manan ff : you live in my soul (PROMO PG 146)(THREAD 2 PG 150) 5 aug

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<font size="4">hello people...my name is mahi...and am very much new to this forum.. i'm planning to write an os on our very own manan...it's my first ever story on manan...</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">A girl standing near the window gazing at the stars...a bright light of moon falling on her..making her shine more than the stars...the gleam of moon is nothingin-frontof her..she is shining to the fullest...she look back and finds the most serene beauty of the universe...i.e...love of her life...her "MANIK"...who was sleeping peacefully holding a pillow in his arms and smiling in his sleep...she look at him with utmost love and slowly walks towards him...she very calmly sit on the side of the bed still looking at him with a bright smile on her face...caresses his hairs...move a little close to him and kissed his forehead...he moved a bit with the familiar touch...but didn't open his eyes...she came near his eyes and said "Be a good boy...i love you...my monster...and i live in your soul..."...she moved a bit far from him...he opened his eyes and woke up with a jerk...his eyes were red as he had cried from a long long time...he look around...but found nothing...but only darkness...darkness..which is not only in his room...but inside him too...he sat on the floor and looked down ...a only word which he can utter was ... "NANDINI..."...and a tear make its way from his eyes...fall on the ground...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">People...its my first ss on manan...i also don't know how long it will be...i hope you all like my idea...you are free to comment anything regarding this post...i would love to read your feedback...if you wanna give any suggestion...you can say it...thanks ...</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3">THANKS CUTE-ALY (ALEENA) FOR THIS WONDERFUL BANNER..YOU ARE A ROCKSTAR..LOVE YOU..THANKS A TON SWEETHEART..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">DIRECT LINKS INDEX:</font>

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samiksha_2593 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue it dear...allmanan fans with u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yah a wasome prologue
do continue soon

love
angela

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Thankew so much..for liking my idea...your comments are very precious for me ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NYC concept.. jst 1 request.. don't kill nandini.. plz..
I dnt lyk wen one of dem already dies n othr is jst remembering d sweet memories
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing prolouge...
And as far as i got to know nandini is dead right???
Plz dont make her dead...plz..
Continue soon..

Plz pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept but
pls dont tell us tht nandini dead
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People...I know your love for manan..please keep reading and have faith...I also don't know what's in store..I write whatever comes In my heart...suggestions are welcome...thanks...for liking...
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Originally posted by: angel98

Amazing prolouge...
And as far as i got to know nandini is dead right???
Plz dont make her dead...plz..
Continue soon..

Plz pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...





Thanks for liking..i 'll surely let u know...and about nandini dead or not..u will find in the upcoming chapters...pakka... 😉 ..thanks again dear...
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Hey pals...first of all I wanna thanks to all those who liked my concept and encouraged me to continue...really feeling very very good...but...I wanna say...plz plz do share your views with me...your comments are very precious for me ...it feels great to read your comments... I know am greedy 😉 ..greedy of your valuable comments 😉 ...plz comment ..so that I can write my very first chapter...and trust me...m very excited to share it with you all...I will post it asap...

Loads of love and care
Mahi 😊

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