||REAL.|| SS: KriArsh [0.04 Updated!]

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She looked up annoyed when Gunther and Polly started shaking her hard to get her attention, while she tried to exchange her notebooks for the remaining classes she had for the day.
She didn't bother cloaking her irritation, "What?!"

Their eyes seemed to get hazed by a clear gleam of predators as they spoke of new meat joining in the middle of school year. Well, of course, if someone joined school in the middle of a year, who wouldn't notice. And she was instantly turned around and made to follow their jerking thumbs and figure out who that person was.

She didn't see anyone. What with the sea of white and black-greens swimming in front of her eyes, it really was hard to make out who was who, unless you looked properly at their faces.

It wasn't until Polly stepped forward and essentially blocked someone's path, jutting out her padded chest and shaking her hair, before peering down at the now wide eyed redhead, who was dressed in the same uniform as theirs, but with a skirt whose length was longer and went below her knees and a shirt that practically hung off of her shoulders as if she were a hanger. The girl was Painfully. Thin.

"Where are you going, Toothpick?"

Her eyes jumped to Polly's face. The name was.. somehow appropriate. But.. Her eyes saw movement beside their small group and registered the rest of her group coming to a stop at their spot. Their unmistakable laugh vibrated in her ears, making her blink and stare at the new girl.

"Krissan?"

She turned to see Polly looking at her expectantly. She hummed in askance and saw her lowering her chin and widening her eyes, before gesturing towards.. Toothpick.

She was bummed. She raked her brains to find an insult. "W-What's your name?" before frowning and raising an eyebrow and looking at her down her nose.

"Laurel--"

"Hate it! Let's call you 'Toothpick' from now on! Like really? Look at you," she paused, feeling her groups eyes boring into her skin. "And your clothes! Are you wearing a curtain? Seriously, nothing else suits you!" she shook her head in a patronizing manner and frowned in slight disgust, before bumping her shoulder into hers and walking off.

Sliding her hand down her high ponytail, she brought it onto her shoulder.

Her work was done.

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Yup. I've come up with something new. And I'd like to continue it.
I don't know how many of you if like it, but I'll try my best to do so.
And I may, or may not change the title of the story, coz I still found a proper one yet.

Annie
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It was exhausting.

Like Really.

Exhaling heavily, she rotated her neck with a hand at her nape, rubbing the sore muscles. Staying erect was a pain in the neck. Literally.

Today was.. a break for her.

Laurel aka Toothpick hadn't come in today. It was a first, since she had joined school. She'd know 'cause she hadnt missed a day without messing with the little red noodle.

Yesterday had been.. For a better word, dramatic.
Bumping into her was a coincidence. But what followed was quite unexpected.

"How dare you! Are you trying to ruin my uniform, you Idiot?!"

"I didn't.. I.."

"Like really? You are skinny, but are you freaking blind too?"

"Its not my f-fault. You came in front of me, un--" her wide bluish green eyes staring straight into her dark brown eyes.

"Excuse me? If am not mistaken you're the one whose carrying this cup of lemonade and my shirt, my white shirt here has a yellow stain!"

"I was watching where I was going, but you just came in front of me unexpectedly."

Splash!

She hadn't waited for any response and dumped the whole lemonade on her before walking off for the bathroom.

After lunch, she had expected to see her in the last class they shared, but she only saw her empty seat. She had ended up staring at the seat for quite a long time, missing the rest of her teacher's lecture.
She waited to see her again the next day. And the next. And the next.

Blowing out slowly through her mouth, she bit on the insides of her cheeks, moving her gaze from her skirt to her school shoes clad feet. They needed to be polished. Wiggling her toes, she shifted her foot inside them, when she felt a tap on her shoulder.

Raising her eyebrows, she looked to her right, at Mishka and jerked her chin askance. All she saw was Mishka looking at something behind her with narrowed eyes, that moved up and down in her usual assessment of something.

Frowning, she followed Mishka's gaze and turned on her toes, to come face to face with her infamous school's logo, threaded into a similar white shirt of their uniform, expanded on a lean and slightly broad chest. She blinked and looked up to see a pair of coals staring at her.

"Are you Krissan?"

Her eyes darted to his lips, before looking back into his hard stare. Narrowing her own, she jut her chin out in challenge, "Yes."

She watched his cheeks tighten, as he lowered his chin. "Stay away from Laurel.. or anyone for that matter."

Her lips turned upside down, in a frown. "And why would I do that?"

But he was already walking away.

Hands in his pockets.

A mop of horribly messy raven hair.

And hips that had swag.
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 10 years ago
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"Who the hell was that?"

Her eyebrows seemed to furrow deeper, as she watched his retreating back. In her peripheral vision, she could see the crowd of the school, standing on either side of the path he had dared to burn, whispering to each other.

Huffing, she turned her nose up, "Who cares! He's just another attention seeker," a smirk slipping onto her lips as she turned to face her group, while shaking her head and rolling her eyes at the sheer silliness of it.

The rest of the day went uneventfully, with just the regular dose of her friends messing with the bookworms and plump bums around the school. No Laurel. No Mysterious Guy. No pressure.

Her school bus was standing right there, in its usual spot. She looked around, before pulling out her hoodie and rushing to the washroom. By now, all of her friends must've left for home in their respective automobiles, promising to meet up for a party the same evening.

Pulling open the door, she tugged her sling bag tighter to her hip and adjusted the hood over her head, before walking out the big doors of her school building. Her hands rubbed the closed zipper of her hoodie up and down, as her legs cautiously stepped further away from the building and nearer to the school's means of transportation.

Walking through the shadows wasn't easy, since she kept on darting her eyes here and there, keeping watch for anyone who'd recognise her or call out to her. She felt something hit her sternum, making stumble half a step in pain.

Cursing hoarsely, she looked up to see Laurel, the redhead, staring at her with horrified eyes and her lips chanting an apology.

"Laurel?" She made the mistake of calling her by her name, which sparked a recognition in those eyes. She clamped her mouth shut when she heard her say her name in disbelief.

Feeling her trying to get a better look at her face, she looked away.

"What--"

"If you speak of this to anyone, I'll make sure to make your life a living hell!" she hissed at the shocked redhead, who licked her lips, while blinking, before bowing her head and turning on her heel.

"Wait!" she called out, before ducking her head, afraid she might've gained a bit of attention. Grabbing a bone-y elbow, she stopped Laurel and turned her, frowning hard.

"Like really?! Rather than talking to me straight, you sent your boyfriend to threaten me?" Accusation dripped in her voice.

Those eyes had gone wide. "T-threaten? I-I don't--"

"Don't you dare deny it! I know it was you. You're such a coward!"

Laurel bit hard on her lower lip, leaning a bit away from Krissan's angry face.

"I really don't know what you're talking about, Krissan," she pleaded, shaking her head.

"Oh come on! Seriously? Where is he, your boyfriend?"

"I don't have a boyfriend," came her quiet answer, laced with urgency and panic.

"Then who is he? Your brother?" looking her up and down, scowling.

The resounding horn of a bus, managed to distract Krissan, making her drop the tight grip she had on Laurel's skinny elbow. Setting her jaw, "I'm watching you," before sprinting off.
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read it in one go!!i do like their pair!!
thy r the second lovly pair in wh of mine!!
hope cvs dont beak thm!!
loving ur writing do write more!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohmygod!!
this is simply so brilliant everything from the way you have portrayed Kriskarsh..
during the entire first part i was thinking that the story might be the same with a jealous Krishaan or something but come part 2 things start to take a new turn...
i njoyed the little encounter between the duo Kriskarsh...i loved the utkarsh u have written about assuming he is utkarsh!!
i simply cant wait for more..this is simply so beautifully crafted that i am in love with the story!!
DO SCRAP ME if its not a pain as i hate PMs...
i would love to read more and more of this
update soon and longer please...
regards
safrena
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you! :D
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Thanks, Angevil! Nice username. :)
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Originally posted by: TasriS

Superb...
Thanks for pm.


Thanks Tasri! :D
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Originally posted by: ..krystal

read it in one go!!i do like their pair!!

thy r the second lovly pair in wh of mine!!
hope cvs dont beak thm!!
loving ur writing do write more!!!


Thanks, krystal!
Hehehe.. Am glad you like these two too! 😉 These two make such a sweet pair!
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Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

ohmygod!!

this is simply so brilliant everything from the way you have portrayed Kriskarsh..
during the entire first part i was thinking that the story might be the same with a jealous Krishaan or something but come part 2 things start to take a new turn...
i njoyed the little encounter between the duo Kriskarsh...i loved the utkarsh u have written about assuming he is utkarsh!!
i simply cant wait for more..this is simply so beautifully crafted that i am in love with the story!!
DO SCRAP ME if its not a pain as i hate PMs...
i would love to read more and more of this
update soon and longer please...
regards
safrena


My first long comment for this story! 😳 Thank you so much, Saffy! Can I call you that?
Aww... A jealous Krissan would make a good story, peeping into her mind and writing about it all!!
I hope I can do justice to both of them, because they are quite different from the way they are portrayed on the show. Well, I can't help but dream! 😉
No problemo!

Annie

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