That Fateful Night - KAYA SS - Updated Part 5 Pg 5

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It was a Sunday evening for everyone but he sat wholly frenzied in his cabin gazing at the red file kept in front of him on the wooden table. The file declaimed in sizable black bold letters Ananya Kashyap - Missing since 16/12/2014'. It had been unerringly six months since her tacit disappearance from his life and KKN. Kabir Sharma had made innumerable botched attempts to unearth the reason of her departure from her friends, family and everyone he could think of being allied to her in any form. Although, they strictly spurned knowing anything about her but he could unmistakably spot the same look in all of their eyes which was encumbering him more with each passing day. Everyone considered him responsible for all the emotional struggles that she had endured including her withdrawal on that indispensable night of 16th December.

Ananya being a light-hearted and ebullient mademoiselle intrigued Kabir Sharma from the first day of his work as an editor-in-chief in KKN channel. He brilliantly managed to fulfill all his responsibilities regarding the operations and policies of KKN channel but failed miserably at personal level. He could never assemble the guts to convey about his concealed feelings to her.

There she was on the night of 16th December standing a step away from him with her arms wide open and heart full of unconditional love for him. And all he had to do was take a step forward and hold her but instead he just froze. Right from the beginning he was oblivious of their feelings for each other but that night he did not have the strength to accept it in front of the entire world. Was he scared of admitting his emotions openly? No, he never felt scared of admitting his love for her - neither to himself nor to the entire world! She could have given him a chance of explaining his actions that night but instead she just left without hearing what his helpless slightly teary eyes were trying to convey her.

Memories of that night which filled darkness in his life endlessly were still unobstructed in his mind. He clearly remembered how enthralled he was to see her dressed exquisitely in a red shimmer mid-length dress that embraced her curves seamlessly. His eyes followed her without fail the entire time while she was unwillingly jammed by her friends from work. He laughed slightly at her as her eyes pleaded him to come to her rescue that time. Fortunately at that moment the music started playing and he secured an excuse to save her from her friends jabbering. He adjusted his black coat in style and marched towards her while she stood there in awe with a pounding heart.

He extended his hand and asked her to accompany for a dance. She could not control her exhilaration while she received mixed responses of disbelief and envy from the gathered people. Those envious looks continued as they swayed gently in each other's arms and what followed later was pure magic and symphony. Ananya held on to him dreamily, afraid to let go of him, scared to let the moment slip by, heedless of what was about the befall them.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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quiet intresting storyline.
ananya is missing.
update soon.
waiting to see how the story unfold.
and kaya little romance was so beautiful.
loved it.
pm me when u update.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Superb update!!! Keep it up!! 😊
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Very very nice do PM me when you update👏
Edited by mytinypaintings - 10 years ago
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interesting storyline
update soon
pm me please
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Good and interesting
Pm me when u update next


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Part 2

She could not look away from his piercing gaze - there was something mesmerizing about the intense look in his eyes that night. With his arms around her waist and her arms instinctively rested on his chest they gazed into each other's eyes. Ananya moved a little closer to him as they whirled around the room. She could feel his heart beating against her chest. She had never been this close to any man; his cologne and masculine fragrance stirred something inside her that night. She had never felt that way ever.

On the spur of the moment she arched her back slightly and encircled her arms around his neck and pressed her lips to his. As her lips touched his softly, an electrifying sensation ran through their bodies. But, before their kiss could deepen and reach more passionate heights he pulled himself back and acted in a manner she had not anticipated.

"I love you Kabir" she gazed into his eyes and poured hear heart out in front of everyone to justify her action.

The colour drained from his face as he tried to look away from her eyes "An..nanya...th...at... love ...is a big word" he stuttered as he tried to read the expressions of the people around them.

Ananya moved a step closer to him and looked into his eyes "I know it is a big word...and a big feeling but it is true Kabir. I am convinced that I want to spend the rest of my life with you"

"Ananya... I can understand what you are saying. You are a very good friend...I like to spend my time with you but spending the rest of your life with me..." he tried to look away and find reasons to calm her down

Ananya's color drained, "Kabir ...look at me...don't deny your true feelings...I have seen it in your eyes...I have felt it in your heartbeat...I know you love me too"

She heard everyone present there including her friends calling it her infatuation while Kabir silently stood feeling helpless.

She went through a myriad of emotions -anger, frustration, insulted and most of all hurt- hurt that Kabir had not only respected her feelings but also slighted the depth of his love by thinking of it as a mere attraction or infatuation.

He saw tears rolling down her eyes and yet he was unable to do anything for her. He wanted to accept his feelings for her at that moment right in front of everyone but his past and insecurities held him back. He was not able to move ahead with Ananaya without breaking his ties with the horrendous past. He had to tell her about his past before declaring his love for her. She had impulsively taken a wrong step and he did not want to play with her feelings.

What if she rejected him after knowing the truth about him? What if she would feel ashamed to be linked with him just like his ex-wife?

He wanted to tell her but this was not that day and the place; he was not ready for it. He was unable to comprehend how to handle the situation.

"I love you Kabir...I love you from the bottom of my heart!" were the last words he had heard from her while she wiped her tears and walked away.

Edited by idonkno - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very emotional SS. Ananya is innocent,sincere in her feelings and straight forward.
Kabir with his past baggage is not able to express his feelings without any hesitation as he is afraid of rejection.

Both are correct but the surroundings are wrong leading to her disappearance.

Waiting to see what happens in the next part. I used see as your description is too good.I felt as if I am seeing the episode.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

A very emotional SS. Ananya is innocent,sincere in her feelings and straight forward.

Kabir with his past baggage is not able to express his feelings without any hesitation as he is afraid of rejection.

Both are correct but the surroundings are wrong leading to her disappearance.

Waiting to see what happens in the next part. I used see as your description is too good.I felt as if I am seeing the episode.


Hey..You got the gist of the story correctly. Thanks for the appreciation 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaah
That's so emotional...
But still..
Fantastic
Amazing
Awesome
Mind blowing
Continue soon and PM me...

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