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Originally posted by: ..Isha..

Intrsting :)
update soon..:)

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Superb update...
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Superb update...

Awesome and super cute..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys!

I'm up with another part. Just a small warning that I have a very bad habit of messing up people's character, changing locations and everything. So please bear me

I stated writing this long back but I couldn't complete it .Don't know why. But anyways I'm here

Not proofread. Ignore typos

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Morning's sun rays disturbed Ishita's deep slumber. She rubbed her eyes and opened it. She found herself in a new place. That wasn't the usual way she woke up. She usually woke up with her appa coming and giving her coffee. She found no one around her. She sat upright and glanced the room and remembered the events of the previous night.

She woke up and walked out of the room into the hall. It totally looked like a new place to her. As it was dark the before night she couldn't see anything clearly. She just walked to the dining table nearby to have some water.

There she observed a paper below the bowl. It seemed like a letter. She just picked it up and read


Good morning Miss Iyer

Hope you had a good night's sleep. Just thought of not disturbing you from your sleep. So, I'm leaving this letter to you. Don't worry you are safe here.

Actually today is my first day at office. So, had to go. Be free in my home but please don't misplace or break anything. I have made up the breakfast. Don't mind but it's just toast .I actually didn't know what you would like and I think you are veg also. Please have it. Bathroom is straight and right from the dining table.

Will be back soon but please don't go wandering off here and there in this new city varna I'll not allow you back to my house.

Raman Kumar Bhalla



She kept it back and saw the toast. She had it and went straight-right. She found the bathroom. She had a shower and then roamed around his house. It had only photos of him with an old lady. She guessed it as his mom. It was afternoon she went to kitchen to find nothing. She assumed as he was new he hadn't done any shopping yet. She heard the doorbell ring.

With lot of conflicts in her brain she came to decision that she'll open the door. She opened it and found a delivery boy standing outside. He gave her a parcel; she took it and told "Who sent you?"

"Sahab sent me. He told me to hand this to you" he said this and took out a small slip of paper from his pocket and gave it to her. She went inside and opened the slip


Hello Miss.Iyer

I know my kitchen is empty. So, I am sending you food .Do have it."



Raman Kumar Bhalla

"Uff...yeh aadmi" she had the food. [Oh...This man]


She then thought of calling Mihika. She ran to her room, picked up the phone and dialed her number.

"Akka come back"

"No.Miku ghar pe kya haal hai?" [No.Miku what is happening in house?]

"Kya haal matlab. Periamma ro roke thak chuki hai " [What is happeningWhat do you mean? Periamma is tired of crying]

"Aur appa.Did he say something?"

"Nahi" [no]

"No. Poor appa maine unka dil dhukaya" [Poor appa I broke his heart]

"Preparations aise hi hai" [Preparations are like that noly]

"vaise ki vaise hi hai.?" [Same to same like that only?]

"Haa" [yes]

"Woh aaya tha...Subbu" [Did he come...Subbu]

"Haan" [yes]

"Phir" [then]

"Phir kya. Periamma ko comfort karke gaya hai ki ishu wapas aagayegi" [then what.He comforted periamma and went]

"loser. Nobody will agree to marry him except me"

"akka even you didn't agree"

"HeHe...true"

"So everything okay there"

"Yaha sab kuch set hai par waha nahi. Akka how can you stay with an unknown man" [here everything is set but how can you stay with an unknown man]

"Unknown man hai miku par he's really very good heartily, sincere gentleman type ka hai and he respects me"

Just then she hears a sound from behind. She turns to see, it's Raman. She hangs the phone and asks "Aap khab aaye?" [When did you come?]

"Jab aap meri taareef kar rahe the" [When you're were praising me]

"Taaref..." [praise]

"Haan wahi ...he's really very good heartily, sincere gentleman type ka hai and kya tha"

"Kya tha?" [What]

"Tumhi ne tho bola tha. Respect" [You only told.Respect]

"Haan bola" [yeah, I told]

"Suno tum dentist hi hona" [Listen,you're dentist only?]

"Mr.bhalla..."

"Miss.Iyer. I asked you a question for which my name isn't the answer"

"Yes. I'm a dentist"

"Sacchi me yaa Munnabhai wali dentist ho" [really or are you munnabhai dentist]

"Kuch bhi. I'm a qualified dentist mr.bhalla"

"Then it's okay. You will feel bored sitting in the house. So why don't you join any clinic here"

"Here"

"Yes.Mera ek dost hai idhar clinic chalatha hai. Join there" [Yes.One of my friend has a clinic here.Join there]

"You sure"

"I'm only sure if you're truly a dentist"

"Huh...You're unbelievable"

"I think that must be my line"

"Agar aap zyaada bolenge toh abhi aapka daanth todke fix karti hoon" [If you speak more then I'll break your teeth and fix it again]

"Baap re...I was just joking"

"Go and change. We'll leave now"

"Okay" she walked away

Fifteen minutes later, they were sitting in Raman's car and he was driving.

"Mr.Bhalla ek baat puchu" [Mr.bhalla can I ask you something?]

"Hmm"

"yeh hmmm ka kya matlab hota hai. Say yes or no." [What does hmm mean.Say yes or no]

"Yes"

"aapki family main kon kon hai" [Who all are there in your family?]

"Main aur meri maa" [Me and my mom]

"That's it"

"haan" [yes]

"Papa,bhai-behen" [father,brother-sister]

"No one. Papa road accident me"

"Oh I'm sorry"

"That's fi...fine"

He stopped his car and signed her to get out.

"Go inside and ask for Dr.Batra. Tell him I have sent you"

After about an hour ,Ishita came running out of the clinic "I got the job"

"Whoa..congrats"

"Thank you. Ab kahan ?"

" Where ever you want?"

" Anywhere"

He drove to the nearby mall.

"Hum yaha kyu aaye?" [Why did we come here?]

"I thought you ladies liked shopping"

"No. but why?"

"This means you aren't a lady or you don't like shopping"

"Mujhe shopping bahot pasand hai par paise" [I love shopping very much but money]

"Main hoon na" [I'm there know]

"You mean I have to shop with your money"

"Yup...Don't worry return it later. However you're gonna work right"

"True...chalo"

She ran inside. They roamed the whole mall entering some interesting shops

"Shall I ask you something Miss.iyer"

"why are you calling me Miss.iyer. Call me Ishita"

"Only if you call me Raman"

"Deal. I'll call you Raman and you Ishita"

"Deal. What are you doing in Haryana?"

"Actually Appa got transfer. So we are there otherwise I wouldn't have come here"

"Umm"

"bhook lagi hai" [I'm hungry]

"What"

"I'm hungry.Come let's have dinner"

"Okay"

While they are having dinner,a man approaches raman "Mr.bhalla you here"

"Yeah.just a bit of shopping"

"Oh.She is" seeing Ishita"

"My friend Ishita and Ishita he is owner of this mall"

"Oh nice to meet you"

"Same here" turned towards Raman "Please be free to ask me anything you want here."

"Sure"

"How do you know him?"

"Papa's friend hai.Arrey isne card drop kardiya...I'll keep it" [He's dad's friend.Oh he dropped his card here. I'll keep it]

After the dinner both Raman and Ishita go inside the lift. Suddenly the lift stops with a jerk.

"Aiyoo Amma...yeh kya ho gaya" [What happened?]

*pluck* the power goes. Suddenly Ishita hugs Raman tightly. He comforts her

"Kuch nahi hoga. Wait It's just power cut" [Nothing will happen. Wait it's just Power cut]

"Mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai" [I'm afraid of darkness]

"Do one thing close your eyes and take a deep breath"

"Usse power aayegi" she asked innocently [By doing that will power come?]

"Do as I say" he pulled her into a hug.

He took out the card he picked up in the restaurant and dialed that number

"Hello sir yaha ki lift bandh ho gayi hai.Please kuch kijiye" [Sir this lift has stopped. Please do something]

After about few minutes, Lift door opened. Raman gave a sigh of relief and turned towards Ishita who was still hugging him tightly closing her eyes.

"Miss.Iyer" he called softly

On seeing no response from her, he broke the hug. She pulled him closer again "No don't leave me"

"No I'm not leaving you Ishita. See everything's fine. Lift is proper. Come"

She slowly opened her eyes and looked around. He was right, everything was proper but still she was kind of afraid. She clutched Raman's shirt and walked after him. After coming out of the mall she was a bit comfortable. They drove back to their house

Raman entered the house and dropped the shopping bags on the sofa. She settled down on the nearby chair. He walked to the dining table, took a glass of water.

"Yeh aapne acha nahi kiya bhabhi ji" [You didn't do this right Bhabhi]

"Bhabhi ji?"

"Haan you're my bhabhi" [Yes you're my bhabhi]

"How?"

"You were getting married to Subramanium right?"

"Right"

"So He's my friend and brother. Iss haisiyat se aap meri bhabhi huvi na" [So he's my friend and brother and by this relation you're my sister-in-law right]

"You're subbu's friend"

"Yes"

"So then"

"Then what. What did you think I allowed you to stay in this house just because you're alone or something. I did it because se you're my bhabhi. I did it for your Subbu"

"Kya" she stood up with a horrified expression [What]

Raman phone rung. He picked up "Haan subbu bol" [Yes subbu tell]

Ishita face changed, she no longer looked tired but she was tensed.

Raman continued "Don't worry yaar.Bhabhi is here. I'll bring her tomorrow your marriage is sure to happen"

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Hope you enjoyed this part. Thank you for all the comments you have given me. Drop down your comments. Criticism and appreciation both are welcome. For pm's buddy me.

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is what I call "Kahanee mein twist"😆

Your googly bowled me totally😳... Loved the update.

But please please this time a fast update😛
Edited by _DarkLady_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sry dr 4 late. Hd clz all the day.
Coming 2 the update.
Nice update dr. Loved ishra convo. Bt what's that in end?
Do u plan 2 paired up subbu and ishita through raman? Do not tell me it is a yes.
After all this is ishra SS na?
Update sn.
Tnx 4 pm
Edited by --Rashmi--- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
Thanks For pm
Edited by ishra123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidya, loved it. Awesome update..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _DarkLady_

RESERVED...

CAN'T BELIEVE I AM SO FAST... EEEKSSS!!!!!!


Oh my!...Initially i got scared seeing such a big thing
Anyways thanks for the big reservation
You're too damn fast
Unres it the same way you res it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

Res
U know me and my signal prob. It's raining dr. Nt b able 2 comment nw. Will comment later.


Oh I get it...Hehe
Unres as soon as you get signal. Enjoy the rain also 😉

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