Read the three parts in a go...
Loved it thoroughly...
Nicely written dear...
i loved specially this story for few reasons... For making sultan madhu's brother Lol... I m so glad u did that...
For showing rk a doctor... I m so fond of doctors...
For showing Rk being forced in the marriage...mostly it would be madhu but this time its Rk... I have written a similar story where rk being forced to marry madhu & the story title is "pyaar hai" its a three shot... I dont know whetheru have read it... If u get a chance give a try... But there i didnt make madhu wait for long to make rk fall for him... Here too i dont think rk can hold his anger for long... He started liking her... He is considering as his wife... He is giving value to her marriage chain & sindoor & he is being possessive too... So i think his evil smirk on their first night & his vow to torture her will go in vain... Well i guess its already drained... He started loving his biwi & also accepting his for ed marriage... Well who will not love a girl like madhu... She is beautiful sweet & well wducatwd... Madly in love with him...cares for him...what more he needs?? Lol... Above all she knows to cook well... She won in kheer competition... Not to forget that... So man...c'mon start romancing her dude...
Great going...
Continue soon...
Thanks for sending pms...
I wont be regular here so i ll take time to reply but will never fail to leave me feed back...
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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