D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 61

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

waiting fr next chapter

Originally posted by: Hp_TvD_mAnIc

updatee plzz

Originally posted by: dvmishra

plz update soon...loved d story line

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

<font size="2">Well, per se, the minimal feedback puts me off, but this story is quite special to me, and I shall take it on me to complete it for sure. :) Thanks for liking this one.</font>

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<font size="2">And again, you are quite there, but not there!😆</font>

Originally posted by: Hp_TvD_mAnIc

"you are quite there, but not there!" means

Originally posted by: gsk4

The most boring Swaron FF i have read. too many famous characters from tv serials. too confused storyline. I am waiting to see sharon and swayam moments till ten chapters, absolutely nothing..cannot call it a swaron ff. everybody other than sharon has a role. I know its a ff but Swayam has some basic qualities which 90% of the ff are based on because you are basing your story on a famous tv character, when that is lost everything is lost. you may have created swayam in a different way but then the magic of swaron is lost. this is what i feel.

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Waiting

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

I respect your views, and when I say criticism is welcomed, I mean it. And I am actually glad that somebody has criticised my work because it connects me more to my readers, and brings me down.

But, I just want to make one thing clear, this is not a SwaRon FF, this is a clear Dil Dosti Dance Fan Fiction, and maybe being it a mutlifandom is confusing, but you have to respect that it cannot be only based on Swayam and Sharon for that matter. I accept that grouse that people from other shows are there and it makes you lose connect, but it's imperative that you understand others have the space too.

I can try to limit the characters from other shows, but I cannot compromise with the space shared by other fellow D3 characters. I had made it clear before as well.

Anyhow, thanks for reading, and thanks for dropping your valuable view. I shall alter the way I have promised, and made clear.

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As you said this is not a swaron ff ( i am sorry on that part i mistook it) but d3 ff, This is a Fan Fiction on D3. Where is the essence of the show? We are fans of Swayam so we write ff on Swayam. but what is swayam's usp? Why do we love him? otherwise he is just a hero in any other serial, whats the difference? Where are the other d3 charcters? vicky neil simmi rinni vishaka neha amar bharat etc. Where is the story on them?Its good story, but FF on d3?