How do you want the story to proceed?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So almost everyone is liking Mantu-Amaya angle. But keeping this beside, how do you want story to proceed once this wedding is over. Finally when they will show next morning.

And by story I mean the story of the show not Mantu-Amaya lovestory one! 😆

Here is what I want. I want them to focus on Amaya and Rachita getting job first so that they can help Sneha (who should return now) in maintaining their house. Next, I want Sneha to become an independent woman who works and earns. It can be by teaching or by anything. I want Mathurs to succeed inspite of Rudra's conspiracies. Then, I want Mantu-Amaya and Rachita-Rama love story to evolve as a side story (which can later be given some prominence) and I finally want to get rid of Rudra or atleast redeem him.

What do you guys want?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear, we ( me and other early ones) have been thinking on similar lines since Sneha and girls came to Benares.
ATM, we need some pace ...so that story moves and some interesting twists...as currently the show is quite predictable...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cherrypansy

Dear, we ( me and other early ones) have been thinking on similar lines since Sneha and girls came to Benares.

ATM, we need some pace ...so that story moves and some interesting twists...as currently the show is quite predictable...

Yup. The story is moving ahead very slowly. Till now, neither Sneha nor the girls have got job. Only Jazz got admission in a school. They need to hurry up a bit.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Agree with cherry, seriously I really love this show...and i want the story going good...
We are getting interesting twists and turns, but alas they go slow...Its been so long since they came Banaras, and nothing serious on being independent, earning money...😒
Till now, just Rachita is searching jobs, Amaya learning the financial conditions..just thot of finding job, and Sneha dint even thot of that yet...i know its not easy to get work...but atleast they can be shown struggling to get work...Sneha cud have shown trying for sumthing...I had thot maybe Rachi wud accept English teacher job later...but dat dint happen too...

I really want the story to focus on this track along with Rudra's evil face getting exposed slowly by the girls...😎
As u said, the love story of RaRa and ManYa can be evolved side by side...😳both the couples are also very much essential...

I want Sneha back in the show ASAP, i m missing her...😳

Rite now, post IPL, the CV''s are trying to woo viewers with ManYa romance...😳...hope the story comes back on track soon...😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: frenz4u

Agree with cherry, seriously I really love this show...and i want the story going good...
We are getting interesting twists and turns, but alas they go slow...Its been so long since they came Banaras, and nothing serious on being independent, earning money...😒
Till now, just Rachita is searching jobs, Amaya learning the financial conditions..just thot of finding job, and Sneha dint even thot of that yet...i know its not easy to get work...but atleast they can be shown struggling to get work...Sneha cud have shown trying for sumthing...I had thot maybe Rachi wud accept English teacher job later...but dat dint happen too...

I really want the story to focus on this track along with Rudra's evil face getting exposed slowly by the girls...😎
As u said, the love story of RaRa and ManYa can be evolved side by side...😳both the couples are also very much essential...

Rite now I want Sneha back in the show ASAP, i m missing her...😳


Yup. Even I want Sneha back. It is important that she comes and the story moves ahead otherwise it is stuck at the same place for almost a week now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even I want a balanced story where the girls will settle and become independent and as a side story they can show Manya and RARA story...😃
And minimize Sasura scenes as much as possible...😡

Made a post on this topic earlier do check out...😃
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4391359

lets keep our thoughts in one place...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want the Mathurs to evolve and with them all teh characer should evolve. Liked Uma for a change. She is getting better now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I wanted Rachita and Amaya to get a job and become independent. Sneha can also try for a job but I do't think CVs will do that.

The next thing would be Sneha's diminishing trust on Rudra. She realy trusts him too much! Well, she should supposedly but yes, I want it to end so that Rudra can visit Hell for a little while.

If Hari come in the scene then well and good! He'll help uncover Rudra and perhaps even take him to a psychiatrist. 😆

RaRa scenes should be a tad bit serious. Yes, I know its the early stage but if they are going to love each other in the future then the CVs could show them talking about serious stuff, like the problems they face,etc.

One more thing. I wanted RaRa to confess first. ManYa can take time and then confess after decades if they want 😆

I seriously don't like the way they are hurrying up ManYa. I want them to stop doing these 'attract-veiwers' scene and take control of the storyline instead.

At last, totally my POV. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ever since Sneha has gone to Mumbai along with Rudra and his mom, we have not heard from them or what is actually happening over there.

Regarding romance between Mantu/Amaya and Rama/Rachita, first of all the CVs should concentrate in showing how both Amaya and Rachita look out for jobs and finally succeed in getting one. Amaya and Rachita were talking about CVs, etc. that too came at a standstill.

Do they have enough money to take care of daily expenses. Don't you think that both of them should seriously look out for jobs for themselves?

A friend of Mantu had approached him to repair his Computer and at the same time, he had put in a request that somebody called Dev was looking for some people who were quite conversant with Computers, etc. What happened to that???

Regarding Gajanand Chaubey's health, I didn't like the way he spoke of Amaya. They should try to find out the name of the person who brought him to the hospital. What about CCTV cameras of the hospital. They should check them. Amaya's hard work of bringing her Nanu to the hospital on time; will go to waste.

Amaya's grandmother and her daughter-in-law know about Sneha's health problem and about the house being mortgaged???

I don't think Jazz was very happy to hear what Uma said regarding Amaya's interest in Mantu.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice post!
I also agree with everyone . The show started with a very slow beginning. Specially fast entry of the negative characters and a sad beginning made me feel bored.

With that pushing too hard now to fell Amaya and Mantu in love or Rachita and Rama in love is also freaking me out.
Specially the way today Mantu told his story to Amaya to end Uma's story. Wasn't needed.

Chiklu could tell it, that would be more heart touching. Specially if one day he shared this story with Jas. Jas could tell this to Amaya and she could feel more intense love for Mantu------the guy who never seeks sympathy. With that Jas'a character would get a new look. When she would think about how fortunate she was or is to have a family.

So for the future track , I want the same as you.
Sneha should start learning how to deal with Rudra or other independently. She needs to be stronger than her daughters. To make Amaya the central character if they cut her character down----------that will be a mistake. Diabetes is not a huge disease. In every five there is one diabetes patient. Even kids have it, players have it. So not a big deal. That can't be an excuse for her to let the daughters earn and take care of home and Rudra and her parents-------she will sleep. That will be a murder of Sneha's character.

Meanwhile the three girls can start their boutique or a new business. No one gets job in 2months. For normal cases that's impossible, specially for a girl like Rachita( less in education, high in style and etc) And 4lakh can't be finished in 2months, specially in a place like Banaras. Amaya knows about fashion. Rachita wanted to be an interior decorator( so far I can remember). They can start an online business. Amaya lived in Paris. So she must be good in French. Banaras is a city of tourist attraction . So she can meet with french customers through the help of Mantu.

I also want a story of Sneha's past. Rishi who was a lover boy. He loved Sneha so much that he wanted to give her every little thing. But to do this he started to fell in traps of criminals and lost his business. Thus her trust and Rishi's character wouldn't be ruined. Chaubeyji would stay good in his position than turning in to a villain.

Seeing his granddaughters Chaubeyji would realize that Sneha's ------parwarish was better than him. He guarded his daughter so much and was so possessive that his daughter couldn't do anything like her daughters are doing. Thus he would accept Sneha as a great daughter because she had taught her daughters well.

Later the relationship can grow stronger. Rama-Rachita is going nice. I love their sweet story. Just no rush is needed now for Rama and Rachita to marry each other for some weird trouble.

Rudra! That guy is irritating. I wish some day either his Dad, or Chaubeyji just slap on his face. Or Mantu and Rama can beat him and throw in Ganges.
Well Rama and Mantu both are body builders. So...😉


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