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Chapter 9 - House Visit

Recap - Jalal dropped Jodha home and kissed her goodnight on her forehead whereas she surprised him by kissing him on the cheek. Mainawati called to say that they will not be coming home just yet thus making Jalal's plan to go on a picnic back on. The atmosphere in the park led Jalal and Jodha to share their very first kiss .

Fine, mist like drops started to pour after they broke their hug indicating that it is going to rain soon. Jalal and Jodha quickly packed their stuffs and hurried to where the Porsche was parked. Unfortunately for them, the light drizzle had turned into a heavy downpour causing them to get soaked to the skin by the time they reach the car.

The roofs of the Porsche danced with sprays as the rain battered on it like a hail bullets. The murmuring of the rain could be heard through the window, making it sound like the buzzing of angry bees. The engine of the car came to a roar as Jalal turned on the ignition.

Although it was pouring heavily, the roads were still visible enabling Jalal to drive. The rain cooled down a little as they were nearing Jodha's house. Jalal was about pull over at the sidewalk of the apartment complex when Jodha handed him the pass for the automated gate system and asked him to drive in to the parking lot. Upon asking she said

"Won't you come up for a bit?"

"I don't think it is a good idea Jodha. What would your neighbour think?"

"Jalal please you are soaking wet, you shouldn't drive like this."

"It's okay Jodha, I will be fine."

"At least come up for a cup of coffee and dry yourself."

"Jodha try to understand."

"No, you are coming up with me to get yourself dried before going home."

"But..."

"No buts' Jalal. You are coming up and that is final!"

"Fine. I will drop you in the lobby first then park the car okay?"

"Okay."

Jalal parked the car and jogged to the lobby where Jodha was waiting for him after making sure that he had locked the car.

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As the two of them stepped into the house, the first thing Jodha did after switching the lights on and locking the front door was to go to the bathroom storage to get a towel for Jalal to dry himself and for her as well. She went to get changed into dry clothes in her room and came back to the living room to give the towel to him and asked him if he wanted to change into dry clothes.

"No, thank you." He said.

"Are you sure? I could lend you one of bhaiya's clothes if you want." She asked again.

"Thanks Jodha but a towel is enough." He politely refused.

She decided not to force him and asked him what drinks he wanted.

"Coffee." He said as he dried himself.

"The usual?" She asked.

"Uh huh" He replied.

Jodha went in the kitchen to make them a nice cup of warm steaming hot coffees whereas Jalal took in the interior of her house. The first thing that caught his attention when he first stepped in, was the picture frames on the wall above the cream L-shaped couch opposite the big black TV sitting on a rectangle cabinet. At first glance one would think that the photos were of beautiful landscapes but turns out it was photos of Jodha's family.

It was as like a family tree, or rather The Sharma's Family Tree'. There were photos from Jodha and her brother's childhood to their adulthood. They were a tight-knit family, unlike his. They look close in all those photos, how he wished that his family was just like hers. As he looked across, he saw the balcony behind a sliding glass doors. The very same balcony he looked up on every time he dropped her home. He wanted to step out on the balcony but decided against it as it was still raining.

She called out for him from the kitchen asking if he wanted any cookies to go with the coffee. He declined saying that coffee alone is fine.

"Here's your coffee."

"Thank you. Nice photos."

"Thanks, photography is one of papa's hobby."

"He's good at it."

"This one is my favourite. We took it at a studio." She said pointing towards a photo in which the whole family was present, a family portrait. Her parents were sitting in the middle, her brother by her mother's side and she, by her father's side.

"It is a very beautiful portrait." He acknowledged.

"But this is my most favourite right now." She said again as she pointed towards another photo just below the previous one. There was an addition in the number of the family. Her parents were seated on a chair, her brother and sister-in-law standing behind them and she sat on the floor between her parents.

"Your bhabhi?" He asked.

She nodded asking "She's pretty isn't she?"

"Yes, she is pretty." He answered.

She pouted and murmured something he couldn't quite catch making him grin as he knew she was probably cursing him for complimenting her bhabhi.

"Want to know which one is my favourite picture out of all these?" He asked her.

She nodded excited to know which photo he liked.

"That one is my favourite." He said pointing towards a photo on the very far left. It was of her bhabhi in a purple saree. Her eyes welled up and continued cursing him in her mind when he continued.

"It is my favourite colour."

Purple is his favourite colour?! That's a weird colour for a guy to like! Maybe he likes it when a girl wears purple. She thought when she heard he say

"... green."

"What did you say?" She asked as she didn't hear him.

"I said that you were wearing green on the first day we met in the bus stop too." He smiled.

Her mind stopped at the word too' . Wait a minute didn't he point at bhabhi's photo?! Why would he talk about green colour all of a sudden when it should be about purple?! She looked up at the photo once more and search for a picture frame in which her bhabhi wore green but she couldn't find any.

Her cheeks turned a crimson red as she laid eyes on a photo or more precisely the actual photo he had meant. It was a recent photo of hers, she was wearing a green colour lehenga that she had tried out for Sukanya's up-coming wedding. She couldn't help but thank God for insisting on buying this lehenga when her mother had suggested that she bought a pink lehenga. Not that the pink one was not nice, both had complimented her but she liked the brocade work on the green one more compared to the pink one.

"Are you wearing a lehenga?"

"Yes."

"You look good in it. As a matter of fact you look gorgeous."

She blushed, he grinned. Little did she know that this was the very same photo her mother had gave Suryabhan.

"I should go now, it's getting late." He said seeing that the rain had stopped pouring.

She felt a persistent feeling as though something bad is going to happen by the mere mention of him going home. She didn't want him to go, not when she felt this way. But nevertheless she nodded and said "Okay."

The feeling only got worse when they walked to the front door.

"Goodnight Jodha."

"Goodnight Jalal."

Before he was to step out, she held his hand and said "Drive safety, a.. and text me when you reach home okay?"

"Okay." He said as he bent forward to drop a kiss on her forehead saying "Sweet dreams."

"I will walk you to the elevator." She said smiling.

"Sure."

She closed the front door and walked with both their hands entwined and waited for the elevator to reach her floor. The elevator binged , before he stepped in she stood by her toes and stretched upwards and pressed a kiss on his lips saying "Sweet dreams to you too." With a sweet smile on her lips as she gently pushed him inside the elevator before the doors closed.

She turned around to walk back to her house when the elevator doors opened and she was pulled in by him as he dropped his head and kissed her passionately on her lips. He nibbed her lower lips causing her to let out a moan as he gained access and let his tongue invade her mouth. Gently breaking the kiss, he pulled back. She opened her eyes to find passion smoldering in his eyes.

He leaned down again and gave her a peck on her lips before finally letting her out of the elevator. She went to the balcony to see him off, he waved goodbye before getting into the car and drove off.

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It was pouring heavily a few kilometers away from Jodha's house when he was on his way back. It was fiercer than earlier, the street lights were not working so he had to have his head lights on to the fullest, the windshield wipers going schwump schwump at full speed. He was driving at a rather slow speed as he could not see more than a couple meters in front of him.

Everything happened so fast that he had no time to think, just react. A car for the other side of the road had lost control and was heading towards him. He turned his steering wheels and hit the emergency break trying his level best to avoid collision. Last thing he heard was the sound of tires screeching and honks going off before losing consciousness.

The smell of burned rubber and skid marks filled the scene as the rain continued to pour. The only light present was of the head lights from both cars and blood seeping out of the silver car.

He never sent her a text, she waited for his text and waited until finally sleep took over her, but the text never came.

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Chapter 10

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It was nice chappy in the start
And in middle jodha cursing jalal for saying her bhabhi preety and then jalal compliment to jo was cute
And then the kiss aww it was so lovely of joja
And at the end jalal accident
Thankks for the update but what about teaser to nxt chappy as precap
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