AkDha OS--'Scorching Desire (16+)'(imp Note pg 9)

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Krina

@cuty1997

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

sush it's so much hot ☺️

thanks to pm me 😉

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ahem ahem nice os sush
loved the ending where surya comes to jo's house and catches them red handed
but jalal was smart enough to handle the situation .
thanks for the pm
update ur ffs too pls

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Sush ur harmones r on overdrive 🤣

Ufff such an hot, passionate os ☺️

Loved it 😉

Jallu was v rough how he came to jo' s house n closed her main door n her room's door & how he banged his lips to her v fast😆 hehe poor Jo he won't let her even complete her words.

How he askd her r u on Ur days I was like whattt?😲😆 Jo se phle my mouth was wide open.

Aise bhi poochte h while dng☺️. I didn't knw. Now I knw lol 😆

He tore her p**** 😆

When he made love to her isshhh I was smiling n blushing. while reading. Too hawwtt ☺️

Wth subah subah surya n he knw what dis love birds did. I was worried for a second den I tot I dnt need to as soon as u r der.😛😛 . Mast fasaya surya ko jallu ne or surya ki hawa nikalgai. 😆😆. Hats off to u sush for writing amazingly.👏👏👏 Thnxx sushi I Really loved it

N lastly they r on bed again for session 2. . 😉

Wow sush pls give me session 2 asap as I told u awredy.🤣 . M waiting for session 2 now it's jodha' s turn to go wild n crazy.😆😉

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Mrs.KimJongin

@Mrs.KimJongin

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

sush it was just soo hot ❤️

Hayee ☺️

I'm blushing

Both wild , wild teenage love ❤️

And the way jalal threated surya was amazing

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

wildness overloaded ☺️
jalal is dangerously wild n very protective for jodha😉.❤️
sush ye OS nahi tabahi hai..🤣

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Sush jaan🤗

Sorry for commenting so late😳

Anyway, this OS was soo hot...I can't describe its hotness☺️

Especially loved the part how Jalal just entered her house and then the passion just flowed☺️

Jodha was no less either; she uprightly said that she wanted him to make love to her☺️

I again will say that I loved the lingerie tearing part☺️ It was hotness overloaded😉

Loved when Jalal showed so much concern before he went on further, was it his first time or...?☺️

Obviously the jackpot scene was when Surya walked in on them and Jalal threatened to reveal his secrets 😆 That idiot got what he deserved😡

And they both slept in each other's embrace the entire night

Best was the ending; Round 2😉

Loved this one🤗 I am ever ready to give you titles and ideas😉

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Superb Spicy Sizzling Hot😆 & Sorry for late comment😆

Loved the ending of the story Sush👏

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Soo hot n sensual
Thanks for pm

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Sush

@Forthislifeonly

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Huh.. It was so hot sush..😉 And very well written as always.. I loved this jalal..😊 I was missing ur updates dear.. Plz update ur stories soon..😃

Thank U so much 😳 😳 & yes... My intention was to make it hot😉 😉

& extremely sorry for late reply... I got busy😭 😭