Part 3 UPDATED pg 5 ~ SS ~~ LoHaaR Ka BETA aur RAJ KUMARI - Page 5

Originally posted by: greeshma014

Sara, my jaan..i already praised you in FB na?? Baar baar ek hi baat bole toh tum bore ho jayegi..i know,it's jodha and Akbar's story..still u added a small RukLal scene ..You made me happy.. 😳..Btw I'm liking how the characters is shaping up.. Jodha is good..make their first meeting memorable..And i absolutely loved how u strictly follows mughal protocols of 16 th century in this story..your Urdu is tough for me to understand.. 😆..But because of you,i want to learn Urdu..it's such an awesome language..

waiting for next update..waiting for jodha and Akbar's first meeting..

Originally posted by: mishtidoi

I read yesterday only, but commenting today.

Fab write up, with all the urdu and i think even mixed Hindi-rajasthani is there.

Abhi toh character build ho raha hai...but thank God, yahan pe DIL gayab ka koi locha nahi hai...sare organs apni sahi jagah par hain...😉😆

AIse hi long updates dena magar jaldi dena...aur woh dusra FF nahi kiya update?😒

Originally posted by: amina1

Sara bahot khub,lovely,please update soon🤗

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

finally u updated after long time...loved the chapter that too so long thank you so much😊 and especially the story is mainly focused on jalal and urdu language . but pls dont sideline jodha and dont give much importance to ruk thats my personal request...we want akdha in action

update soon
pm me too

Originally posted by: ghalibmirza

kepp it up sara👍🏼

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Thanks for updating ... Awesome update.. .. it took some time for me to grasp all those urdu dialogues... i read it multiple times to get the right meaning... and the whole ambiance u 've created was authentic... left me wandering in that period... Agra fort... its going very interesting...precap ... jalal n jodhas first meeting it seems...eagerly waiting to read more of ur story...

U accepted my buddy req.. but didn't pm me...plz do pm me from next update onwards..

Originally posted by: smile.sara

Thanx alot for liking my dear 😛

And abt urdu ... Urdu is my mother tongue ... Pls feel free to ask any word related to my story , abt show or any other word u want to know ... I will be more than happy 😃

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Abt your request ...well this story is abt akdha ... And next chapter will be loads of akdha... But u see ..i cant skip ruku too ...

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There are two types of people who dont like ruku ... One who completely cant bear rukayya ... Or dont except that she was akbar first and chief queen and other who dont like her bec of her portrayal in this show... If u are the second one then u will like my ruku ...bec in my stories ... Ruqayya is no where near to show like ryqayya... My ruqayya is so regal and calculative ... True princess but jodha is so sweet and bubbly ... So u see both are good ... There thinking are mature like princess ... They will have their own insecurities but they dont behave like 21st century chawl women ...

I hope u will enjoy ...bec in upcoming parts ... The story will move on to out side palace and then to yatra and will revolve around jodha and jalal only 😊