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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb teaser
Excited for update


Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome teaser...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb teaser 👍🏼
waiting for the update ...😳
update the chappy soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nc tzr
Hp akash is not khushi s lover r something
Nai tho he ll hv to face asr's wrath...
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WAITING 4 D UPDATE...
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looking forward

start soon

interesting n confusing

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teaser yaar
waiting for the story to unfold
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Nice teaser waiting for the update
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Please update the first part its very exciting and I am eager to read it. A ruthless arnav and naive khushi is a classic superb hit combo. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1


" One who doesn't listen to Arnav Singh Raizada, should die!"

That was the principle which was followed throughout Lucknow. No one dared to disobey Arnav Singh Raizada, the spoilt bad boy who turned into a gangster and was now managing his family business of designing.

For him, love was the four-letter word which didn't have any meaning and power was the word which gave everything else a meaning. Being the eldest son of his family, he was way too much pampered and spoilt, especially after the death of his parents in a car accident caused by rival group of goons.

There was one more rule which everyone in Lucknow had to follow due to fear of him, no boy and girl should roam together on the roads at night, unless they were related by blood or by marriage. Just because he hated dating and relationships the whole of the Lucknow had to be punished.

But there was one person, for whom he was a completely different person. It was his dear younger sister, Anjali. For her, he could even die or take someone else's life. Dark lover, wasn't he?

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Late Night,

" Akashji, Hurry up. We need to find some or the other store open to find Jiji's nebulizer. Oh God, how can I get so irresponsible?"

Khushi Kumari Gupta was scolding herself out of her sisterly love.Her dear sister Payal was having Ashtma, and her nebulizer was not in functioning state. Khushi, who was searching for her own job, was extremely tired after attending innumerable interviews and forgot to check the nebulizer.

Hence, she was out with her to-be-brother-in-law, i.e, her sister Payal's fiance to get the nebulizer not caring about the rules of Lucknow.

" Don't worry, Khushiji. We will find some medical store open. But now we should be concerned about the patrolling people who might find us and question. What will they answer to them?" said a very concerned Akash Malhotra.

" Nothing will go wrong, Akashji. Trust Devi Maiyya!" said Khushi, confident about her best friend, though the same question was ringing in her ears too.

Suddenly, the nightmare in the back of her mind turned into the stark reality. The patrolling goons had arrived there with golf sticks to beat up anyone who violated the rules laid down by ASR.

On the isolated roads, they found two figures walking. And then they knew what they had to do. Question them and beat up.

" Aye, you both! Stop!" shouted a fatso who appeared to be the leader of the goon gang.

A strong, intense shiver ran through their spines as the cold voice piercing through the thick silence, resonated in their ears. Involuntarily their feet turned rock and they stood fixed to their place, but not before exchanging petrified looks to each other.

" Who are you both?", came a question from the gang.

Akash felt a gulp form in his throat as he knew it was his responsibility to answer.

" Ji, I am Akash Malhotra and she is Khushi Kumari Gupta." said Akash in a shivering voice. Well, anyone would not have been able to put up a show of bravery when muscular, violent men were in front of them.

" Why are you here?"

" We are buying medicines for my sister, Bhai Saheb!" answered Khushi immediately, hoping that they would be satisfied by her reply. But satisfaction was a far off affair to these goons.

" And how are we both related to each other? Blood or by Marriage?" asked the goon, raising his eyebrow.

" Neither of them, Bhaiyyaji. But.."

Before Akash could complete what he was saying, he was pushed on to the ground and two goons pounced on him to pound him to pulp.

Khushi was terrified the violent acts which were taking place right in front of her. Since she was girl, no could hit her as the goons too had some morals, scratch that, a few restrictions placed on them on the name of morals.

" Please don't hit him." said Khushi while holding the stick which was beating Akash.

Angered by her actions, the goon pushed her off while she slipped and mentally tuned herself to fall but nothing of that sort happened.

She felt a muscular arms tugging at her waist which prevented her from falling down. She looked up to find the face of her saviour.

And she found Arnav Singh Raizada, the gangster-turned business tycoon who managed to scare everyone around him.

Arnav Singh Raizada was shocked to see a young girl, no forget that, a beautiful angel in his arms. Added to that she was petrified and had tears in her eyes. Suddenly a wave of protectiveness for that girl, engulfed him. He wanted to make the reason of her tears vanish away in the not-so thin air.

Khushi was shivering in his arms as she thought he will torture both of them even more but seeing her shudder, Arnav mentally cursed himself and straightened her up.

" How many times have I told you that don't show your strength on a girl?" shouted a person, who never cared for anyone's emotions save his Anjali's.

All the goons had stopped beating Akash as soon as they saw ASR coming there. Akash had stood up with a great difficulty as those goons rightly knew reverse of the medical science, the art of breaking human bones.

Arnav moved closer to Khushi and held her shoulder before speaking to her in a extremely low voice, which Khushi would term as a dangerous tone,

" Don't worry! Now that I am here, no one will hurt you and your.." asked Aranv suddenly flinching at the thought that Akash might be her boyfriend. But he knew how to eliminate people off the surface of the earth, doesn't he?

" To be-Jijaji." said Khushi, in a meek tone while clutching hold of her dupatta which was hanging down on her sides.

" And your good name, sweetheart?" asked Arnav over-sweetly. Though he was genuine in his approach but the voice was sickly sweet which was instantly disliked by Akash who had a brotherly feeling for Khushi. But he couldn't react or both of them would be killed.

" Khushi. Khushi Kumari Gupta." said Khushi, while shivering as she was far too innocent to understand why Arnav was being 'too' good to her.

Why was this girl making him attracted? How could she make him possessive of her in just a meet of few minutes?

The answers to these questions, would only be found after a long, painful journey which would only leave them with bleeding hearts.

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I know this was too stupid! But I couldn't write an update better than this! And Angel, I tried by best. Sorry If I disappointed you.

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