AkDha OS--'Scorching Desire (16+)'(imp Note pg 9)

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Sonali

@sonali96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hot nd sexy update

Thnks fr the pm sush

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sridu

@sridevihota777

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Super aba and hot.sexy also. Love u sush.

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Only one comment hot super hot plz update soon

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Rathi

@Thendral03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awesome Os Di

THe End was the best thing i mean jalal warning surya 🤣

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

thanx for such a fab OS umm... loved it...😳

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

hi sush ...
I read it but not able to comment 😕 😆
I just can say that you are an amazing writer 👍🏼

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surabhi chandgothia

@chandgothia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

It was beautifully written...loved the way jalal got over surya the ass...

The best line was ur "p.s." 😆

Write more often...

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Ashwini

@LekhSha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Nice writing, Just a small suggestion, If you could increase the protagonist's age when writing there night outs it feels nice.

Means 16 yrs is much too young to be in such night outs.

Its your story just a thought,

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Super hot n sensual sushi
Thanks for the pm 😛

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Cut n hot...the way jalal cant help but give in to his desire toward jodha but still asking jodha first for the ultimate love making :) ..please write more...tfs..

Edited by lovejodhaakbar - 10 years ago

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