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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update...

pls do pm me n continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: puggyy



Thanks
Will update in 2 days




Got It Dear... 😊 And About To Comment... 😊 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just Read Update.. 😊 It Was So Beautiful.. 😳 Love It How Uday Is Helping Vijay For Hus Better Image Infront Of Griraj... 😊 And Wow Manyata Is Pregnant... 😊 And Ohhh Goshhh Uday's Past Is Returning... Hope They This Didn't Separate ManVeer.. 😔 And Love The Way U R Creating Suspense... 😊 Continue Soon Plzzz Dear .. 😊 And Plzzz Make It SS or FF not OS.. Plzzz... Just A Small Request ... 😊 😳
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Wow - great update!!BTW - are u sure it's an OS, it seems like a short-story 😳.Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3


UDAY - he reaches office and goes to cabin

PA - sir u have a meeting with AMITH Chopra today at 11 and he is here


UDAY - k send him to my cabin

AMITH - hi Uday , how r u

UDAY - am good . How r u ? Pls take ur seat

BOTH OF THEM HAVE THEIR CINVERSATION

AMITH - I'll do with vijay bai and jaigad project will be handled by my sister as I can't manage both at time as I already have handful projects

UDAY - that's k AMITH , done

AMITH - I'll take ur leave Uday . My sister will meet u at 3pm

UDAY - that's k and he signs contract paper and AMITH leaves

All day Uday is busy with work and calls MAYATH in between .

ADITHI MEHRA - she comes and meets Uday

UDAY - he first gets shocked and covers himself up . Hi ADITHI how r u and ur here ??

ADITHI - I have ur appointment Uv sorry mr udayveer sing

UDAY - wat ?

ADITHI - am ADITHI Mehra sister of AMITH Mehra

UDAY - omg !!!

ADITHI - r u okay Uday

UDAY - am fine . Anyways welcome to jaigad industries ADITHI

ADITHI - okay partner . I mean we are business partners rite

UDAY - ADITHI I want to speak frankly now . Let us forget out past now . We were young that time . We give a new start as business associates . Can u pls ADITHI

ADITHI MEHRA - okay Uday . I'll try to forget . But I wanna ask u something did u ever love me Uday or just played me

UDAY - pls don't get past .

ADITHI - answer me Uday pls

UDAY - we were young . I was just attracted to u . That's it . I only love my princess MANYATAH . I love her truly

ADITHI - she geta tears and wipes . I know I moved on . And it's time for me to . And am happy for u as u found ur true love .

UDAY - ADITHI will meet tomorrow

ADITHI - won't u invite me to ur house Uday as a friend at least . I wanna see ur wife

UDAY - surely ADITHI . Tomorrow I u and AMITH come for lunch to jaigad palace . I'll all n tell AMITH. Will have our project checked there only

ADITHI - k Uday

UDAY LEAVES AND STARTS TO HOME . On the way he remembers that Phakir. Words " he is rite my past came today . May be its a coincidence , come on Uday don't get into such words ..am not superstitious " . He goes to home and his room

MANYTAH - Udayy she hugs her

UDAY - wah princess ithne romantic mood mein , Ba'ath kya hai

MANYATAH - will tell u first u go and have shower

UDAY - y do u have any plans to make out now princess

MANYATAH - chi Uday thum Bhi na

UDAY - he haves shower and come out in towel

MANYATAH - she is reading Some document and suddenly she feels like puking . She rushes to wash room and throw up

UDAY - kya HUA he runs behind . R u k

MANYTAH - am k don't worry

UDAY - don't tell me u ate roadside food ill call doctor

MANYATH - no Uday am fine and let me tell u again she vomits

UDAY - he holds her and help her . Princess I think food poisoning I'll call doc

MNAYATAH - she wipes with towel n tell . No Uday

UDAY - am going to calm doctor

MANAYATH - she gets irritated and follow him . Halkat vede kasmaunukane stop there I said not necessary na

UDAY - don't act as doctor now am calling and he takes phone

MANYATH - she takes phone and tell I know Uday already I have been to hospital

UDAY - wat u went to hospital and dint tell me . That's y I tell u don't eat all that road aside stuff . Uday keeps on blabbering

MANAYYAH - Uday stop it it's not food poisoning Am pregnent

UDAY - wat !!! Tell me again

MANAYYAH - she blushes and holds his hand and tell ur gonna be father halkat

UDAY - really MAYATH he hugs and kisses on forehead , r u sure

MANYATH - yes am 3 weeks pregnant

UDAY - am the happiest person on This earth now

BOTH OF THEM GIVE NEWS TO FAMILY MEMBERS AND EVEEYONE IS HAPPY

VIJAY - so junior Uday is gonna come

UNNATHI - no it's junior Vasundara ( my mom .") .

UDAY - yes UNNATHI it rite .Mom always use to tell I'll be born as ur baby Uday in we last days with tears in her eyes

DS - she carcasses Udays head and tell . Yes Uday maharani Vasundhara Devi is gonna come back

EVERY ONE IS HAPPY AND CELEBRATES THAT NIGHT . UDAY INSTRUCTS MANYTAH WITH ALL PRECAUTIONS DO'S AND DONTS

MANYATH - she is gonna Take coca cola

UDAY - ur not supposed to take aerated drinks in pregnency MANAYYAH . He takes away the glass

MANYTAH - how do u know Uday , did I do a gynaecologist course

EVERYONE - laughs

UDAY - princess I don't do a course but I read in a book . Soon after I got new I first read what to eat and what to not as ur a big mess

MANYATAH - she looks at him angrily

KOMAL - wat Uday said is true MANYATAH ur not suppose to take all these . Only fresh fruit juices

UDAY - Seema ki yuvrani ke liye ek fresh watermelon juice lavo

MANYTAH - I want mango juice not watermelon

UDAY - no watermelon is good in sumner also mango better not to take in first 3 months as it produces heat in body and not safe in first 3 months

VIJAY - UDAY BANNA SERIOUSLY THUM THO pregency ke baare mein research Koya hoga

UNNATHI - after all my dada does any work perfectly , he is Yuvraj Udaybeer sing

MANYATA - an busss Karo apne bai ka thaarif . Yeh tho halkat Veda hi hai

DS - MANAYYAH ur not supposed to tell ur husband like that

UDAY - ek yuvrani ko Shobha nahi dethe

J VIJAY - ha NAHI THO

EVERYONE LAUGHS

MNAYATAH - j and vijay ur Gonna pay for this . Uday thum bhi

DS - MANAYYAH aap Kaho

MANYATAH - sorry aap Yuvraj

UDAY - it's k DS MANYATH can call whatever she likes to

DS - but Uday beta I know if any other royal or PPP Listen they make news and especially Mahasabha ppl are particular about their rules and all

GIRI RAJ - maa sab tek keh raha hai . Uday I don't want this new to go out till 3 more months

DS - yes Uday I don't want to tell it still she is 4 months pregnent . Due to security issues and for privacy

UDAY - jee dad . I'll make it sure DS

KOMAL - I already asked doctor not to reveal it

BRIJ RAJ - acha Kiya Komal

J - but DS hOw can we hide . Wat if they see jiji tummy likes ball

MANYTAHA - j not ball k

UDAY - he laughs

MANAYATH - she stamps Uday feet

EVERYONE LAUGH

KOMAL - don't worry j . Tummy will start appearing form 14 th week and she is only 3 weeks now

MANYATA - really mom . I don't l know I should ask u many doubts

KOMAL - yes beta I'll tell . But I don't think u need my help wen Uday is around u . Think he must have read about it also

VIJAY - I tell u . Uday banna encyclopaedia

UDAY - vijay thum bhi na

EVERYONE HAVE DINNER AND MANVEER RETURN TO JAIGAD PALACE . Uday tells about meeting with mehras to vijay and manytah.

UDAY -manyatha take this milk

MANYATAH - Uday am full . Pls

UDAY - MNAYATH before bed if u take hot milk . It's good for I n baby

MANYATAH - Uday thum tho mere peeche pade . I should have become pregnent instead of me

UDAY - haha funny princess . I can do anything for u but can't get pregnent I guess

MANYATAH - Udayyy k I'll drink after a while

UDAY - that's my girl . He kisses her in lips

MANYTAH - pregnent mein kissing mana hai

UDAY - wat really ??

MANYTAY - book mein Nahi pada , she laughs

UDAY - acha ur pulling my leg . He pulls her close and tell " do u know I can even have sex in pregnancy with safety measure and positions , Be ready for it "

MANYTAH - chi besharan

UDAY - he smiles and leaves her .

MANVEER WAKES UP AND HAVE BREAKFAST

DOCTOR - she checks MANYATAH and gives vitamin tablets

UDAY - anything about yuvrani pls first inform me and I should know everything doctor and I mention it again

DOCTOR - don't worry Yuvraj ji she is perfectly fine and I'll keep informing u . But next month u have to come to clinic for scan

UDAY - if u don't mind doctor I want to buy that machine n keep at home with a nurse . Can I come and do scan here

DOCTOR - that's fine Yuvraj ji as u wish

MANYTAH - Uday is that necessary . I'll go and come

UDAY - princess if u go frequently to hospital media will get to know for sure

DOCTOR - Yuvraj ji is rite ur highness . She leaves

MANYATAH - patha nahi yeh media ka chakkar kab katham hoga

UDAY - it will never end . N am sure we are going to have hard time after they get to know ur pregnent

MANYTAHA - we won't reveal it at all . Then no worries

UDAY. - ache after few months ur tummy will come out like balloon and u will become like baby elephant princess and everyone will know

MANAYYAH - udayy , kya kaha . She throws pillow at him and turns around

UDAY - he hugs her from behind

MANYTAH - Uday if I become fat I won't like me na

UDAY - princess . He turns around . Whatever u look like I just love u madly . Will love u forever till my last breath

MANAYATH - she covers his mouth and tell don't talk like that . I love u she hugs him . They r in lawn outside

AMITH AND ADITHI - they come and cough

MANYATAH - she immediately pushes Uday and move away

UDAY - he acts normal . " welcome AMITH and ADITHI ,pls come in "

AMITH - he looks at MANAYYAH and wish her

ADITHI - she to stares at MANAYATH

AMITH - she is my sister ADITHI . Have tells MANYATAH

MANYATAH - she tells hello ADITHI and gives hand

ADITHI - she is lost and stares at MANAYYAH

AMITH - he mives ADITHi and tell " hey ADITHI we're r u lost " I know Yuvraj is so beautiful and natural beauty but being a girl don't satre at her

UDAY - yeh Kameena tho always flirts my wife . I'll see this guy one day

ADITHI - yes brother she is indeed beautifull as u said . Uday I must say u have got a gorgeous wife , nice meeting u miss udayveer sing

UDAY - he feels bit tensed . He thought of telling to MANAYYAH about their past but after knowing she is pregnent he dint want to .

ALL GO INSIDE AND HAVE LUNCH .

MANYATAH - u guys carry on with ur work . I'll leave

UDAY - ji MANYATH UNNATHI is there in her room .go to her

AMITH - Uday u don't she know about project . I mean to day Devgad projects also vijay is handling . Y is MANYATAH ji is not coming to office these days

UDAY - it's not like that AMITH . She UNNATHI and j are taking care of other works . I don't want to over burden her

MANYTAH - Uday is rite . I don't want to interfere in everything

ADITHI - that's interesting buth of u make a good pair

UDAY - thanks ADITHI , shall we go ahead with work .

MANYTAH - she is leaving

UDAY - he excuses and goes behind MANYATAH and tell " princess don't forget to take tablet , came to remind '"

MANYTAH - Uday that's k abhi thum jao , she pushes him

ADITHI - she looks at them and get angry , especially MANYATAH


PRECAP
ADITHI - she acts good and everyone believe her and she try's to harm MANAYATH and baby

UDAY AND ANYONE - they doesn't know about it . Even AMITH doesn't know about her past or about her evil plans
Edited by puggyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really nice update 😊
god this bro sis duo is too much I mean 1 is after uday n the other after manyata...
do continue soon n pm me if possible 😊
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Good Chapter.. 👍🏼 😊 Plus U R Bring Twist Of Adithi Uday's Past... She Wants Plzzz Don't Let That Happen... 😊 Plzzz Don't Bring Any Harm To ManVeer And Their Child Plzzz... 😊 And Plzzz Post Next Chapter... 😊 And Thank You For Brillant Update... 😊
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Good Chapter.. 👍🏼 😊 Plus U R Bring Twist Of Adithi Uday's Past... She Wants Plzzz Don't Let That Happen... 😊 Plzzz Don't Bring Any Harm To ManVeer And Their Child Plzzz... 😊 And Plzzz Post Next Chapter... 😊 And Thank You For Brillant Update... 😊


Thanks I'll update in this week
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Originally posted by: puggyy


Thanks I'll update in this week





Okayzzz Will Be Waiting For It... 😊
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CHAPTER 4

UDAY - he finishes meeting with Divya and AMITH .

ANITH - am very happy Uday we earned good profit and 5 months left to finish this project

ADITHI - yes bhai am happy even

UDAY - he smiles

STORY AFTER 3 MONTHS ( NOW MANYATA IS 5 MONTHS PREGNENY THAT IS IN HER FIIFTH MONTH OF PREGENENVY )

MANVEER. - they go to a marriage party of a politician

Marathas pregnancy news is not still known to anyone except family members . Press members and public doesn't know about it . Also MANYATAH wears loose dress so that her tummy is not seen wenever she goes out . Also she has only little bump as she is in 5th month

UDAY - they are on the way to party

MANYTAH - driver stop car

UDAY - y princess r u ok

MANYATHA - I want to eat Kulfi

UDAY - MANYATAH pls not road side stuff

MANYTAH - no I want it am not gonna listen , pls Uday "

UDAY - princess

MANYATHA - she gets down and stand aside door

UDAY - he comes out . K MANYATAH I'll get u at least sit inside car

MANYATAH - k hubby . She pinches his cheeks

UDAY - omg !! Patha nahi aur kya kya mangengi or kithne zid karegi princess
He finds Phakir on the way while taking Kulti , he runs behind him to ask

PHAKIR - come beta . I know we would meet today

UDAY - namasthe baba I couldn't believe it . What I told is truth . That day I met a friend from my past and I got a good news my wife is pregnent . What u said is rite we are gonna get a new person in our family . Thank you baba

PHAKIR - beti hoga tuje . Ur mom is gonna take rebirth in ur daughters form . She said u in childhood rite that she will be born to u , she kept her word

UDAY - really baba am happy . I wonder how I know this that my mom said it . Only me and my sister knows about it apart from my mom .

PHAKIR - he smiles

UDAY - baba I wanna ask u something - that day u said tera Khushi terra pyaar cheenega . I don't understand can u pls explain me baba am so worried

PHAKIR - u will get to know have patience . Ur wife is in danger go save her

UDAY - his mind stops working , kyaaa

PHAKIR - go save her

UDAY - he looks at MNAYATAH in car , he finds a trick coming behind car and gets worried and shout . But MANYATAH n driver couldn't hear as glasses r closed . He stars running towards car

MANYTAHA - she is listening to songs suddenly here voice saying " mama go out of car run maa " she looks at her tummy AMITH shock n looks around n finds truck n immediately goes out of car .

The truck hits the car and cat falls beside road

UDAY - he shouts MANYTAH and cries

MANYTAH - she sees Uday crying for her . She is about to call him but falls down due to shock . She falls down aside a tree and one cannot see her .

UDAY - he comes near car which is burnt away and he doesn't dare go near n see person in it . He falls on knees and cries out loudly princess !!!!

VIJAY UNNATHI - they pass through that way going to same party see Uday on road crying infringement of burnt car

UNNATHI - dada kya HUA

UDAY - choti MANYATAH

VIJAY - kya , Uday pls tell us wat happened

THEY SEARCH FOR MAYATHA IN CAR AND DOESNT FIND . POLICE ALOS ARRIVE FOR HELP .

UDAY - where is MANYATAH . He runs towards Phakir to ask but doesn't find him

BOY - he hand overs a letter to Uday

UDAY - yeh kya hai

BOY - that Phakir baba to whom u spoke before asked to hand over this letter to u

UNNTHAI - kya dada

UDAY - he immediately opens letter .

IN LETTER it's written " don't worry my boy nothing will happen to ur wife and child . They are safe and they are waiting for u at ur home "

UDAY - kya , he starts running towards car

VIJAY UNNATHI - kya HUA Uday

UDAY - he gives letter to them

VIJAY - don't be silly Uday , wat rubbish how can u believe it

UDAY - I have no time corn let us go to jaigad palace

LADY - a lady finds MANAYYAH on road near tree n see her phone n calls j and finds address and goes to Jaigad palace to drop MANAYYAH . She is doctor n checks MANYATAH n finds she is ok

J - she doesn't understand wats going on . She calls Uday but it's not reachable

LADy - don't worry am a doctor and ur sister is fine n I think she is pregnent . Don't worry both are fine


UDAY - he rushes to jaigad palace with UNNATHI and vijay

J - wat happens guys u r running and coming

UDAY - MANYATAH kaha hai j

J - in her room

UDAY - he rushes to see her


VIJAY UNNATHI - they look in shock

UNNATHI - that nana was rite . Dada said me about him once

VIJYA - unbelievable I tell u

J - guys wats going on

UDA Y - he sees MAYATH lying on bed and kisses her forehead and cries . " i died there for a minute . I scared me . I can't leave without u "


J - don't worry Uday she is fine n shows lady And tell she got we here n she is doctor

UDAY - he discusses all way happens between him am nana with vijay and UNNATHI while j stay with MANYATAH in her room

UNNATHI - dada way he said all happens till now . We should fins him somehow



UDAY - yes choti we have to find him

J - guys jiji is awake

UDAY - he Rushes to their bedroom and hugs MAYATH

MANYATH - Uday

UDAY - don't worry princess am here . That's k it's over

MANYTAHA - Uday I know who saved me

UDAY - kya , I mean wen I got down car and how

MANYATHA - Uday our baby spoke to me she said mama go out of car

UDAY - kya princess how can a baby speak

MANYATH - I know I won't believe buy trust me Uday

UDAY - he acts as if he believed . He thinks MANYTAH out of stress making some imaginations kind of hallucination on shock .

AFTER A WEEK

MANYATAH PREGENCY IS REVEALED TO PRESS AND EVERYONE TAKE MAYATAH PICTURES

IN JAIGAD PALACE

MANVEER - both together are watching a movie in hall . Manytahs favourite kuch Kuch Hota hai movie

UDAY - he hugs her and both lie on recliner and watch

MANYTAH - she feels asleep while watching

UDAY - he sees it very cool and tries to reduce AC and go to ge remote
He hears a voice " DAD LOOK UP CHANDLIER IS FALLING , HELP ME AND MOM DAD SAVE US "
Suddenly Uday looks up and chandelier is loose and is about to fall on MAYATH

MANYTHa - she is sleeping n not aware of it

UDAY - he immediately runs and catches MANYATH n move out
Baaam a sound is heard

MANYTAH - she wakes up in Udays arms n shocked to see wat happened

UDAY - don't worry princess am here

MANYTAH - she gets down n ask , kya HUA Uday

UNNATHI GIRIRAJ - they rush down Due to sound n see wat happened

ALL GO TO THEIR BEDROOMS AFTER INCIDENT

UDAY - am sorry MAYATH

MANYATAH - kyu Uday for wat

UDAY - that day I dint believe ur words . He puts hand on her tummy and tell " again today our baby saved u , she said me that chandelier is gonna fall "

MANYTAH - thank god at least u got to know .

UDAY - princes I wonder how is it possible . No one will believe it .

MANYTAH - yes Uday its miracle . May be our baby has some magical powers

UDAY - he smiles and kisses her tummy . May be princess who knows

BOTH MANVEER FALL ASLEEP

UDAY - he thinks in his mind " wats happening in my life this baba m my baby talking from womb . I seriously wonder wats all his happening to me " he turns and touches MNAYATHa tummy

BABY - don't disturb mommy dad she is sleeping

UDAY - he is hell shocked and her up from bed . Wat ?!!!

BABy - dad don't panic it's me ur daughter . Am awake

UDAY - he comes near and tell with tears in his eyes " r u in real speaking to me baby "

BABY - yes daddy

UDAY - both Uday and baby speak for a while and MANAYYAH is sleeping

BABy - k dad now am sleepy . Tomorrow I would like to eat aloo cheese parata for breakfast

UDAY - he chuckles and tell " yes my angel ur wish is my command " . He couldn't wats happening in his life . He so shocked beyond words , it's like some fantasy for him . But it's happening in real .

He thinks " if I say to anyone ppl laugh at me and won't believe me for sure they will think Yuvraj had gone mad . I should keep this to myself better


UPDATING !!!!!

Edited by puggyy - 10 years ago

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