries and farms from one place.
Hamida agreed and all packing was started soon


That was his first day on his farming land. Door
door tuk faily hari bhari jameen. After setting up complete office, he left
office in hands of his faithful employees. Abhi to woh apni land dekhne nikla
tha. Usko nature and Art se bahu love
tha. WOh to uss natural scene ki beauty me kho gya tha, Miles of green grass,
surrounded by small hills. Yamuna se aati kal-kal ki awaz, cool fresh air, usne
deep saans li.. Suddenly uske kano me music ki awaz aayi aur laga jaise air me
hajaron roses ki fragrance bhar gayi ho.</font>


Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its really interesting so jalal luvs nature...jaldi jaldi jodha aur jalal ka meeting karwao I mean joja meeting and having sum convo... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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di tum story likh rahi ho 😃 ...wait ab tutor aane wale hain...unke jaane ke baad main padhti hu 😃 ...btw thanks di :-)

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