Part 3 UPDATED pg 5 ~ SS ~~ LoHaaR Ka BETA aur RAJ KUMARI

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hi m a new reader of ur ss I luved ur stry spcly ur Urdu wordings it sounds amazing while reading... lovely update... do continue soon...

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Sara

@smile.sara

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: harshu27
hi m a new reader of ur ss I luved ur stry spcly ur Urdu wordings it sounds amazing while reading... lovely update... do continue soon...

Thanx my dear ... I m happy u like it... My stories revolve around jalal... I hope u will enjoy reading about jalal ...on forum most of stories revolve around jodha ... My story main leads are jodha and jalal and story is from jalal perspective ... Thanx once again for liking ...and feel free to ask meaning of any urdu word which u find hard in my story or in show ... Urdu is my mother tongue u see😳

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greeshma014

@greeshma014

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

😊 Finally you updated..long update..but loved it..story is going in a very interesting way.. awesome.. 👏

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

AWESOME UPDATE😊 INTERESTING CONCEPT, LOVED IT, PLZ UPDATE SOON😊

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

finally u updated after long time...loved the chapter that too so long thank you so much😊 and especially the story is mainly focused on jalal and urdu language . but pls dont sideline jodha and dont give much importance to ruk thats my personal request...we want akdha in action

update soon
pm me too

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amina1

@amina1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Sara bahot khub,lovely,please update soon🤗

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Thanks for updating ... Awesome update.. .. it took some time for me to grasp all those urdu dialogues... i read it multiple times to get the right meaning... and the whole ambiance u 've created was authentic... left me wandering in that period... Agra fort... its going very interesting...precap ... jalal n jodhas first meeting it seems...eagerly waiting to read more of ur story...

U accepted my buddy req.. but didn't pm me...plz do pm me from next update onwards..

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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mishtidoi

@mishtidoi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

I read yesterday only, but commenting today.

Fab write up, with all the urdu and i think even mixed Hindi-rajasthani is there.

Abhi toh character build ho raha hai...but thank God, yahan pe DIL gayab ka koi locha nahi hai...sare organs apni sahi jagah par hain...😉😆

AIse hi long updates dena magar jaldi dena...aur woh dusra FF nahi kiya update?😒

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Sara

@smile.sara

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: greeshma014
😊 Finally you updated..long update..but loved it..story is going in a very interesting way.. awesome.. 👏

Meri greeshu meri besty 🤗

U didnt say any thing abt ruklal...i added only for u yaar warna in this story there was no ruku thats why i made them cant meet able in first chapter but due to your insist i added this chori chupi ki meeting😛

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I know i know ...u and amina ( i shared it with amina too) already praised it on FB 😃...but dil mange more more more🤪😆

And u asked for ruklal first night it wil be in next story ... Which us about ruku jalal salima and bairam khan ... In this story no salima and in another story no jodha ...

In short itna chohta comment nahi chale ga ... Nahi chalega nahi chalega... Hamari mange puri karo...😆...0oopSi ...zyada senti ho gae mae 😆