AkDha OS--'Scorching Desire (16+)'(imp Note pg 9) - Page 6

Originally posted by: avika444

Ahem ahem nice os sush
loved the ending where surya comes to jo's house and catches them red handed
but jalal was smart enough to handle the situation .
thanks for the pm
update ur ffs too pls

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Sush ur harmones r on overdrive 🤣

Ofcourse...Otherwise I can't write such OS in normal😆 😆

Ufff such an hot, passionate os ☺️

Loved it 😉

Thnx Alzoo😉 😉

Jallu was v rough how he came to jo' s house n closed her main door n her room's door & how he banged his lips to her v fast😆 hehe poor Jo he won't let her even complete her words.

He was actually too much impatient & turned on...😉 😉😆 😆

How he askd her r u on Ur days I was like whattt?😲😆 Jo se phle my mouth was wide open.

Aise bhi poochte h while dng☺️. I didn't knw. Now I knw lol 😆

Apne assignements ka kuch toh gyaan OS mein bhi daalu...🤣 🤣

He tore her p**** 😆

Hey... It was only U guys' wish to tear something in every OS... So... It was this story quota😆 😆

When he made love to her isshhh I was smiling n blushing. while reading. Too hawwtt ☺️

Wth subah subah surya n he knw what dis love birds did. I was worried for a second den I tot I dnt need to as soon as u r der.😛😛 . Mast fasaya surya ko jallu ne or surya ki hawa nikalgai. 😆😆. Hats off to u sush for writing amazingly.👏👏👏 Thnxx sushi I Really loved it

Aww!!!!! Thank u Thank U so much😳 😳

N lastly they r on bed again for session 2. . 😉

Will think😉 😉

Wow sush pls give me session 2 asap as I told u awredy.🤣 . M waiting for session 2 now it's jodha' s turn to go wild n crazy.😆😉

😆 😆

Originally posted by: MeShu-Holic

sush it was just soo hot ❤️

Hayee ☺️

I'm blushing

Both wild , wild teenage love ❤️

And the way jalal threated surya was amazing

Originally posted by: hely

wildness overloaded ☺️
jalal is dangerously wild n very protective for jodha😉.❤️
sush ye OS nahi tabahi hai..🤣

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Sush jaan🤗

Sorry for commenting so late😳

& I am replying more late🤣 🤣

Anyway, this OS was soo hot...I can't describe its hotness☺️

Thnx☺️

Especially loved the part how Jalal just entered her house and then the passion just flowed☺️

Jodha was no less either; she uprightly said that she wanted him to make love to her☺️

I again will say that I loved the lingerie tearing part☺️ It was hotness overloaded😉

& My hormones went on overdrive🤣 🤣

Loved when Jalal showed so much concern before he went on further, was it his first time or...?☺️

No comments pls☺️ ☺️

Obviously the jackpot scene was when Surya walked in on them and Jalal threatened to reveal his secrets 😆 That idiot got what he deserved😡

Yes😎 😎

And they both slept in each other's embrace the entire night

yes😳 😳

Best was the ending; Round 2😉

😉 😉

Loved this one🤗 I am ever ready to give you titles and ideas😉

I know... U r more than eager😆 😆 😉 😉...Btw thnx haan😳 😳

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Superb Spicy Sizzling Hot😆 & Sorry for late comment😆

Loved the ending of the story Sush👏

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Soo hot n sensual
Thanks for pm