Virika FF - You Died,I Lived

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Again...😊 hope you guys are all well..Well i wont do any bak bak😆 straight to the point! Just got an idea and here i am writing this!! Well i don't know how it is and may be many will wont like...So please tell me should i continue or not!!😕

Virika - You Died I Lived!!!

Prologue ~

Laying on a grass , looking at the sky,the twinkling stars. Remembering only her...Her laugh,her smile, her naughtiness, her way of expressing love, her never ending talks , feel of her skin, her body weight over him, her hands twined with him,the warm hug, the warm sensation which they always use to get when in each others arm.

This was the same place where he was going to propose her,but now he was alone. Alone with no one beside him laughing ,taking care of him. She left him alone , alone in this wide world, she was gone, gone forever... from where no one can ever come. He closed his eyes ,thinking only about her,this was the day when they would have completed there 3 years of their relationship...but here he was alone,without her.she left him and world without waiting for him though they both promised that they will never apart but still destiny wanted them to be separated. Tears were coming from his eyes, remembering every moment he spent with her. He was crying, why not he will? He had lost his world ,his reason to live. He lost his Jeevika , his love.

He was on the mountain top where she wanted him to propose,where they use to spend quality time together laying down beside each other, hands intertwined with eachother's . The sky was clear , moonlight all over the mountain, with same place but not same person.She wasn't there and he wasn't happy. Viren Vadhera was not happy, he was depressed. He wanted his life back. Viren wanted his Jeevika back.But now it was not possible. Was it?

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Before you guys kill me😆 for doing this😆 you have to read further!! And its totally your choice if you want me to continue this or not! Like and Comment Please!! Only then you will get further updates😃

Post your questions if any😉 Any suggestions All welcome... Even if you wanna say me censored words too😆 Comment what you feel please...😊

Chapter 1 will be posted soon if i get to know all are liking my work😊

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Sameeha.Tacker thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳
Look whos here
My cutiepie
My angel
Thanku so much for wrinting this.
I have already said that the prologue made me cry.
Losing a person who is very very dear to you is very painful.
It hurts a lot.
Your stories are always out of the world.
Keep it up baby!
I am very very excited to read it further.
Though I am upset over the fact that virika are not together.
How can I even imagine viren living without his jeevika.
They both are each other's heartbeat.
Your story and the concept is totally different from stories which we usually read here.
I can't wait for the update.
You better update soon
and
please please please
don't keep us waiting.
I will die here waiting for it
love u
muwahhh

Edited by Sameeha.Tacker - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Start!
Waiting to read further!
Hope they meet ..
Cant see viren without jeevika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aayu di!!!!!!
U always rock ur stories, they way you write, the concepts its always jhakas!!!
The concept of this story is sooo
Amazing
Lovely
Marvellous
Superbbb
Unique
Splendid
Concept!
I just cant wait to read the next update!!!!
I just hope virika meets again! I cant see them separated! They r one soul, i know thier is a twist in this story, which i cant wait to read!!
Sooo
My dearest di!!!!
Continueee sooonnn
Cant waittt n thank uuu for strying a new ff!!
Updateee sonishhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res..
woww..
will unres tonight! :) hopefully..
Thnx!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Great update!
I really wish there is a twist in the tale. Cant imagine it otherwise.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Okay so I finally found how to comment on India forums..hope it's the right wayb

The prologue was too goodFirst of all the character themselves are my favourites : VIREN AND JEEVIKA'''
The Name of the ff itself is so amazing and unique that I was getting eager to read when the page was getting loaded
I am already in love with the title "You died I lived"the storyline is really really different...
I mean all stories deal with the almost the same storyline but this one is something really different where the female prortagonist is already dead...
I am really waiting badly to read the first chapter...
Specially after the introduction u have given for VIRIKA!'''-
I know this may sound ajeeb but I hate Viren's such condition
but that doesn't mean I don't like the story in fact I am already in love with this'
I am eagerly badly madly waiting for the first chapter
all the best for this new ff'
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start! :)
Made me depressed but I'm really interested in the story behind it
Cant comment much right now -.- examsss...but cant wait for u to update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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itna emotional concept
starting main hi jeevika dead 🥺
my poor viren what will happen to him now? 💔
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start!!!
Ih was amazing!
The concept sounds awesome!
Really sad bt can't wait to c how the story continues!
Continue really soon!

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