Sandhir FF : Spirals

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Sarim.fatmi

@Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

awesome superb update dear.

yaar this story is full of mystery

love sabdhir flashback scene.

if they love each other unconditionally then y did they got seperated.

yaar do revail d mystery soon.

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@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Awesome update.😊

So sanyukta is weak, nothing much happened to her. That's nice.😊

But whom was Randhir referring to..?😲

Flashback was wonderful, Sanyukta and Randhir were in Relationship.😃

Update soon. 😊

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Okay So thankfully Sanyu is all right. This mysterious "he" now needs to be uncovered soon.
The Title compliments the story perfectly- Spirals- Round & round & round with mysteries..Ooouuu* #Giving sound effects😆

I am actually enjoying the flashbacks..Did I mention it before?
Its kind of unique, in terms of writing.
Well, Srishti are you an expert in penning down every emotion so beautifully?
Applause for the flashback in this update. The way you penned the night- so Hot & Romantic, plus not making it sound absurd.

Keep writing.

Love,
-Ayushi