SS - MANVEER LOVE STORY(aft last episode)chp4 pg4

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PART 1 - pg1
PART 2 - pg 2

PART 3 pg 3[

CHAPTER 1 ( scroll down )
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( most probably will finish it in 4 chapters )
THIS IS A SHORT OS ON MANVEER AFTER THE LAST EPISODE IN THE SERIAL .

AFTER KNOWING MANVEER MISUNDERSSTANDINGS CLEAR OFF AND AFTER J AND MANYATAH PATCH UP AND AFTER EVERYONE GETS TO KNOW OF UNNATHI AND VIJAY .


KOMAL - she finds all the 5 kids in the hall hugging ( manyatah u day unnayi vijay n j ) . She feels happy and hug both j and manyatah


J - mamma am sorry for everything . I was rude to u at times and I promise o won't repeat it again

KOMAL - it's ok baby and kisses her

AFTER A WEEK


MANYTAHA - she wakes up in the morning at 4am . She doesn't feel sleepy . Takes a shower and starts to udays place

UDAY - he is sleeping in his room hugging a pillow

MANYTAH - she comes and slowly without disturbing sleeps beside uday

UDAY - he moves and leaves pillow and hugs manytah " tho iradha kya hai princess "

MANYTAH - halkat veda ur pretending as ur asleep

UDAY - hum ek yuvraj hai and I need to be alert all the time even in my sleep

MANYTAH - woh tho thum ho she carasses his cheek and smiles

UDAY - princess r u thinking to do suhagrath before marriage

MANYTAHA - hearing it she moves away and sits on bed udayy !!!

UDAY - then wat r u doing . Don't do it and make me loose control yaar

MANYATAH - k uday I'll not sleep aside you am sorry

UDAY - but princess now u provoked me and I can't

MANYATAH - wat ?!!

UDAY - he pulls her and she falls on top of him . He rolls aside and now manyath is beneath him

MANAYTAH - uday I dint get sleep and missed u so came to see u . Pls uday leave na

UDAY - na , am not and he starts kissing on her lips

MANYTAH - she gets lost in the moment and kisses him back

Suddenly Manytah phone rings and she pushes uday aside

UDAY - he gets angry " yeh kabab hai huddi kaun hai "

MANYATAH - while taking on phone she has tears in her eyes

UDAY - he gets worried and asked wat happened

MANYTAH - dadi Saab ko hosh aagaya . She hugs him

UDAY - that's such a great news manyath , come let us go

MANYATAH - am leaving u take showe and come . Saying she leaves

UDAY - he takes shower and goes to Devgad palace

EVERYONE IS HAPPY THERE TALKING TO DS

DS - come uday beta

UDAY- he takes ds blessings

ALL HAVE BREAKFAT TOGETHER

DS - first am gonna get our Manytha and uday married next week

KOMAL - ma Saab ithna jaldi , arrangements and all

DS - now am not gonna delay it . Next week Monday is auspiscuous day and we are getting them married

EVEYONE FEELS HAPPY AND MANVEER GET EXCITED

MANYATH - she does shopping with unnathi and j

UDAY - he has some riyasath work and goes to jaigad for 4 days . Immediately after coming he goes Devgad palace to meet manytaha

MANYATH - she is taking shower in bathroom and thinking that only 2 days are left for their marriage

UDAY - he goes into room and doesn't find manytah . It's 11pm and princess should be in room but not here, may be in j or Aunty komal room . He is about to go and stopped by bathroom door sound . Soon he hides behind curtain

MANYATHA - she comes out of room with pink towel wrapped round her body exposing her bare shoulders and cleavage . Wet hair with droplets dripping down her expose shiny white thighs

UDAY - he just couldn't control looking at such a natural beauty he admires her milky skin tone and her face glowing

MANYATH - she is about to remove her towel but takes her phone and calls uday and surprised to hear his phone ringing in her room

UDAY - he closes door and lock and stare at manyath " u called and am here darling "

MANAYTAH - oh no uday , she hides behind curtain covering her body

UDAY - princess mujse kya shermana am your lover boy and to be husband . He nears her

MANYATAH - uday stay back am feeling weird in towel . Pls don't embarrass me

UDAY - come on princess after all yeh tho hona hi , am the guy who can see u in anyways he moves curtain and pull her out

MANYATAH - udayyy , she looks down and try's to pull towel down to cover her exposed knees

UDAY - he carcasses her cheeks and kisses her on eyes and traces her face with his fingers

MANYATA - she shivers

UDAY - he touches her bare shoulders and kisses her on neck

MANYATha - u day she turns back

UDAY - he hugs her from back and kisses on her shoulder

MANYATH - she is loosing . Uday pls

UDAY - today am not gonna listen princess and don't dare to stop me

MANYATAH - par uday yeh galath hai , we are not yet married

UDAY - everything is fair in love

MANYATa - she pushes u day and say pls uday

UDAY - he gets angry and say don't u trust me princess

MANYAT - it's not like that uday

UDAY - he moves back

MNAYATH - she hugs him and say " sorry uday "

UDAY - he smiles and kisses in her cheeks . Princess I can understand and I'll wait

MANVEER SHARE A HUG AND UDAY LEAVES

ON MONDAY MORNING 11 manveer MARRAIGE IS OVER AND THEY TAKE COUPLE TO JAIGAD FOR POOJA IN MAHAL . POOJA IS ON NEXT DAY MORNING AND BEFORE THAT THEH ARE NOT ALLOWED TO COMSUMMATE THEIR MARTAIGE AS PER JAIGAD RITUAL .

UDAY - he is so restless to finish pooja

FINALLY POOJA IS OVER AND THAT NIGHT THEY ARRANGE A SUIT FOR MANVEER IN UDAYS HOTEL AT MUMBAI

EVERYONE LEAVE THEN AT HOTEL AND GO

UDAY - he gets some call and its urgent and have meeting in laptop for more than 40 min

MANYAT - she waits and goes and take wash and sleeps as she is tired

UDAY - he comes and finds sleeping manytah and kisses her and goes to take wash and sleeps on bed beside her

MNAYATH - in sleep she rolls on remote on bed and tv loud sound comes . She wakes up and sit in bed

UDAY - princess look. U sat on remote

MANYAT - she takes remote and switches off . Omg uday I was scared

UDAY - really baby , he hugs her

MNAYAT - uday move am sleepy

UDAY - princess r u mad , it's our first night and u wanna sleep . Don't tell me now I don't know about it

MANYATAH - shut up uday I know . But am tired

UDAY - poor sweetheart he kisses her on forehead

MANYTAH - she wears a top and a track

UDAY - he slids his hand under her shirt and massage her navel

MANAYT - she becomes restless and hugs him

UDAY - he moves on her and get her beneath him

MANYATa - she carcasses his cheeks and kisses him on lips

UDAY - he starts unbuttoning her shirt and throw it down

BOTH GET COSY WITH EACH OTHER . BOTH OF THEIR CLOTHES ARE DOWN ON FLOOR

MANYAT - she spreads her legs welcoming uday

UDAY - he enters her with jerk but unable to do it

MANAYTA - she gets so much pain . Ahhaa uday wat r u doing am getting pain

UDAY - princess stop it . It's obvious for first time it pains and ur virgin and am gonna have tough time to get into u . Telling this he tries to thrust

MANAYT - no uday , she cries and ask him to stop

UDAY - princess , he moves aside and lie on bed and hug her . Don't worry and not gonna do anything which hurts u

MANYATH - she sits and tell , am sorry uday but donno am so scared . It's hurting much . Think I should see doctor

UDAY - princess pls chill it's k . No need to . It's quiet common

MNAYATA - r u sure

UDAY - am sure . And pls don't use ur brain

BOTH FALL ASLEEP IN EACH OTHERS ARMS . DAYS PASS AND MANYATH IS SO SCARED ABOUT IT AND UDAY WAITS FOR THE TIME TO MAKE HER READY FOR IT . ITS BEEN TWO MONTHS AFTER MARTIAGE . A POOJA IS ARRANGED AT PALACE


PUROHITH - he blesses manytha saying " santhaan prapth Ho "

UDAY - he laughs loud

EVERYONE - they stare at uday surprised

UDAY - he feels himself a fool for going it and pretends like attending a call and leaves

MANYAT - she feels bad . She know u uday laughed

KOMAL - she finds sadness in manyaths face and in room asks her personally if she is ok

MANYATH - she says she is fine

POOJA IS OVER AND EVERYONE LEAVE AND MANEER AT NIGHT

MANYATH - am sorry uday

UDAY - y princess

MANAYYA - i know u u laughed . I felt bad . Can't have kids without that

UDAY - princess i just love u . I don't lust u . Love ur heart

MANYAT - she hugs uday and decides to do it to night . Am ready today Uday at any cost

UDAY - princess chill that's k I can wait

MAYATH - if not today never

UDAY - hello mam wat happened ? Do u plan to leave me childless

MANYATB - shut up uday , am serious

UDAY - k princess I'll try but tell me if it hurts and no worries I can wait

BOTH BECOME COSY ON BED AND NOW ITS TIME FOR UDAY TO ENTER .

UDAY - he enters and thrust couple of times

MANYTAH - just bears pain and be normal infront of uday

UDAY - every now and then he looks at manayath and does it to make sure she is ok

MANYATH - she gets hell like pain but controls and kisses uday and rubs his back to tempt him

UDAY - he tempts and looses control and becomes wild and thrust very hard and finally he enters

MANAYT - she hugs him tight and hide face in his chest

UDAY - he reaches climax and pull her on him and lie in bed

MANYATB -she cries

UDAY - he feels his chest wet and looks at manayatah . He is worried and asks r u ok baby .

MNAYATA - am fine uDAY , love u . She kisses him

UDAY - he moves her and try to see her

MNAYATAB - she wraps herself with blanket and try to get up and feels pain in leg

UDAY - he wears pant and switch on light

MANYTAH - she wraps in blanket . Hold tummy and sit

UDAY - he is just horrified . He finds blood under her and in bed and holding her tummy . He cries out princess and falls on knees and holds her hands " u should have asked me to stop "

MANYATA - that's k uday .

UDAY - is it paining baby

MANYAT - not anymore uday . First it pained and not now . Wat u said is rite . Only till u break it pains and not after that

UDAY - he sees blood and get worried . I know it's common but I wanna make sure of ur still bleeding

MANYAT - no uday it's stopped and am fine . Just wanna take shower . Help me

UDAY - he helps her to tub and come into room and change bed sheet and blanket

MANAYAT - she comes out and sits

UDAY - he gives a pain killer

MANYAT - she takes it .

UDAY - he hugs and kisses her . R u fine

MANAYYAta - am fine and sound , but uday seriously a big hurdle is gone

UDAY - he laughs , princess ur so innocent . Love u he kisses

NEXT DAY MORNING .


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NEXT PART WILL BE UPDATED SOON ONLY OF U LIKE ME TO CONTINUE . THANK YOU
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After a long time naveena . Thank you

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PART - 2


UDAY - princess ur ok

MNAYTAH - am fine Uday

BOTH MANVEER GO DOWN FOR BREAKFAST .J AND VIJAY ALSO JOIN THEM FOR BREAKFAST

GIRI RAJ - beta Uday rishtha came for unnathi from Raigarh raj parivar . What do u think about Yuvraj Karan

J VIJAY UNNATHI MANVEER - they get shocked . THEY ALL KNOW that vijay and unnathi like each other

UNNATHI - she pinches Uday

UDAY - dad ab choti ka shaadi ke liye jaldi kyu

UNNATHI - yes dad I want to complete architect course . Pls I need an year time . Not now dad

GIRI raj - that's k beta . I just asked about it . Whenever u wanna marry u can

AFTER BRRAKFAST UNNATHI GOES TO VIJAY AND TELL THAT HE SHOULD DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT

VIJAY - what should I do to pleade GIRI raj uncle

MNAYATAH - I think u should do something praise worthy .

UDAY - yes vijay banna , I have one thing . I handle Mehra industries project which is collaborated with jaigad and Devgad companies . It takes minimum 8 months . I think it's time to prove urself

VIJAY - do u think Brij mamaji is gonna let me handle it

J - don't worry vijay bai I'll handle dad

VIJAY AND UNNATHI LEAVE

MANYTAH - she throws up

UDAY - kya HUA princess ur ok

J -jiji ur fine

MANAYYAH - guys am fine chill

J - r u sure . Jiji r u pregnant

MANYATH - no ways j

J - can't say jiji , throwing up and all . Will go to doctor for clarification

MANYATHA - I can't become pregnant in single day j

UDAY - he stamps on MNAYATAH foot

J - wat ?? Kya mathlab

UDAY - j she means to tell on this single day not . Like she is on precaution pills

J - k Uday , she leaves

UDAY - princess wat were u about to do . R u going to tell her that we consummated out marraige yesterday after 2 months of marriage

MANYTAH - no Uday it just came out of my mouth . Don't worry they won't think ur gay

UDAY - princess now that's limit . No one would ever think of me me like That

MANYAT - I know after all u were a play boy rite

UDAY - not anymore now . A single woman man from now till death .

MANYATAH - I know . But Uday u lost ur charm these days don't u think

UDAY - I really princess . Do u want to see it back . He pulls her into room

MANAYYH - no Uday pls . I just said to pull ur leg

AFTER A WEEK SOMEHOW UDAY MAANGE TO HANDLE PROJECT TO VIJAY .

AMITH MEHRA - he is owner of Mehra industries . He is 28 years old guy . Handling his business from 3 years alone after his father death in an accident . ( he has crush on MNAYTAH after seeing her in a party a month ago )

ITS BEEN 6 MONTHS SINCE THE PROJECT STARTED AND VIJAY HANDLING IT VERY WELL . They also got much profit in it . GIRIRAJ AND DS AND BRIJ ALL APPRECIATED VIJAY

BRIJ - I think we should have a small party for our profits . Don't u think vijay

GIRIRAJ - it's been a long time . We should

J - yes it's party time

DS - k day after tomorrow we are having party at Devgad palace

MANVEER - yes done

UDAY - he gets a designed party wear frock to MNAYATH

ON THE PARTY DAY MAYATH LOOKS STUNNING IN HER FULL LENGTH FROCK like a BARBIE DOLL

UDAY - princess Hume Marne ka iradha hai kya

MANYATAH - kya

UDAY - u look stunning , I feel like ... He holds her close

MANAYATH - Uday chodo we are in party , everyone is around

UDAY - tho kya am ur husband and I have right to

MANYTAH - she stamps on Uday feet and moves away

UDAY - bad move princess

AMITH MEHRA - hello Uday veer sing

UDAY - hello mr Mehra pls come .

BRIJ - welcome to da party young man

PARTY GOES ON EVERYONE ENJOY PARTY.

PERSON - arrangementa are good . A beautiful party

AMITH - nice party but not as beautiful as u ur highness ( Manyata )

MANAYYAH - she feels little bit weird but smiles

UDAY - he stares at AMITH . In fact feels like hitting on his face

AMITH - Uday veer can I have dance with MNAYATAH if u don't mind

UDAY - he was shocked and couldn't answer

MANYTAH - sorry AMITH actually I don't feel confortable dancing with others than Uday and my dad . Sorry . Pls excuse me guys I'll be back . She leaves

UDAY - he gives a victorious smile .

AMITH - he curses his fate

UDAY - he really gets angry with this guy AMITH . " how dare this bloody ask me for my wife's hand to dance " . I know it's common . Even I dance with other rajkumaris when they come and ask for my hand . It's a courtesy . But when it comes to my princess am possessive . I can't imagine another man's hand on my princess and dance is far away

PARTY IS OVER AND ALL OF THEM LEAVE .

UDAY - in his bedroom he is waiting for MAYATH . Where is princess . She dint come yet

MANYAT - from almost 2 weeks MAYATH feels weak and a different kind of craving and feelings . Also she misses her menses this month . SHE SPOKE ABOUt it to Komal 2 days back . Komal took her to hospital for blood test to confirm . As tool tests at home give wrong results .
RESULTS WOULD TAKE TWO DAYS .

UDAY - he goes to look for MAYATH and finds her sleeping on couch in hall . Omg she dozzed off . Dint even change dress . He lifts her and take to their room and keep her on bed . Cover her with blanket and kisses her on forehead .

MANAYYH - she smiles in sleep . Uday pls let me sleep

UDAY - he smiles and lie beside and curdle her

NEXT DAY MORNING

MANYATAH - she wakes up soon and see Uday sleeping . Takes wash and go to hospital for reports


UDAY - he wakes up and doesn't find Manyata - where did she go so early . Dint even tell me . He gets ready and calls her but she doesnt pick her phone . May be she went to meet DS . He calls j and even she doesn't lift

UNNATHI - kya HUA dada u look so worried

UDAY - choti I have been calling MANAYYAH n j and they r not taking up their phones

UNNATHI - don't worry dada . May b they dint see or busy with some work

UDAY - k choti am going to office . Today I have important deal .

UNNATHI - k bai good luck

DOCTOR - congrats MANAYYAH ur pregnent

MANYATAH - she feels happy

KONMAL - she gets excited and hug MAYATH . Am so happy beta . How many weeks doctor

DOCTOR - it's 3 weeks

KOMAL - small request doctor . Can u just hide the news

DOCTOR - yes maharani ji I understand this media . I won't reveal it unless u tell it in media

KOMAL - thank u . They leave

MNAYATH - ma y do u want to hide it

KOMAL - I don't want media mess and disturbance always behind u and all . We will reveal it after 3 months

MANAYAT - yes mom . She thinks inside to give news to Uday . She is happy

ADITHI MEHRA - younger sister of AMITH . She was a night stand of Uday in Oxford . Infact Uday stayed with her for 2 weeks . Generally he Would be only for a day with a girl . But this girl was found very sensitive . So slowly he got rid of her cleverly .

UDAY SAID HE LIKED HER BUT PTACTICALLY HE CANT MARTY AS HE IS ROYAL AND SHE IS NOT . ALSO HE GOT ENGAGED TO DEVGAD PRINCESS AT YOUNG AGE . HE SAID HE HAVE TO SACIFISE AND ADDED MUCH MASALA AND DRAMA LIKE HE IS MAJBOOR N HEARTBROKEN AND ALL.

ADITHI ALSO BELIEVED IT . BY THE TIME SHE GOT NEWS OF FATHERS DEATH AND CAME TO INDIA . LATER UDAY DINT TAKE HER CALLS OR ANSWER HER . NOW ITS BEEN 3 years since they saw each other






UDAY - in the way he finds a Phakir who knocks his glass . He opens to give money

PHAKIR BABA - he tells Uday " ur past will return back today which may effect ur present and ur future "

UDAY - he thinks it's ridiculous AND Gives money

PHAKIR - he smiles and returns back . Ek Kush kabari bhi ayega . Ek nanhe mehmaan aanewala thumari zindagi mein Jo thumari pyaar ko thumse hamesha ke liye cheenlega

UDAY - wat nonsense . Budda Paagal ho Gaya. Signal green and he starts car . Seriously what kind of crazy people are they . Kuch bhi bolthe


PRECAP - Uday is shocked to see ADITHI as his business partner ( as she is AMITH Mehra sister )

Secondly Phakir words keep ringing in his ears

Next MANAYYAH pregnancy news
He feels happy but remembers Phakir words . "Thumaara Khushi nanhe mehmaan thumari pyaar hamesha ke liye cheenlega " . He is kind of worried and searches for that baba ...
Loads of drama to take place

IF U LIKE IT PLS CLICK LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT .THANKS EVERYONE FOR COMMENTS . Sorry for mistakes .
Edited by puggyy - 10 years ago

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