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Originally posted by: avika444

Aha khani mein twist
Hmm interesting dii
But im really confused about what is going around.
Update next part soon pls
And yes thanks for pm

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CHAPTER10

Chapter 4

Mid-October chal raha tha. Romance season peak me tha.Hawayen mast thi, Jalal ka bhi dil kisi k liye machal raha tha. But woh thi kaun, usko to yeh bhi sure nahi tha, ki woh ladki such me exist karti bhi hai ya yeh sirf uske dimag ka imagination hai. Doctor already declared him fit and fine without any errors and omissions ( Problems) and told that that the episodes he passed through could just b the effect of over-work. So far so gud, thought Jalal and tried to get over those incidents. But he felt himself too much lost in that girl. The thing he cud not understand, why he is feeling so much attracted 2wards her. Some of his GFs at college used to be the ultimate beauties. Then why he is so much bothered about that unknown girl then?

PAK-INDIA issues were being resolved. In order to improve relations between India and Pak, the heads two states allowed the people to visit countries to meet their long lost ones on the other side of border. As Jalal has few uncles on other side of border, so he decided to visit PAK.

While in PAK, he felt the air was warm, the country was cozy, and people as friendly as in India. He felt as if he is in India. He visited very interesting places including related to Mughals. One day his uncle jokingly told him, how much he resemble to Late AKBAR the GR8 means 100% only if he start wearing 16^th century dress. Jalal was not ready to agree. "NO, I can give u proof, Jeeta Jagta" Uncle said

"OK then prove it uncle" Jalal said

Let's go, just follow me. Uncle drove him to some place. The place they arrived was luking like a historical tomb being in use as office. There was an inscription out-side that tomb.

" MariumUJamani here Yrs"1642-1712"(sorry, Please don't bother about dates).

Let's go inside. Jalal followed him inside. That was dark cool inside. They went near tomb. Suddenly, His foot got entangled in one of the steps. He fell down. Next moment, his Uncle saw he was hurt badly in the head and was gone unconscious. A girl came running 2wards them. She intro herself as doctor in PAK hospital. She examined Jalal and told to his Uncle that he is needed to be taken immediately to hospital to avoid too much blood-loss.

Jalal opened his eyes. His whole body was aching. He saw doctor in white coat, He cud not see her face as she was monitoring her Oxyzen supply, facing away from him. He tried to examine his surroundings. It luked like as if he is in a hospital. He tried to recalculate the incidents which happened He cud remember, he was riding, followed by courtiers,. They were addressing him as Shahenshah. Scenario changed. Sub kuch movie ki tarah uski aankho me chal raha tha. He was addressing a huge crowd. People were shouting Shahenshah Akbar, mahan hai. Then a voice reaching his ears Shahenshah, aap aa gaye, Hum kubse aapka intzaar kar rahe the. jalal could recognise that sweet voice in his dreams as well. Smilingly he turned towards the voice, --- hum kubse aapka intzaar kar rahe the-- hosh me aane-ka, doctor completed her sentence

Originally posted by: Vtui

SPERB MISHU, U R professional Critic

1. I will fulfill the frist requirement

2...Yah agree, Index is must... will do that after finishing story

3. Updating rather finishing ,definitely within 2day

4... Din me teen????? Arey jo bhi milega within a day milega, no waiting Qs. I hate Qs and I kul se mera AKDHA bun jayega😭, I mean week-days😕

5. Bus jo bhi hai, yahi hai😆chota bada, short, high, whatever😆, issi ko digest karna padega

At the end of day, Thank u for ur fair review.

Originally posted by: Vtui

Avika thanks for keeping-up.

And about that confusion, kya kahun, Jalal hi confuse hai to mai kya karun😉

Hopefully sub clear ho jayega, but agar nahi hua to Story line In Ekta style samaj ker read lena😉I mean without any logics😆