Yuvreen ss: Best friends to life patners PART 2 UPDATED 16/7/15

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Yuvreen ss
Best friends to life patners?


Teaser

"Suvi no need to worry...waise bhi yuvraj hi toh hai...you are besties yaar..." Anne said as she reassured Suvreen who had just been married to her best friend. To be shocked was an understatement for her when she knew that she was going to be married. And when she heard she was going to marry him she was almost mad. She and Yuvraj both had tried to convince their parents but all in vain. She was young and was still studying although it was the last year of her college. And Yuvraj, he was just one batch senior to her and had just started working. One year difference was a negligence and anyone who saw them could just say they were two crazy teenagers.
But Suvreen had to marry. She had lost her father from when she was a child due to her cruel uncle. Now when everything was falling back into place he was back and demanded land for him. While in the will Suvreen's father had written that she could keep the land if she was married and thus her mother putting her into emotional blackmailing and being the only daughter she had to agree for the marriage for her.

On the other side Yuvraj's parents agreed as they understood the vulnerable situation of Suvreen's mother and they could not find a better girl for Yuvraj later who could get along with their son so well. From childhood Yuvraj and Suvreen had been together. So Yuvraj's parents did not want to let go of this chance even if it was too early as he aged just 21. Decisions were taken,dates were fixed,engagement done,marriage done, but will the two best friends accept each other as life patners?


So I am back with a story on yuvreen again after long. I don't know if its still nice to read but its just an attempt on a different kind of concept...atleast different concept for me to write. Hope you will like it. :)
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Sahas

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Part 1- page 1
Part 2- page 2


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay me first to comment
Sahas is back to writing hugs
Amazing teaser and concept looking forward to read the story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeyyy sahas is back with a bang with another story. U know na bacha how much i love reading your stories. I am so happy.
plz do update jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh btw loved the teaser and i am sure story will be nice too.
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Part 1

Anne and Naro sat near Suvreen who had a bridal wear and a worried look on her face. She had hundreds of thoughts in her mind right then. Anne and Naro tried to calm her down.
'Suvi itna tensed kyu ho rahi hai. Its fine na. Two weeks ke baad exams and then you are a graduate. Uske baad you can take up job na.'
'Anne bata main kispar concentrate karu...do week mein exams hain. And I cant imagine I'm married. I mean...mujhe bahot tension ho rahi hai.'
Naro- 'koi baat nahi Suvi...atleast thank god it's Yuvraj. Warna aise hi koi anjaan hota toh tu kya karti. This is better.'
'Haan woh toh hai. Par phir bhi. Aur mumma bhi nahi hai...aunty uncle bhi yahaan nahi. Koi problem hua toh...'
Anne and Naro- 'Toh hum hai na. 24*7 hours service.'
With that they hugged Suvreen.
'Bahot late hogaya hai. Hume jana hoga. Take care.' Just then Yuvraj enters.
'Toh maharani apne do billiyon ke saath counselling kar rahi hai.' he says sarcastically to lighten the mood.
Anne and Naro turned angrily to him and said 'Tum ab bhi nahi sudhroge na.'
Yuvraj smiled. 'Majak tha yaar. Sab itne tensed hokar baithe hai isliye'
Everyone smiled.
Anne- 'Yuvi iska dhyaan rakhna. Warna pankaj udaas banke reh jayegi. Aur pata nahi kin kin ka dimag kharab karegi'
Suvreen-'Hello main sun rahi hun ok'.
The three of them laughed while Suvreen frowned.
'Koi nahi topper teri top mala ab tak upar mein hi latki hai. Neeche aane ko time hai abhi.' Yuvraj said.
All of them laughed.
'Achha hume chalna hoga. Bye both of you.' Both said in unison.
'Bye. Good night.' Yuvraj and Suvreen replied.
Anne- 'Waise mauka achha hai. Have fun!' she winked.
'Kya???' both yuvraj and suvreen stared at each other.
Yuvraj ran after Anne but she had already run off.
He closed the main entrance and returned back to his no correction their room.
Suvreen sat worried again. She saw Yuvraj and blinked blankly.
'Kya? Main vampire nahi hun.'
'Par ye sab...weird nahi hai...yeh ghar aur bas do log yahan'
'Weird toh hai. Ab kya karein jhelna padega.'
'Hum ghar mein rehte toh better hota hai na. Sabke saath.'
'Teri pyaari aunty ka kamal hai. Wohi boli ki uss ghar ko jao. College jaldi pahunchoge office ke paas hai...vagera vagera'
Suvreen nodded her head and sat down. Yuvraj looked at her and said, 'Tu ja change karle. Main kuch banata hoon khaane ke liye.'
'Woh uss side aur ek room hai na. Main wahin chali jaati hu' enquired Suvreen.
Yuvraj replied, ' Haan par woh abhi saaf nahi hai. Aaj thoda adjust karle kal dekhenge usse'.
Suvreen smiled and said,'Koi baat nahi. Main aaj yahan adjust karlungi'
Yuvraj nodded and left the room. Suvreen looked at the room and sighed. How life had changed drastically,she thought. If it would have been any other day she and Yuvraj would have been chatting from their balconies and would have been having what we would typically say,a best friend walla time.
But look at them, they were here standing as husband and wife for the world while for themselves they were yet best friends only. She wanted to cry for herself,for him who suffered along with her but she could not. Days before the wedding she had spent numerous hours crying upon Yuvraj's shoulder for this but not anymore. She had promised him that. She had to stand strong for that stupid uncle of hers and for destiny. If destiny wanted her to stand this then she will go through it without any fail. Shrugging off further thoughts she took off the heavy jewellery and proceeded to change the heavy costume that had tired her enough.


Precap-
"Ye mangalsutra...sindoor hai gannuji kya kya chupaun...aur kaise..." Suvreen looked at herself in the mirror irritatedly.
"Yuvraj!!"
"Kya hua yaar...subah subah chilla kyu rahi hai"
Suvreen frowned at him carrying the mangalsutra on one hand and the box of sindoor in the other. Yuvraj understood what the problem was.


So how is the beginning? I don't know if its fine...I think something's wrong with this. Its just a cute story and nothing much serious in it. Somehow I think its going haywire. So really need your comments to judge this. Afterall kissi mahan vyakti ne kaha tha-"we are bad judges of ourselves". Hehehhh...plzz do comment and let me know how is it.
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Sahas
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the first Part SahasšŸ¤—
Very nicely written
Loved Yuvreen scenes
Annie, Naro Suvreen scenes were good too
Looking forward to the next part
Cont Soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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And i loved this
simple cute innocent
truely awesome
do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sahas its lovely. i loved it. continue soon.
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Super story princess..šŸ‘ā­ļø
Keep on going just like this..loved the concept.😊
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Thank you people for your reviews...love you all!
Part 2

She came out of the bathroom wearing her pyjamas when Yuvraj knocked.
"Topper...tera hogaya? Main abhi aajaun?" he enquired waiting for an answer.
"Haan aajao."
He came inside with two plates and kept them on the side table.
"Yuvraj...tumne khaana banaya...woh bhi itne? Kya zaroorat thi...snacks hi chalta na" she said a little surprised.
"Ohh maate...itna bhi ab mann mein laddoo na phod...ki abhi main din raat teri sewa karunga" he replied sarcastically.
Suvreen frowned and looked irritatedly at him. Yuvraj realised it was not the right time for any sarcastic remarks. He ran forward to explain.
"Woh kaka pehle hi bana ke chale gaye thhe. Maine bas garam kardiya."
Suvreen pulled the table near the sofa and gave him his plate.
They ate their food in silence. After having the food Suvreen offered to wash the dishes and carried the dishes to the kitchen. After some minutes she came back and saw Yuvraj still on the sofa and in a deep thought.
"Tum soye nahi ab tak?"
"Neend nahi aa rahi thi...tu ja soja...kal subah tujhe college bhi jaana hai"
"Umm...nahi mujhe thoda padhna hai...do weeks mein ab exams hain. Tum so jao"
Actually both of them wanted the other to take up the bed so that they could escape and sleep somewhere else. It was very awkward to share the bed but they did not know what to do also.
They looked at each other for a second and started in unison.
"Mujhe pata hai..." and after a few more seconds of eye talk they knew what the other wanted and laughed.

"Ab tu meri baat samajh gayi toh ditectly bol raha hu...tu bed pe so ja main kahin bhi manage kar lunga"
"Nahi...tum kyu...main manage kar lungi" she protested.
"Tu toh waise bhi bed se bhi gir jati hai... agar kahin manage karke kal kamar todi toh mujhpar hi blame aayega"
"Kya main kab giri thi?"
"Nahi exams ke time jab subah subah main tujhe jab uthaata tha...tab toh main hi tujhe uthakar neeche rakh deta tha nahi?"
"Haa woh bas..."
"Bas kya?" said Yuvraj giving a smile of triumph.
"Haa toh phir tum jaise snail ke tarah sote ho...bed par soke hi tumhara muscle cramp ho jata hai...aur subah tedha gardan leke ghumte ho...phir aunty nahi toh mujhe apne haath ka exercise karake usse theek karana padta hai"
"Haa woh toh bas"
"Bas kya?" Now it was Suvreen's turn to give that victory smile.
"Dekho ladhai karke koi fayda nahi" said Suvreen.
"Woh mujhe pata hai ladkiya awkward ho jati hai aise situation mein. Isliye..." said Yuvraj looking down.
"Haa toh ladkiya bhi samajh jate hain ki ladkon ke mann mein kya chal raha hai...aur waise bhi you are my best friend yaar...bachpan se tumhe janti hun...trust karti hoon tumhe" she replied giving an assuring smile.
So then both of them moved towards the bed and took their respective sides. The day was hectic so they both fell asleep as soon as they landed on the bed.
Suvreen got up early in the morning by the alarm clock. She finished her daily chores and went to the kitchen to make some breakfast. She did not know much about cooking but she did know some common things atleast. She made some sandwich and looked at the clock. 6:30, it showed. There was one hour and half still left for her college. She went to her room and took out her books to study for sometime.
Yuvraj woke up and saw Suvreen all dressed and was on the sofa with a book in her hand. He wished a quick "Good morning" to her and left the bed to complete his work too. After he came back being dressed for office he looked at Suvreen who was sitting infront of the mirror frowning.
Before he could say anything,
"Yuvraj!!" she called out.
"Kya hua?"
Suvreen looked with a worried face at him carrying the mangalsutra on one hand and the box of sindoor in the other. Yuvraj understood what the problem was.
"Ye mangalsutra...sindoor hai gannuji kya kya chupaun...aur kaise...mujhe bahot awkward lagega going with all this you know "
"Actually maine bhi kissiko nahi bataya office mrin iss shaadi le baare mein...so its ok"
"Ab please mujhe ismein help karo...main inhe nikalna bhi mahi chahti aur dikhana bhi nahi"
"Nikal hi do...simple"
"Nahi na...woh mumma shayad aayengi aaj yahan...toh tum toh jaante ho na unhe...chote chote cheezon ka bhi dhyaan rakhti hai...aise dekhengi toh shayad..."
she explained as she felt much awkward. She hoped this day had never come.
Yuvraj nodded. He opened the wardrobe and brought a scarf. He went near her and wound it in her neck just as to cover her mangalsutra.
"Arre ye toh main bhool hi gayi thi"
Yuvraj simply shrugged.
"Ab iska kya karoon?" she indicated the sindoor.
He laughed seeing her. Suvreen was confused.
"Mujhe laga tum ladkiyaan styles aur fashion ke maamle mein maahir ho...par tujhe dekh ke ab nahi lag raha"
"Haan toh nahi hu toh kya karu?"
She looked at him as if pleading for help.
He simply picked up the comb and combed her hair in such a way that some hair fell on her forehead. She simply sat and watched what he was doing. He further tied the hair at the back into a long pony tail as she always did. He then took some sindoor and lifted the hair at front and put the slightest yet visible trace of the sindoor on her forehead.
Till then both of them felt nothing but that, that very moment both hearts skipped a bit. Suddenly they started feeling a sense of duty, respect and protectiveness over each other. Their eyes stared deep into each other's to find out the answers to their suddenly popped questions. But neither could find the answers as the same questions reflected in their eyes.

Precap-


So again here with a stupid,smashing whatever you say update. It was literally like shaadi tune kya kiya at last ya phir sindoor tune kya kiya...hai na? šŸ˜†
Ok now I'll be waiting for your comments now.
Love
Sahas


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