Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

totaly difrnt nd intrestng cncpt
who cn thnk abt tea plants nd stuff nd i thnk ahsan s none othr dan asad wit sme misn
nd i realy wish ahsan is to b asaddd bt i dnt hm to b cheat n zoe...he mite b lost hs memory rite😉bt i knw tat u had pland al dese before v cnt do othr dan guesng 😃
waitng fr nxt

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roxon

@roxon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Hi there... I stumbled upon this FF purely by chance two days back and read all the four chapters and fell in love with story and the characters... The premises in which u've set the story and the way u've developed each characters is too good... U have not let any character be without any story to them... I especially loved the way u described ayaan's home and people in home and again's equation the asad... The best part of the story is the backdrop in which u've set the story and the mood it generates... The best part was that wen I read the 4 chapters I had rain in the background and that in itself resonated with the mood of the story especially the part where zoya was going for the movie and it was abt to rain... I've send u a buddy request, pls do accept it and do pm me wen u update the next part... Its always great to read a goood story, especially one so well written... Keep IP with the good work!!!

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roxon

@roxon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Pls do update soon...this is an amazing story and can't wait to.read the next part... Pls do update soon.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: roxon
Pls do update soon...this is an amazing story and can't wait to.read the next part... Pls do update soon.

Thank you for your impatience.

I was going to update this weekend, but something has come up so I won't be able to finish the chapter. Next weekend then...sorry.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Noe! I see you're online! I've always wanted to express here all my thoughts on the chapters you've posted...and overall progress of the story...but for some reason, I find myself at a total lost of words. I appreciate your style of writing and more than that (if that is even possible) I appreciate the content. Every little thing, however insignificant they may seem like on the larger scheme of things, like watching movies with friends, putting oil on hair, leaving an umbrella behind...

And so many more.

An then there's the major parts (or what seems to be major).

A police officer. A superior. A woman in distress. Being pregnant. Oh and. Humshakal.

Oh Noe.

I have so much to say...yet nothing much. I find solace in your words. More than I was looking for. More than I thought I needed in the first place. And now I'm wondering, what exactly was I finding solace for? See what I mean when I get all emo emo. AND GIBBERISH.

Heee!

The story is going along fantastically! I am so very intrigued with what all you've thought for this one! And what's going to happen!

Hugs!

Love you! Thanks so much for this!