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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mushat

rajjjdi mera jawab haii .
Update plz 🤣🤣
at least marriage hi dikhado
aapse kuch aur demand nhin karungiii ..mujhe sharm aati hai 🤣🤣


Yup, sure week-end me,and tumari sharam ka meaning mai ache se samjati huun🤣, chul GN
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

CONGRATS for your first story Rajni🥳

Awesome concept ... Very interestikg👍🏼


Read all the parts now😳😳


You have a very good imagination👏


Pls do keep writing😊😊


Thanks for the PM😃


Thanx Shruti, I know, Mai bahut Kaam-chalu work karti huun, very impatient, so story writing me khud hi bore ho jati huun, but end me acha lagta hai, wo will write more, Thanx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mushat

rajjjdi mera jawab haii .
Update plz 🤣🤣
at least marriage hi dikhado
aapse kuch aur demand nhin karungiii ..mujhe sharm aati hai 🤣🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shefu, one thing is u invisible bug, ( DP) secretly watching, and uper se abh typing bhi invisible😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mushat


Dii aap hanste khilkhilate rahiye 😳🤗

Wish more than this for u. U must start laughing originally like u laugh on forum🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter dear plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
updated the story once again, enjoy girls
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry still not reached to destination
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Posted: 10 years ago

click following link for other chapters

CHAPTER10



CHAPTER 6::: MEHNDI NIGHT


Jalal and ridhi India se sub ane walon ko welcum karne k baad wapis aa gaye the, Wedding card to Ruq ko bhi gaya tha, being jalal's cousin, but she chooses to stay back to attend the muslim style marriage which was to be held in India, after this Hindu ceremony. But she remebred to sent her best wishes to wud be couple. The five star hotel arrangements were done for stay of all Guests.

Aaj ridhi k ghar ratjaaga tha. Isme Jalal and uski party se kissi ko invite nahi kiya tha.Pahle ladies music tha, then Mehndi. Yeh sub almost half night tuk chalna tha. Mehndi me jalal ki female relatives Ridhi to mehndi lagane aane wali thi, but Jalal invited nahi tha. Ridhi k bina jalal ko ek ek pal , yrs jaisa lag raha tha . Wedding cards were sent to all relatives by hand. Jalal ki bua ko wedding card milne me thod late ho gaya tha, woh dusre city me thi.

Arey abhi tuk koi pahuncha nahi

Nahi, per aap kaun"Ridhis mom asked

My name is jeenat. I m Jalal's cousin. My house was near, so I decide to come here direct , rather than going to go to hotel, Jahan barati ruke hain.

Oh Koi baat nahi beti, aap aiye na, yahan bathiye". Maina ne Sofa ki taraf ishara kiya

Living room bahut bada tha.. Usk ek corner me geet sangeet chal raha tha. Ridhi bahut sunder lug rahi thi, uska face rose ki tarah khila hua tha.

Chalo ladkiyo, bund karo, naach gana, ladke wale aana shuru ho gayen hain, mom sad to girls had gone to get ready to welcum groom's party.

Ridhi ke bhi kuch dresses sil je aaye the, usse ready hone se pehle try karne the.

Cold lijiye, beti.. maina said offering cold to Zeenat.

Actually aunty, can I talk to Ridhi, as I don't know any one here, so I was thinking dulhan se hi jaan pechaan kar luun.

"Kyun nahi," Maina said, "abh to aap logon hi ki amanat hai," saying this she showed her the way to Ridhi's room

Ridhi was mid way to change her dress in her dressing room which was a part of her bed-room, when Maina arrived in her bed-room. "Beta yeh jalal ki cousin hain, she was bored outside, so has come here. I am sure you wont mind attending her, while keeping on doing ur chores." Hurridly Ridhi wear night down and came out

Sorry mama, I was trying on my clothes, but that's fine.

Maina left to attend other guests

Huum to yeh hai hamare Jalal bhaijaan ka noor. Zeenat jaise Ridhi ka ooper se niche tuk muuana le rahi thi. Uski piercing eyes, Ridhi k pink gown ke andher se jaankte tarashe badan per phisal rahi thi, saath hi saath she was smiling. Ridhi ko bahut atpata lug raha tha, suddenly zeenat hugged her saying "Jalal is very lucky to get u"

Aiye, baithiye" All Ridhi cud say to her uske bahon se niklate hue. The lady smilingly went in. Ridhi though felt akward with her constant gaze which was x-raying her through-out. I m in adjacent room, wud be changing dress, but wud be chatting with u at same time, and wud be back soon. Please don't mind;" she said politely

OUTSIDE ROOM GIRLS STARTED SINGING AGAIN FOLK SONG , dolki spoon k saath...


Arey mai tumse milni aayi, tume dekhni aayi and you r making excuses, Zeenat said. You can change here. I won't luk 2wards u.Ridhi did not like this comment at all. "What" she yelled, luking straight into zeenat's eyes, but she was bit surprised, Eyes, very familiar to her, Jalal's eye type. "ur eyes" she pointed. Haan Jalal se bhut resemblance hai, Every-one says so

this happens in cousins lot of time" both agreed

Now Ridhi ki awaz soft ho chuki thi, "WOh kya hai na aapa, muje apni dress complete privacy me change karne ki habit hai."

To badal dalo, kyunki, as there is no dressing-room adjacent to jala's bed-room,Whenever girls come to see him, and stay in his bed-room, they change within there. "But how u know all this, kya aap kabhi Jalal k bed-room me gayi hain"

"Haan haan , bahut baar, bole to jitni baar Jalal apne bed room me jata hai, utni baar mai bhi. Dekha jaye to hum dono ek jaan , Ek jisam hain, kewal naam ka diiference hai. said this time without imitating for a ladies voice.

Ridhi jo rone ko ho aayi thi, uski voice change per ek pal k liye shocked ho gayi. Kya Jalal aap yahan... You know na, aaj mehndi hai, aur mere bed-room me, and luk at me, bolte hue Ridhi ko khyaal aya woh transparent gown me hai, aur samne Jalal. Jalal I'll kill u, words uski juban me atuk gaye, sharm se

" agar kisi ko pata chal gya to, sub kitna fun banayenge , malum hai na." Woh naraj ho rahi thi but happy bhi thi. " Cool down, baby. Jalal came near to her," she became like a statue. "Dont worry that much, I just came to see u. If u support me all the time, no one will be able to recognise me, ladki wale sochenge, I m from boy's side aur ladke wale sochenge, from Girl's side. U go, change and get ready, I will be chatting with u mean-while"

Ridhi laughed out Loudly at his smart plan. OK-she said, as she was about to leave for change, Jalal hold her by her arm,pulled her very close, BTW bilkul apsara lug rahi ho. Ridhi took off his hand from her arm, and ran to dressing room, blushing and smiling at same time.

Jalal ka plan success tha. Jalal ki family ko kano-kaan khabar nahi lagi ki Mehndi me woh bhi tha, aur na hi Paridhi k ghar walon ko aisa doubt hua. .He left half an hr earlier than his party to reach hotel b4 them, so no one doubt him. Sub bride and groom ki tarf se ladies and girls hansi thitholi kur rahi thi, ki tabhi ek aur lady ne enter kiya...CONTD...

Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
dii m not spamming okay..abhi main a pair of eyes read karne jaa rahi hun 😉
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whattt 🤣🤣
kyaa hatta katta jalaaal ko aap jeenat bana diyaa 🤣
really loved this naughty Jalal 😳
and ruku is not there. wow .I don't like her at all ..agar woh daily Jalal ko rakhi bhi bandhe phir bhi nhin 🤣
Jo in transparent gown and Jalal in also in the room 😳
dii update abhi karo 🤣
update
update
update
Edited by mushat - 10 years ago

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