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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys, here is my ts. I am making it a TS. The next part will be up by 4pm IST I guess. Anyway here is the part 1 on the song Teri Aankhon Ke Siva Duniya Mein Rakha Kya Hai.

Song link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZcS-Cx_yIwc

Teri Aankhon Ke Siva Duniya Mein Rakha Kya Hai

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Thursday, Feb 6 2014

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It was another winter morning. There was dense fog everywhere- misty and cold. Everything was hazy, just like my life- confused and uncertain. I didn't know where my life was leading to. I was not that Raman, that Happy who found happiness in little things, for whom family was everything. I was Raman Kumar Bhalla, CEO of the year, the mighty RKB who had no human emotions but hatred. Another confusing morning-doing something my heart didn't accept, stopping myself from embracing my daughter whom I loved so much, to be that Happy again, to love again or to be this mighty RKB, who had everything, power, was rude, ruthless, arrogant, whose heart no one had access to, who could not be betrayed, who was not weak, who was not pitiable, who had everything but happiness and love. I sighed, because I knew no morning could bring a ray of light in my life.

The day Shagun had left me, everything was over. There was no light, only darkness and I didn't hope for light instead went deeper and deeper into darkness, because I didn't want people to pity me. No I was strong, successful and powerful. It was not that I still loved Shagun. I hated her for making my own son hate me. But, that betrayal was too much to bear.

I closed the curtains and got ready for another day in my life which had no meaning, no direction, was fast-paced, filled with files, products, stock markets, meetings, everything but happiness and love. For any on-looker it would be a perfect life, little do they know how messed up my life is.

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Thursday, Feb 13 2014

A Week Later

A ray of hope touched my face as I opened the curtains of my balcony. The weather today gave me hope, something which had died long back. It was another winter morning, but I didn't know why I felt that this day was not just some other day. The weather was not that hazy, but I was more than I ever was. All thanks to that Pagal Madrasan whom I was going to marry for the custody of my daughter. Today was my marriage. I was baffled if I should walk on that path once again which gave me nothing but betrayal, if I should open up once again, if I should love again, if if... I should be that Happy once again to someone. No, I won't walk on that path once again. This time I was firm than ever before, that I would never be the Raman I was before, the Happy I was before, who only knew to spread happiness and love.

***

Friday, 13 February 2015

A Year Later

A ray of happiness touched me as my Jhansi Ki Rani opened the curtains of our balcony. I went to her and hugged her from behind. She turned to face me and I was lost in those beautiful and enchanting eyes, those eyes which had captured me from when I saw them, which were full of love and at the same time fiery and passionate, those eyes whose happiness became the reason of happiness of my eyes.

I went closer to her ears and whispered, Happy Anniversary Jhansi Ki Rani'. She whispered in return, Happy Anniversary Ravan Kumar', tugging my hair.

Teri aankhon ke siva duniya me rakha kya hai

Ye uthe subaha chaley, ye jhukhe shaam dhale,

What else is there in the world apart from your eyes

When they look up, the morning starts, when they close, darkness prevails

She brought two cups of coffee to drink. We leaned on the balcony as we started to sip our coffee. The roads of Delhi were still damp and wet because of the heavy rains, but this time I saw the beautiful rainbow which gave me happiness instead of the darkness in my life. She was the rainbow in my life. Sure there were and will be some rains in our life, but for us I know one thing that we will always see the rainbow next day and cherish those rainbows, those mornings, those laughters and those smiles.

Suddenly I heard her screech with pain and I immediately took her hand in mine and started to suck it, easing her pain. She had hurt herself with one of the thorns of the plants. I couldn't bear even a single tear in her eyes. I took her face in my hands and removed every tear of hers with my lips.

Mera jeena mera marna inhi palkonke thaley,

Teri aankhon ke siva duniya me rakha kya hai

My life and death depends on these eyelashes

What else is there in the world apart from your eyes


She smiled and hugged me as I hugged her back.

Raman-To gift nahi poochaugi ya phir poora din in bahon mein rehne ka irada hai? [ You will not ask your gift or do you have an intention in staying in my arms the whole day?]

Ishita-poora din in bahon mein rehne se bada gift kya hai? [Is there any better gift than staying in your arms whole day]

Raman-Oye Hoye! Aaj kya puttar full-on mood mein hai? [Is my girl in full-on mode today?] She blushed.

Par Mujhe Tumhe Kahi Lejana Hai', [But, I want to take you somewhere] I said cupping her face.

Kaha?', [Where] my jagga jasoos questioned. Surprise', I said and asked her to get ready.

The drive went in silence as we kept stealing glances at each other except for the jagga jasoos in my wife questioning every now and then where we were going.

The drive was about two hours.

Ishita-Wait. Wait. This is Gulmarg right? I just smiled at her. Wow! We will have so much fun!' she squealed with joy.

We soon entered the resort. It was our own resort. I had bought about a year and an half ago. The room was spacious and luxurious with a beautiful view of the mountains. All the continental food including Chinese and Indian was available here.

We had mainly concentrated on the view of mountains, but I had never concentrated in it by heart. Today, I could see the beauty of it. I could feel it, my heart had learnt to feel it and smile at its beauty.

View from Gulmarg.JPG

Gulmarg lied in a cup-shaped valley in the Pir Panjal Range of the Himalayas. The meadows were covered with snow everywhere, it being winter. The sight was breath-taking, but not more than my madrassan who came dressed in a snow suit, a blue jacket, red gloves and black boots with a red shawl and a brown cap adorning her head. She was looking so cute.

I pulled her towards me by her waist and placed my lips on hers. It was a rough and passionate kiss which soon turned into a sweet and gentle kiss savoring the taste.

We pulled apart after sometime when our food had arrived. I had ordered Chinese, it being her favourite. We started to chat as we had food. We fought even in that, me giving her taunts and her making faces which I loved so much, which made me laugh, which made me smile. I wanted to live with her, laugh with her, smile with her, dream with her.

Palkonke galiyon me chehre bahaaron ke hasthe hue

Hai mere khabonke kya kya nagar in mein basthey hue

In those pathways of eyes are the faces of the laughter and happiness of spring

All my dreamlands are here in your eyes

Thanks for reading it. Hope you liked it. Do comment. Appreciations and criticisms are welcome.

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow pallu romantic,afraid wala update.so ishita died and she want raman to be with her .katra katra pallu updates se hamko katra.katra essliye ke u kill us with your mature content.;-);-);-);-).thanks form pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
@peace
Lovely update Pallavi di
Ishita was so filmy
but why did she ask those questions at last??
abhi tak kuch reveal nahi huva
was he imagining her or was he making out with a spirit ?
i know you're gonna again tell catch up my next update...
but continue soon
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
People,

darlingpinks has updated Part 1 of today's TS. Do check out! 😊 Her Part 2 will be up soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
@darlingpinks
hey dear,
that was a nice one...
it was so good to read...
It was so positive...

I liked their small convo in the balcony...
Good writing dear...


Part 2... do continue with it sooner..😳😳

Edited by shravsss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ darlingpinks,
story is nice and romantic also
the song has too much romantic and describe the feeling very
well it self
thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravsss

@darlingpinks

hey dear,
that was a nice one...
it was so good to read...
It was so positive...

I liked their small convo in the balcony...
Good writing dear...


Part 2... do continue with it sooner..😳😳


thanks a lot dear
glad that u liked it
will cont. soon. a bit stuck up there
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shinseen

@ darlingpinks,

story is nice and romantic also
the song has too much romantic and describe the feeling very
well it self
thanks for PM


thanks dear
i wanted to write on a mohammad rafi one so wrote this-cause i liked the lyris
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aviana

@peace brlnt updt . loved it.thnx fr d pm

glad u liked it 😊

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