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PART - 30



STROM is heading towards Maan's mansion in a full pace. Maan was sitting with his laptop on a comfy sofa but not at all comfy. His thoughts that kids are a big problem not letting him to calm. He was surly restless and annoyed to. Coz of Geet's health he agreed but only condition wise not intentionlly.


Restlessnes was not only caught Maan. Geet was also a prey of it. She was roaming here and there in full pace. In every two second her eyes were moved towards the main enterance.


"Geet stop roaming like this. Doc told you not to walk in a pace and by the way tumhare aise walk karne se wo log jaldi nahi aa jayenge." He was annoyed and its clear from his words.


But Geet dont bother his talk. All she was cared about is Parth's arrival. "suniye,Dev sir ko puchhiye wo log kab tak aayenge." She asked him to call and confirm the arrival time.


"why should i? Jab aana hoga aa jayenge. Or ho sakta hai unka plan cancel ho gaya ho. May be they decided to took Parth with them." Maan seriously wished this only.


"no." she sout loud and got a furious glare. "i mean how could they? Not at all. After all its a question of Parth's future. I will call to Meera." Geet was super excited with the news that he is going to live with them,as she dont have any with whom she can spend her time. But when Meera told her,her hopes boost up. Though he coming for a very short period but it can reduce her lonliness. Geet was already start dreaming to play with him so Maan's word definitely shattering her hopes.


"i seriously wish they denied." Maan mummered in his mouth.



Geet was ready to call when a sweet voice melts in her ears. "Chachi...",Parth come inside with a full pace. Like Geet he was also very excited. "Chachi." he come and hugged her legs.


Geet turn numb. He gave many relations to her in just one word. She was amused with the gesture but also in turmoil. It was her biggest and buried desire. If she marry Maan this all came as gift to her but what about Maan. She knows even after marriage he will not change his habbits. Then what the use of this name sake relation. Maan and Geet both looked at each other. Small kid just bond them together in a relation. Both glancing in each other's eyes. There are many question but no answer. Geet cant blame fully as Maan already proposed her for marriage and she don't blamed herself also because she was right on her place.


"why you calling her chachi?" Maan asked rudely.


"coz she is my chachi,apki wife meri chachi hui na. Hai na chachi." Parth replied briskly with a confidence and to confirm he tilted his head and glance up at Geet. She only caressed his head lovingly because she had no answers to his questions.


"and who told you all this?" Maan asked hiding his frustration and ager both.


"mumma" Parth told innocently.

"what else we told him Maan?" Before Maan shout,yelled or do anything which was offensive,Dadima came and asked him,which shut his mouth. "Parth is a kid and he will not able to understand what's going on here. So better you will behave properly in front of him." dadima cautioned him in a strong manner. Now Maan had nothing but to accept all this. All things go against him one after another.


Saw,Dadima Geet rushed to her. She blessed her and took in her warmth. Geet always get motherly warmth in her embrace. "kaise hai aap dadima?" she asked having a tears in her eyes.


"i am fine beta. Aap bas apna khyal rakhiye and keep remember i always there for you." Dadima caressed and kissed on her forehead.


Meantime Dev and Meera to came inside,holding Alya. Geet went to meet her. Meera gave a side hug to her. Geet was glancing baby Alya. She kissed on her tiny hand."my baby is sleeping." she adored her and kissed one more time.

"ye to car me baithe hi so gai thi. I am worried dont know how will she react on a complete new place." Meera shared her fear with Geet.


"then leave her also with me. I will take care of both." Geet told quickly and Maan's eyes widened. One more kid. He was imagine that his whole mansion messed up.


"she is a tough nut,i told you earlier remember?" Meera hinting her that Alya is also stubborn like Maan. "if she wont found any of us near her after awakening then tsunami is come. No one can handle her on that time." Meera cautioned her.


"Parth come here son." Dev called him. "obey your chachi and and dont do any mischief here ok." Dev instruct him and he nodded with a smile. He took him in his arms and both Dev and Meera kissed him before leaving.

"we gonna miss you." Both said together and Parth kissed both one by one.

"Geet here is his daily routine and time table for school." Meera handovered small file having instuction about his needs and habbits.


"dont worry mumma i am a big boy and take care of myself." He assured that he will not trouble Geet for his needs. All smiled. Dev and Parth do hi5.

All are ready to leave now. "bye Champ." Dev said and Dadima too love Parth and they left. Vinny came and hold his all belongings. Geet already instrust him so he settled Parth's belonging in a room.


"Parth what you want to eat?" She moved to him and asked.



"nothing. I had my meal." he confirmed.


"then chocolate milk?" She gave other option and he nodded his head in yes. She hold his soft hand and took him with her. Maan glared him and Part to stare him back with a sueezed forehead. She prepared milk for him and both sattled there in kitchen. She instruct vinny and get involved with Parth.


"Chachi aap baby lane wale ho?" Seeing her baby bump Parth open his question bank. Geet smiled and nodded yes. "ye baby boy hai ya girl?" he asked more.


Till now Geet never thought about this. His question put her to new imagination world. "ya right i had never thought about this." she was just engrossed in thinking. What she want a baby girl or a baby boy.


"Chachi tell me na." Parth shake her arm and asked again.


"you tell me what you want? A baby boy or a baby girl?" Geet asked to him to get his reaction. She is involving him with her,making him comfortable in this new house.


Parth think and replied briskly."baby boy."

"why so? You dont like baby girl?" Geet enquired making him open up with her.


"i like,but i already have Alya. So i want small brother for me. Chachi he is my brother na?" he was so excited and curious at the same time.


"yes he is." she confirmed and this brought a wide smile on his innocent face.


"yeyyy now i have Alya and this baby to play." he was stood up on his seat and start jumping. Geet alert and quickly moved to hold him,before he falls down. She brought him down and cleaned his moustache occured due to milk froth.


He was came here for the very first time so everything is new for him. Parth glance all thing curiously and running in whole mansion. It was like a new play ground for him. Geet is worried or can say scared for him. Maan definitely not like his presence and his body language told her already. So she make sure Parth wont touch anything which belongs to Maan,least she was aware that Parth already took the one who was a capative of Maan and now all was of him.


After running and playing he get tired,so Geet took him to their room. Geet changed his clothes first. Made him fresh n up before going to bed. She dont even realised how much time had passed. Geet laid next to him and covered properly. She caressed his head so he went to sleep easily. Soon his eye lids turn heavy and he slept holding Geet. She leaned over his head and kissed him. Geet was so engrossed in Parth,that not realised what Maan is doing and where is he.



Mid night,Maan opened the door of his room and found Parth on their bed. He annoyed more. So he bend his knee on a bed and veryfully dragged out Parth from Geet's embrace. He was all set to through him out of their room but his all plan spoiled by tigress mother. Yes Geet nearly converted into a wild tigress the moment Parth arrived. She awaked and obstruct Maan's way.


Her glaring eyes are spitting fire this time. "kaha leke ja rahe aap mere baby ko?"


"iske room me chhodne or kaha." he snap back.

Geet snatch Parth from his arms."he is not going any where." she told him strongly and moved towards bed.


Maan run and came in between. "ye kya jidd hai Geet?" he yelled.


"shhh,dont shout. Can't you speak bit normally. He will awake with your horrible sounds." Geet scold him for making loud sounds and showing him her big eyes.



Maan was in shock and anger both. Geet just screwed up the things and this Parth adds more. Now his capative not even scared of him. "he will not going to stay here in my room. Parth will stay with us ye baat hui thi. Ye nahi ki ye humare sath humare room me b rahega. Geet you are pregnant what if he kicked you?" he tried to be manupulative.



"Parth is not leaving. He get scared alone. Dev sir or Meera kabhi isko akela nahi sulate. Ya ye unke sath sota hai ya dadima k pas. How can you expect from me that i left him alone. No way. And he is not like you. Hath pair apke zada chalte hai. Apko problem hai isko apke bed pe sulane me then fine. We both can sleep in seprate room. You will enjoy sleeping here." Geet said furiously and start moving with Parth who was calmly sleeping in her arms.


Again only he was the one who become target and bowed down. "dont get hyper ok and dont show me attitute. Go and sleep." he glared her too. Maan again trying to took Parth from Geet.

But Geet hold was firm." kya kar rae ho aap?" she turned cranky now.


"ise bed pe leta raha hu or kya? If you forgot then let me remind you,Doc sply instruct you not to carry heavy weight." he snorted.


Geet stared him back making bad faces. "Itna bhari nahi hai ye. He is only 5." She reminds him but no use as Maan was disturb by his presence and its higly difficult for him to sharehis things with Parth.

Geet just moved into bed with Parth and both slept calmly leaving Maan in frustration. "Dev I kill you. Yu wapis aa ek baar bas." He had nothing left but to curse Dev. Already Dev made him super confuswd and now his son holding the charge.


PRECAP :- Maan's morning in his new environment 😉




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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update di
totally loved it!!
Maan is frustrated coz of prath's presence
The way prath called geet chachi bit emotional for geet
can't wait for the nxt part di
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear geet is scaring Mann by her angry
Mann wants to keep parth in his room to sleep but geet make Mann bow down in front of her
Mann is continually curseing dev to left parth here
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
awww parth is supper cuteee baby yaar n his bond with geet its amazing I think babaji ne maan ko line pe
laane k liye kids ko chunna h Jo kaam badde na kar sake wo kidss karege loll ...
my fvr8 scene when geet took parth n maan giving funny look
then midnight bedroom scene when he pulling him from geet n feet became sharni he became bhigi billi its damm hilarious goshh he behaving more childishly than parth yaar I guess he is actually jjj aid parth LAMO
maan annoyed with parth coz he taking all time of geet ... lol first maan doesnt want parth
in his house , now he wish to kill dev ... parth called her chachi maaneet are shocked n maan was
angry but dadima made him understood... geet so happy finally with someone she can spend her time

plss Richuuu want more moments of them together specially maan n parth ...n I love the way proceedings
the whole story it's awesome ...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Loved it
Geet waiting for parth's arrival
Parth called her as chachi which brought so many emotions in her
Meera gave his timetable to geet and asked parth to behave well
Parth found new playground inthe form KP...geet made him sleep in their bed maan didnt like that and tried to take him out but geet stopped him saying he gets scared thus he will sleep with them maan had to bow infront of her and made parth sleep on bed
This is just begining maan babu u have to go through much mire than this
Eagerly waiting for the next part




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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update I am loving man's frustration now he will realize how much geet's attention he needed!!he is frustrated not just because parth is naughty kid but also he is getting all attention of geet n maan isn't able to take it n I love the scene where both were fighting over parth sleeping :P loved the update thanks for update Richu!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
so nice maan babu abhi se pectice ho jane do kam ayegi, bacha to hone do phir dekht hai aap kya karne wale ho jitna abhi hate kar rahe ho unse duguna pyar karoge aur pal ko bhi chodne ko ji nahi chahega so ,ho jao taiyar kal le liye...
goodnight
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update... maan behaving more childishly than parth... how will parths presence will affect maan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice parth aa gya
rehne k liye poor maan
parth geet ko chahi bulane lga
nice
wating for nxt

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