SHUDH DESI ROMANCE :- CHAPTER 2: page 4 :21/6

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So guys!!!Manasa here !! I'm with a new os :- ...the idea popped in my mind ...people fall in love in different ways...and so do they make friends in different places...do u all think random people...meet at a big fat Indian wedding and fall in love with each other...and make new friends????well I do think so!!! ...thought the random people are high egoistic people ...what if they're egos bring them closer??
So here's the character sketch and do let me know if I should continue with my thought!!!
CABIR DHAWAN:- he is the one guy who can be any good peoples best friend in no time...but at the same time can be the worst enemy to the bad...he's a cool kinda guy...he works as a film actor...hes just 21 he attends college too whil he shoots ...girls love him for the way he is...he is a cupid for many of his co actors...and even ...his best friends ...his best friends include 4 people :-
MANIK MALHOTHRA:- this another guy who is a actor and a director...he owns half of the film industry...he is a hardcore guy..with an icecold heart...his ego is the one thing people hate about...cabir is his childhood friend ...they always compete in the industry...he is not intrested in girls not even a bit!!!...he used to date alya for a short period but they broke up...and now alya is getting married to his other best buddy
DHRUV VEDANT :- he is the most sweetest guy u can find..in the place right now...he is the other hand in maniks business and directing ...he has produced many movies ...and is searching a new heroine for his upcoming film which stares manik in the lead and cabir second lead...he is getting married to his childhood sweetheart ...
ALYA MURTHY :-she is a sweetie ...she loves dhruv a lot as he was her only supporting hand when manik had left her...but she dosent hate manik as he was the reason she and dhruv are together now...she acted in a few movies too but quit the job...she has a best friend named mukthi and has 2 younger sisters nandini and navya...they all are south Indians ...nandini and navya stay in abroad and Alya stays here with their parents ...
MUKTHI VARDHAN:- she is a harsh girl...she hates people around her accept...her friends ...she loves to torture people ...a broken character...who needs to be mendded as soon as possible...she helps alya in her fashion designing label ...they both own it and its worldwide famous ...
NANDINI MURTHY:- a sweet bubby golu girl...she stays in us with her elder sister navya ...she is the most pampered girl in home ..as she is the youngest ...her elders love her ..as she is the most sweetest anyone could find...but she has a little ego...as she completed her studies in Cambridge and that's prestigious ...her life is very weak one...she is too emotional...she can't take more sadness...as she is very beautiful she wants to act in some movie ...before she returns back to us ...she is back to India now to attend her sistas wedding ...with
NAVYA MURTHY :- she is the second daughter of the murthys ...she is a matured girl ...she works as a chef in the most expensive hotel in us ...she loves her two sisters ...she ...is not much into films but love to watch cabirs movies...she knowz it that he is alyaz best friend ...and cabir is her fav actor...she is a great singer like her sisters
OK guys for now that is the character sketch ...with time I will introduce u to new characters
Prologue :-
It is the time for the most awaited wedding of this year the big fat Indian wedding of dhruv and alya...so manik'dhruv'alya'mukthi and cabir are childhood friends ...alyas friends never met navni nor did they see their pics they just hardly know their names...but all are busy preparing for the wedding ...nandini is selected as the wedding planner for the wedding ...and manik and cabir are going to pick them from the airport...in 10 hours...so do u wanna read the full amazing story catch a flight with me ???who are in this ride with me??do comment !!!!
-loads of love , manasa

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
Loved it...
Continue soon... :)
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Originally posted by: doll12345

So guys!!!Manasa here !! I'm with a new os :- ...the idea popped in my mind ...people fall in love in different ways...and so do they make friends in different places...do u all think random people...meet at a big fat Indian wedding and fall in love with each other...and make new friends????well I do think so!!! ...thought the random people are high egoistic people ...what if they're egos bring them closer??

So here's the character sketch and do let me know if I should continue with my thought!!!
CABIR DHAWAN:- he is the one guy who can be any good peoples best friend in no time...but at the same time can be the worst enemy to the bad...he's a cool kinda guy...he works as a film actor...hes just 21 he attends college too whil he shoots ...girls love him for the way he is...he is a cupid for many of his co actors...and even ...his best friends ...his best friends include 4 people :-
MANIK MALHOTHRA:- this another guy who is a actor and a director...he owns half of the film industry...he is a hardcore guy..with an icecold heart...his ego is the one thing people hate about...cabir is his childhood friend ...they always compete in the industry...he is not intrested in girls not even a bit!!!...he used to date alya for a short period but they broke up...and now alya is getting married to his other best buddy
DHRUV VEDANT :- he is the most sweetest guy u can find..in the place right now...he is the other hand in maniks business and directing ...he has produced many movies ...and is searching a new heroine for his upcoming film which stares manik in the lead and cabir second lead...he is getting married to his childhood sweetheart ...
ALYA MURTHY :-she is a sweetie ...she loves dhruv a lot as he was her only supporting hand when manik had left her...but she dosent hate manik as he was the reason she and dhruv are together now...she acted in a few movies too but quit the job...she has a best friend named mukthi and has 2 younger sisters nandini and navya...they all are south Indians ...nandini and navya stay in abroad and Alya stays here with their parents ...
MUKTHI VARDHAN:- she is a harsh girl...she hates people around her accept...her friends ...she loves to torture people ...a broken character...who needs to be mendded as soon as possible...she helps alya in her fashion designing label ...they both own it and its worldwide famous ...
NANDINI MURTHY:- a sweet bubby golu girl...she stays in us with her elder sister navya ...she is the most pampered girl in home ..as she is the youngest ...her elders love her ..as she is the most sweetest anyone could find...but she has a little ego...as she completed her studies in Cambridge and that's prestigious ...her life is very weak one...she is too emotional...she can't take more sadness...as she is very beautiful she wants to act in some movie ...before she returns back to us ...she is back to India now to attend her sistas wedding ...with
NAVYA MURTHY :- she is the second daughter of the murthys ...she is a matured girl ...she works as a chef in the most expensive hotel in us ...she loves her two sisters ...she ...is not much into films but love to watch cabirs movies...she knowz it that he is alyaz best friend ...and cabir is her fav actor...she is a great singer like her sisters
OK guys for now that is the character sketch ...with time I will introduce u to new characters
Prologue :-
It is the time for the most awaited wedding of this year the big fat Indian wedding of dhruv and alya...so manik'dhruv'alya'mukthi and cabir are childhood friends ...alyas friends never met navni nor did they see their pics they just hardly know their names...but all are busy preparing for the wedding ...nandini is selected as the wedding planner for the wedding ...and manik and cabir are going to pick them from the airport...in 10 hours...so do u wanna read the full amazing story catch a flight with me ???who are in this ride with me??do comment !!!!
-loads of love , manasa

i like it. please,post soon. and if you can please send me pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great plot...
Well expressed...
Expecting so much from it...
Eager to read...
Update soon...
Do pm me if possible

Good luck princess for your story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds good. PM me when you update
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luks really interesting...update soon plz😊
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Love it
Amazing char sketch and prologue
Do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sound interesting...
nice prologue...
plzz continue nd pm me when u nxt update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1:-
Mumbai and delhi were famous for many things but were the most famous for the two hottest guys...manik and cabir...manik belonged to mumbai and cabir from Delhi ...though they are most of the time in mumbai they do visit delhi sometimes...but now they have taken this hotness to Mangalore...
"Manik yaar !!!tu jaantha nahi hai ...how much happy I'm attending this wedding ...humari sweetie ka wedding mein toh maza hi aane wala hai!!!" Cabir told manik as they were seated in the backseat of the car jobless talking about their upcoming adventure the shaadi..
"Kya yaar cabir!!!what excitement ...ek toh itne old ladies honge...fir shaadi hoga subah ke 6 baje !!!...yeah koi time hai shaadi karne ka ...aur phir ...piyali mausi ..bohath sweet hai par hame itne saare kaam denge ...ufff" manik told in a disguised look
"Paar soch yaar ...agar Hume is shaadi mein humari soul mate mil gayi toh...aur itne hot ladkiyon mein ek ladki toh mujhe mil hi jaaege " cabir told sarcastically
"Haaa yaar even I wish I get the *soul mate* ...manik looked out of the window
They reached the murthy house it was a huge villa a little old fashioned but very nice...it was a wooden villa...it had huge gardens and a pond...everything perfect ...cabir and manik ...came and touched piyali and shantanu murthys feet ... *piyali murthy and shantanu murthy...the most successful married business couples of all time...they had this big ad agency ...their three daughters were their diamonds of the family..they were the coolest parents u will find...manik and cabir adored them ...and even they liked them as their own sons..."manik ...cabir my bachas ...flight teek thi nah...tum Dono ki dad or mom kaha hai...???" Piyali asked politely
"Woh aunty...mom aur dad shaadi mein aayenge they were hooked up so " manik stammered and told ...piyali gave a faint smile ...
The rest of the day was covered up by manbir pulling dhrulyaz legs ...mukthi having fun with them...piyali making manbir eat lots of sweets and so on ...manbir slept peacfully...the rest of the night ...
THE NEXT MORNING
manbir were disturbed by people chattering near their room ...
"Arre aaj to nandini aur navya aanewale hena ?...suna hai bohath badal gaye hai dono...chote kapde...Baal saare short and all " a woman nearly screamed ...and many others woman agrees to it .
Piyali came holding a tray with aloo puri and coffee for the boys...
"Baache utho ...I have a work for u ...tum logo ko nandini or navya aur abhimanyu ko pick karna hai...abhi ka flight pehle hai ..then u 3 pick navni from there OK boys???
Piyali told them
Manbir gave each other a sad look they remembered the Aunty's conversation... But they couldn't deny they quickly had a shower and changed...they went down all the girls were literally drooling over them...and them being them showed attitude and took a car piyali had told and went to the airport...first the picked abhi in no time the trio become comfortable and chilled out waiting for the girls...after an hour two girls wearing salwar kameez one yellow and the other ...blue with long and gorgeous hairs...looking 10/10 ..came out with their luggage ..."cabir manik "navya started screaming ...piyali had described the boys names to the girls ..and navya scremed their names the trio came running towards them ...cabir saw navya and felt as if a huge truck hit him a love truck ...he straightened himself and told "tum piyali aunty ki beti ho...waaawww piyali aunty ne tume plan karke banaya haan ...tumari choti mothu behen kaha hai?" Cabir told with a smirk ...nandini was collecting her luggage's ...while manik went and helped her first he couldn't see her face it was covered with her hair...the moment he went to collect luggage's ...their hand touched and she turned to see her...they both had an eyelock ...they straightened themselves not wanting to create more embracement ...nandini took he bags and went and sat in the car ...she didn't speak a word while the others were continuosully chittering... Manikz eyes couldn't leave nanidini even fr a min...they reached the murthy house and nandini ran to he mom and hugged her she screamed "mamma .." Manik was lost in her beautiful voice ...he was falling for. A girl like this for the first time ...nandini and navya wnrt to meet alya...they met her and the four I mean mukthi alya nandini navya became friends in no time...while the four boys chilled the whole day ...

Guys do tell me how was the first part ...comment below people ...-loads of love ,manasa
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey..
nice start..
wld lve to read more...
plzz update soon nd thnx for the pm..

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