Song Drabble #6 : Chahun Mei Ya Na

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salut! 😃

To be honest, I had called off updating this week because I have loads of work to do. I have my assignments and I've hardly any time left. But, I still want to give you guys something. So here's the the update. It's not as good as Alina's or Hania's, but hey, I tried my best. And Alina, sorry I couldn't comment. I had some.. problem putting my extra long post and I couldn't write it again! 😆


So here you go 😃



Song Drabble #4 : Chahun Mei Ya Na



I've always thought. Always. What that girl would be like. The one which made my heart beat go crazy. The one which, if she were live, I could show to my Mom. I had lost my Mom in a car accident, it was very painful for Dad. He loved every bit of Mom. I was 6 or 7, she was returning from work in a hurry because I had called her a billion of times to hurry up as we were going to adventure island. She was in a hurry and she.. she never made it home. We got a call from her phone and she was rushed to hospital. I was made to stay home and take care of my younger sister, Barkat. But I wanted to be there.


Mom had always told me tales of love. I was a boy, but it seemed nice to hear almost anything from her. She was beautiful, She had an amazing voice.


Mom told me once that when I find my soulmate, she should be the first one I tell her. I said will anyone ever love me as much as she does? She said that there is someone for everyone. Someone is out there for me, too.


And that day, I felt it. I felt a pull. I felt the soulmate-ness. I felt my Mom. I felt like she was watching me, patting me on my back for finally finding the one. But she just scurried away before I could even see his face properly.


"It's okay." Those 2 words, coming out of her mouth, reminded me of every word my mother said. The soothing effect my mother's voice used to give me, her's gave me too. Her eyes, sparkling brown, made me want to drown in them. She was the girl. The girl which my Mom would have looked at and said, "I'm proud of you son,"





I'm sorry for the extremely short update Hania and Alina.
But I really do hope you guys liked the few lines. 😆


Really, I apologize.


But you two are good.
I give you chance to continue. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So he lost his mom , that's sad poor Zain ,continue soon i am loving this series!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really nice update! Short yet lovely!!! Thnx for d update dear:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update tani..
i was not expecting this so soon but u updated...thank you so much for this...
and what tuny pasta queen ko out of world kr dia...lol
sorry it was sad but mjhy hansi aa rahi h..😆

But the way zain felt for aliya is lovely.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

So he lost his mom , that's sad poor Zain ,continue soon i am loving this series!


Thanks a lot. 😃


Well, you must thank Hania for them.
She was the one who gave the idea. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HARSHTA

It was really nice update! Short yet lovely!!! Thnx for d update dear:)


Thanks, a lot. 😃

And you're always welcome.
Now, spam Hania's inbox! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

Lovely update tani..

i was not expecting this so soon but u updated...thank you so much for this...
and what tuny pasta queen ko out of world kr dia...lol
sorry it was sad but mjhy hansi aa rahi h..😆

But the way zain felt for aliya is lovely.
continue soon.



No it's alright. Mujhe bhi aa rhi thi. 😆

But actually, mei Suri ki baare mei ni soch rhi thi.
I mean I wasn't picturing HER, as Zain's mom.
I was picturing some warm loving mother.. 😭 Emotional kar ditta!


YOU continue! 😆

And yah, thanks a lot. 😃

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