FF : ll~Her First Love ~ll Thread 1 [CLOSED] ; PM lists in pg 24 - Page 78

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[Author's note: I know many of you don't like Nisha's character but let just say for now I don't really know her part as I'm experimenting with her character. Still can't confirm if she's positive or negative, let's see how it goes.

So, will Jalal tell Jodha about Nisha or he will keep it from her? It will be revealed in the next update.

For Jodha's reaction, just wanted to let you know that that was how I felt when I heard that my elder brother got into an accident, I don't know how one really feels when they hear of a loved one getting in an accident but for me I felt this way. It happened last year can't really remember when but I was asleep that day, it was past midnight. My brother said he was going to stay over at his friends place after work (normal days, I will be up waiting for him to return from work. Mom and Dad will be asleep by then. That day I when to bed early as he wasn't coming home.) So,I was in deep slumber when all of a sudden I heard the gates being open, my mom thanking someone, then the kitchen lights was turned on, and I hear my mom and brother talking. At first I ignored it thinking I was dreaming, my eyes were closed but my mind was awake. I listened to their conversation and heard my mom asking my brother what was he doing here at home at this time. My brother was silent at first then as my mother asked him questions of why his friends accompanied him up to the front door my brother said "I got into an accident" shocking me and I literally jumped out of the bed, sleep just flew away first was to get up open my room door get to the living room and see whether my brother was okay. What I saw shocked me. He was perfectly fine, no injuries nothing. I turned to see the time, it was 4am. He then started to tell us what had happened. How he went to his friend's place and from there his friends wanted to go hang out at a pub, on his way back, my brother decided that he will come home instead of go back to his friend's place. Another friend of his who lived nearby with our place and my brother was on their way home. My brother friend was drunk and he wanted to go home fast so he drove quite fast whereas my brother who was not drunk drove at a rather slow speed. Lucky for my brother that his friend was not fast enough to beat the red light in front. As his friend stopped the car and waited for the light to turn green, he thought of my brother who was right behind him and looked at the rearview mirror to find that my brother's car had toppled to the side (The driver side down on the road) and skidded for a whole stretch of shopping lots (about 7 shop lots.) His friend immediately made a U-turn to check on my brother and was surprised to find my brother standing beside the car unhurt (My brother climb out of car using the other passenger door. The car was of course a wreck, the driver side mirror broke into million pieces and the windshield and the hazel light was also broken) yeah it was a scary experience for me.

Oh, wanna know the scariest part of the whole thing? My brother was driving in the middle lane (there was 3 lanes) and the road was empty just my brother's car and his friend's. So how did the car toppled down? Well according to my brother he felt as though he hit something but there was nothing there at least nothing visible. My mom suspects that it was an evil or dirty' thing as the time was not a good time. You know that is the time when the unseen/ invisible things come out... At least that's what the elders in my family said.

I really don't know if this chapter is good, so do give your feedbacks as always and thanks for the support you guys give me. And also I would like to say that I really appreciate the effort and time you take to give me your feedbacks, it really motivates me to write this FF. Love you guys!!!

Regarding updates, I've decided to try to update every week. When will updates come? Either on Mondays or Wednesdays (confirm will update on one of these two days). Tuesdays, Thursday and Fridays (maybe updates may come on either one of these days but this days will be irregular as I have classes on this days). What about weekends? Sorry, but I'm working on weekends, so updates will only come on weekdays, mainly Monday or Wednesday.

Also last but not least for PMs refer to pg 24. Thank you very much for your time, now enjoy the chapter below.]

Chapter 10 - Is He Okay?

Recap - Jodha invites Jalal to her house, as it was raining heavily when he dropped her home. They talked about the picture frames on the left side of her living room wall and spent some lovely time together. Jodha had an uneasy feeling when Jalal mention about going home but didn't think much of it. Later that night Jalal got into a car accident.

Jodha woke up the next morning to find that Jalal never texted her the previous night. She wondered why he didn't do so but thought that he might have been too tired tto send one. She got ready and left for work. Upon reaching the company, Jodha was greeted by Mr. Atgah who had come over to her front desk. He enquired about how her work was going and said.

"Mr. Muhammad won't be coming to work today, Jodha."

"Oh? May I know why sir?" She asked surprised of the information.

"Well I suppose I could tell you, but don't tell anyone else. Mr. Muhammad got into an accident, but... ..."

He continued on but everything just went blank after the word accident', Jodha lost the colour in her face, her stomach churned, her heart beat slowed down, her breathing became more difficult. He had gotten into an accident?! Is that why he didn't text me last night?! How is he, is he severely injured... ... Many questions ran in her mind but only one question was voiced out.

"I... Is he in the hospital?" She asked not realizing that she was holding her breath.

"Oh no, no Jodha, Mr. Muhammad is just resting at home. It wasn't anything serious."

Nothing serious?! Are you kidding me?! He could have... She stopped the word from coming in her mind and paled even more when she thought of what could have happened to him.

"Now, now Jodha, there is nothing to worry about. I am sure he'll be back tomorrow. You carry on with your work then." He said and left.

Moti appeared a while later asking her why she was pale and whether she was not feeling well.

"He... He got into an accident Moti." She said, her eyes pooled with tears.

"He? Who got into an accident Jodha?!" Moti asked shocked.

"Jalal." She said forgetting that her friend didn't know about the two of them being in a relationship.

"Who told you?"

"Mr. Atgah."

"Uhm... Well, is he alright?"

"Mr. Atgah said that it was nothing serious and that he was at home, resting."

"Okay, we know that he is at home and it's nothing serious. But you are still worried." She stated to which Jodha nodded.

"Well then, there's only one thing to do."

"What?" Jodha asked.

"Go visit him."

"But I... How can I go? I don't know where he lives and we finish work at 5pm. What would he say? What will I do when I get there?"

"Why can't you go? He's your boyfriend. As for work you could tell Mr. Atgah you are not feeling well and leave early. Mr. Muhammad won't say anything, he will be glad to have you there. Lastly, by going there you get to see for yourself if he is well or not."

"He.. He's not my boy..."

"Jodha, you don't to hide it from me. I already know, I kind of suspected it the other day. Although I did hope that you would tell me by yourself but never mind, I am happy for you. Now, you finish all your work for today and go tell Mr. Atgah you're not feeling well and you want to leave early today."

"Thank you Moti. I am sorry for not telling you, I didn't mean to. It's just that you were so... I thought that perhaps you like him too."

"You bet I like him, but it's only admiration Jodha not like the way you feel about him. You don't have to apologise, wipe your tears and get back to work or you won't be able to finish it in time. The earlier you leave, the more time you get to spend with him."

"Thank you Moti."

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Paramedics and firefighters arrived at the scene of the accident to be welcomed by the strong stench of fresh blood and burned tires. The paramedics rushed to provide medical treatment to the victims whereas the firefighter ensured the safety of the scene checking for any leakage of dangerous fluids. There were no fatalities, the driver of the silver Mercedes was severely injured but conscious and terribly shaken.

The Mercedes was a write-off, the windshield glass broke into a million pieces, the hood was crumpled trapping the driver in it after crashing into a tree. Firefighters immediately started the extrication and communicate with the victim ensuring that the victim stays focus during the extrication as it can be loud and confusing. The firefighters try to free the victim out of the car as quickly and safely as possible as the victim has lost a lot of blood with some paramedics on stand-by waiting to tend to the victim as soon as he is safely brought out.

Meanwhile the other paramedics had been tending to Jalal who was unconscious. Jalal had been lucky that he acted in time to avoid collision. The only damage the Porsche had received was of the tires.

The victims were brought to the hospital for further treatment. Families of the Mercedes driver were informed of the accident whereas the only number they found in Jalal's speed dial was of Shareefuddin, Jalal's driver.

Hospital

He woke up to find himself on a hospital bed and his driver, Shareefuddin standing by his side.

"What am I doing here?" He asked trying to get up from the bed only to be stopped by Shareef.

"Sir, you shouldn't be up."

The doctor came to check on Jalal and asked "How are you feeling now Mr. Muhammad?"

"What happened?"

"You were in an accident and you lost conscious."

"My head hurt."

"That's because you hit your head on the steering wheel. Your CT scans and MRI scans shows that there are no internal injuries, it was only a bump in the head. The pain you are having might also be caused by your fever."

"What about the other driver?" He asked still feeling a bit faint.

"I'm afraid he wasn't as lucky as you. He has a few fractured ribs, a fractured limb and some facial injuries due to the shattered glass but he is getting better. As for you Mr. Muhammad, you are discharged. I've prescribed you with the medications that you should take. That is all."

"Thank you, doctor."

"Your welcome."

Jalal's house

After signing the discharge papers, Shareefuddin drove Jalal home, gave him his medicines and was told by Jalal to return home for the day. The medicines made Jalal drowsy and he fell asleep right away as the fever took over him forgetting the fact that he was to text Jodha.

The next morning Shareefuddin had come over to check up on him and called Mr. Atgah to say that Jalal won't be making it to the office that day. Jalal had woken up to freshen himself, he ate the food that Shareefuddin had bought him and went back to sleep. After clearing up the room Shareefuddin left.

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The door bell rang but he ignored it. His body felt too heavy to move. Last thing he needs is to answer the door to find a salesman standing there ringing his door bell asking him if he was interested to buy his products.

The door bell rang more frantically making him very annoyed. Here, he was trying to get some rest after everything that happened the previous night, his head felt as though it was about to explode and there, at the other side of the door someone was trying to make his headache worse by disturbing him.

Finally fed up of the constant ringing of the door bell, he got up, walked to the front door and opened it. The second he opened the door, his headache just went away. There she was standing in front of him, eyes filled with concern and unshed tears looking up at him. When without any warning, she threw herself on him and the damp broke.

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She had rushed from work after getting the rest of the day off to get to his place. Moti had somehow managed to get Jalal's address and gave it to her. When he had not answer the door on the first few rings of the door bell, she started to panic. She hit the bell frantically, concern and fright consuming her. When he finally opened the door, she couldn't help but throw herself on him and cried in his arms.

"Shh... Jodha..." He tried to break the hug but it only tightened. "Jodha, shh... look at me, I am fine." He stroked her hair and cooed as though he was comforting a small child.

"Why didn't you tell me?!" She asked looking up at him with accusing eyes.

"I'm sorry Jodha, I forgot all about texting you. It is just that the medicines, the headache and the fever ... Even so I should have texted you." He cursed himself for his negligence and wondered how worried she must have been when she didn't receive any text from him.

"You have a fever?!" She asked shocked as she didn't know about him having a fever, all she knew was that he was in an accident. Little did she know that Mr. Atgah had inform her that Jalal was having a fever which was the actual reason why he didn't come to work today and not the accident.

She immediately broke the hug, brought her palm on his forehead and found that he was burning up. She dragged him in the house, went in a room with the door open assuming that it was his bedroom to find that it really was his bedroom and laid him down on the bed saying.

"You should rest."

"I am fine Jodha."

"You are not fine! You are burning up and you had an acc...accident." Fresh tears started to form in her eyes as she said that.

"Don't cry Jodha." He leaned on the headboard, brought his hand to her cheek to wipe her tears and pleaded as he felt guilty for making her cry again.

"You could have told me."

"I didn't want you to be worried."

"Yo... You could have... How did yo..." Her voice broke. He told her everything that had happened the previous night. How the Mercedes had lost control, how he tried to avoid it until he had lost consciousness only to wake up later on to find himself in a hospital. She could only thank God for protecting him from not getting any serious injuries like the other driver.

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"Jalal... Jalal wake up... You have to eat something and take your medicines."

He woke up and she brought forward the tray filled with a bowl of what looks like rice gruel, a cup of water and his medicines saying

"I made you some rice gruel. It would be easier for you to eat."

"Thank you."

He finished the rice gruel and took his medicines. She took the dishes away to wash it while he went to freshen up. His fever had gone down and he was feeling much better. It was getting late, and as much as he loved having Jodha at his place, he knows that she should go home. She had been here for 4 hours now, though most of the time he was asleep and she was by his side putting a cold compress on his forehead to cool off his fever.

After freshening up he came to the living room and found her getting ready to leave when she turned around and said

"It's getting late I should go home now if I am to catch the 6pm bus."

"You don't have to take the bus, I have called Shareef over to drop you home."

"Who?"

"Shareefuddin, my driver. I have already informed him, he will drop you home."

Jodha remembered his driver from their first encounter and said "It's okay Jalal, I can take the bus. There's no need to trouble your driver."

"Jodha, I will not let you go home on your own. If you don't want Shareef to drop you, I will."

"But you have to rest Jalal."

"Which is why I am asking Shareef to drop you home."

"Alright, I will follow Shareefuddin home."

His phone rang, it was Shreefuddin saying that he was waiting for Jodha downstairs.

"He's downstairs waiting for you."

"Okay. Bye, take care." She kissed him on the cheek.

"Bye."

"I'll see you tomorrow?" She asked.

"Yes."

"If you need anything, call me okay. Make sure you take your medicines and there's some more rice gruel in the fridge, if you are hungry just take it out, put it in the microwave and heat it up. Also... ..." She continued on when all of a sudden he just kissed her on the lips.

"I know Jodha, you already told me just now." He said after releasing her lips with a grin on his lips.

She blushed and murmured a goodbye and ran off to the elevator.

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The door bell rang again not a minute after Jodha left. This time though, he opened it before the third ring.

"Did you forget something?" He asked only to be surprised to find that the person standing in front of him was not Jodha, but someone else. "Miss Nisha, what brings you here?"

"Hello sir, how are you feeling now?" She asked bringing her hand forward to check his temperature but he stepped back causing her to bring down her hand and said "I bought some stuffs to make you dinner." Pointing to the groceries she has in her hands.

"You didn't have to go through the trouble miss Nisha."

"Oh, it's not troublesome at all sir. It is my pleasure to be at your service." She said welcoming herself in his house without asking his permission.

Jalal was controlling his temper from flaring. He had been noticing the way Nisha acted in front of him. The way she always tries to win his attention, the way in which she acted as though she knows him well when in reality she knows nothing about him.

He didn't like it when she always tries to find fault with Jodha. He suspected that she wanted to be his secretary as he found her glaring at Jodha for a number of times and it was confirmed when she had came to his office to ask him whether Jodha was doing her job well and also when she jumped at the chance to go on a business meeting with Mr. Khurana. (Refer to chapter 9 if you forgot what I'm referring to)

Nisha walks in to the kitchen opens the fridge to store some if the energy drinks she had bought for Jalal to find that the fridge is already filled with it and found that there was a bowl of rice gruel in it. She had been thinking of making one for Jalal but someone beat her to it.

"I see that someone has made you rice gruel." She said

"Yes." He answered not wanting to be rude.

"Your mother?" She asked.

"Excuse me?"

"The rice gruel, did your mother make it for you?"

"No, my mother is in the US."

"Oh, then you bought it?"

"No."

"You made it yourself then?"

Getting fed up of her constant questioning he said "No, my girlfriend made it for me."

"Oh, I see your girl... GIRLFRIEND?! But I thought that you..." She stammered surprised about the fact that he had a girlfriend.

"That I am single?" He probed.

"Yes, I... I thought..."

"I have a girlfriend. She was here with me before you came hence the way I greeted you at the front door."

"Surely, you can't know her that well. It has been just a few days since you came back from the US."

"I don't think I need to give you any explanation."

"Bu.. But sir, I... I am in lo..."

"Miss Nisha, I think you should be careful of what you say." He interrupted her before she could finish her sentence.

"I am sir, I love you."

"Miss Nisha, I already have a girlfriend."

"According to the newspapers, you change your girlfriend every week or two. I am sure this one is the same."

"This one is different. It's not a fling Miss Nisha, I am serious about her."

"Are yo... you serious enough to co... consider marriage with her?"

"Yes Miss Nisha, serious enough to consider spending the rest of my life with her."

"I... I should leave." She said grabbing her handbag to leave when he called out to her.

"Miss Nisha, I appreciate the thought but I'm afraid I can't accept the groceries you bought for me. My girlfriend has already prepared dinner for me before she left. Sorry." He said as he handed the grocery bag to her and she left crying.

Precap -Jalal back in office. Nisha says something shocking at work surprising everyone especially JJ. 😲

How was the chapter? Hope it wasn't boring. This chapter was hard to write esp the accident part and Jodha's reaction to it. Many of you were afraid of many things like will there be MU between JJ and all but trust me you guys think too much yaar. Take it easy.

For those of you who are writing FFs and all which I didn't comment on or unres do let me know... Thank you. 😳