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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

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beautiful update as always...
loved it...
oh the frndz n their girly talks 😊
usually its the question "what next"?
but here what next k sath sath we want to kno what happened next in the past???
plz continue soon noe



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Thank you. 😃

Well put...what next ke saath what happened in the past. You will get to know every thing - present and past and then one day present and past will merge.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + Interesting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update it was but a little bit confuse about Ahsaan n AAK but totally love it continue soon n pm me 😳



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Thank you.

Confusion will clear in due time. Have sent you PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123

Nice update Noe. Story is progressing slowly... Ahsaan is obviously a look alike of Asad, could be the same guy or another... I am not betting on anything. xD Clearly, these people are from a rural area... Otherwise, no one talks of marriage immediately after college. I wonder what happened that Zoya married Ahsaan, got pregnant in such short months... I hope it isn't some impulsive decision. :P



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Darjeeling is a small town. Large tourist population but yes a small town. But, girls getting married immediately after college is not a small town concept. It happens more often than not. Even girls in professional courses like engineering and medicine get married soon within 2-3 years of graduation. I am not saying all but many many. It is not a new thing. And, getting pregnant soon after marriage that is also not a new thing at all. Happens to thousands of newly married couples.

How and so the nikaah happened that is to be seen.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Amazing chapter.. Every chapter of this story until now just seems to thicken the plot.. I am so confused.. So many things running around my head.. Whether or not Asad is Ahsaan.. If he isn't then where is Ahsaan and why has he disappeared.. If he is then why did he do this? Does he have memory loss? Or did he actually cheat her??
As a reader I just want to say this.. I don't want Asad to have cheated Zoya.. I really mean it.. It will be heartbreaking to see that..
No matter why he did it.. Breaking an innocent girl's heart cannot be justified.. :/
I really am looking forward to what lies ahead.. The story really is so intriguing that I cannot help but keep thinking about the story all the time.. :)
Nicely done.. :p

P.S. One thing though.. The first time Zoya hugged Asad.. He felt the baby.. Agree that was after Ayaan told him but he did remember that there was a bump.. I mean if I am not wrong it feels that he is Ahsaan.. 😕



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Thank you very much.

If you guys are confused and yet interested that means I am doing my job well. Having all the questions and no answers is what keeps suspense stories interesting.

About Asad cheating/not cheating Zoya - very interesting point you have raised. I would love to share my thoughts but that will give away a lot of things. Aah...this suspense is killing me. I can't talk.😛

You will have to keep reading to know what happened. That's all I can say.

If this story stays in your mind all the time, errmm...I feel good. 😃

Hope to be the been in your bonnet for next few months. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Asad is gonna see pic of ahsaan !!!!? Ooohhh...

Y did u stoped there !!!!

Awesome updt
Loved it



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Why did I stop there? So that you guys can't wait for the next chapter.😛

Hmm...will Asad get to see the pic or like that untouched cup of coffee file will remain untouched?

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Posted: 10 years ago
Allah Miyan wts wrong with u...
ek to missing husband tha uparse wo asad miyan jesa tha... uparse murder hogaya...
so many curiosities...
vn vl b get to kno the whole truth...
noe its becoming interesting day by day...
btw i was reading the update vd thundering n lightening n heavy hailstorm in the background... wt a sound n light effect!!! 😛
i really want to kno the equations that was there between Zoya n her missing husband n nw Mrs. Hussain n Asad...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy Noe...😃

Well I just couldn't wait for the PM yet so have read the update...😳

Thank you for the impatience. Note to self - even impatience has its own virtues.

In ' Heartbeats Warfare ' it was Heart ailments and Doctors life... In ' ZPAD ' it was Matchmaking and Photography and even little Gardening also...and you also have a LAW based another ongoing story...and in this you are concentrating on TEA industry...with added Author's creative liberty...I Admire you for your simple hard work for a story...and how to present as real as accepting as possible...👏👍🏼

Thank you for appreciating the hard work that goes behind in creating a story.😳
I like to explore new subjects/topics and writing stories about them allows to do so.

Vaise 'ZPAD' didn't require much research. There adapting from a well-known book was a task in itself. With that I am not saying that I already know a lot about match-making..no...basic plot was already there in the book. But photography is something that I am familiar with.


The morning conversation regarding the new tenant was a normal occurrence...as I have mentioned earlier a singleton has to be pretty sassed and found about his knowing before giving him a room... Zoya remembered a glimpse of a stranger while watching Rain...hmm..interesting🤓 The morning scene where the aunties both Dilshaad and zarina were busy interrogating Ahsan... how discomfort that situation is...and Zoya and her friend Binu were busy with teasing and making fun about it...😈 But again...Zoya here is shown so care free and chirpy...so full off life...😊 I wonder how much future holds for her...that is going to change her into the #REAL ZOYA...😕

Glad that you liked the interrogation and the parallel phone conversation. Yes, a single tenant need to be checked thoroughly. See, there are many people who are happy-go-lucky, carefree and there whole life passes like that. But when difficulties arise, how many rise with them? Many fail. At the moment, Zoya is also failing. Okay, failing is harsh to say under the circumstances but she is certainly not strong enough to bear all that has happened to her and one can't blame her. She has had a protected childhood and youth so far. Whether she rises in face of difficulties that is to be seen. And, it is okay if she does not rise. Life doesn't always work that way.


so here you introduced Nafisa Zarina's daughter , Zarina was their in last update also...and then Binu...Zoya's friend...but one thing was noticeable...that Binnu...kept on reminding that she is definetly going to be in Kolkata...so why in present didn't Zoya met her first...rather than meeting the police..was the marriage with Ahsan a secret...or what...?...sorry can't help it...reading a intense and a story like this is making us run our minds in unknown corners...😆😳

Oh..no..no...that is good. Binu in Kolkata...I myself didn't make the connection. But remember Binu is eager to get married and her mother is even more eager to get her married. What if she married and settled somewhere else. Maybe abroad. She wanted to go abroad like Nafisadidi, naa?

Ahsan after much interrogation and a bit of sad past ...was finally given the room...😊...but he was confined to his own work...and never got familiar with anyone...but again...he suddenly got a good job in Darjeeling and then he left his job in ooty to work here as a botanist...isn't this was undercover agent do while being on a mission...disguising themselves in a unrecognizable getup with a remotely popular profession to know the groundlevel information...😕,...maybe I am reading to much into this...😳

But Darjeeling grows world-renowned tea. Someone who has studied teas with passion, won't that person grab the chance to go to the place if given? Just saying.

In the next scene when both Dilshaad and Zoya visited Ahsan in his room...Their also he had maps and all previous history records with tiles of files and journals...isn't that to deep for a botanical keeper...😕

Maybe, he is just too thorough. He is a researcher, right? A PhD. Can't ignore any aspect. Maybe, that's to it.

But one thing was clear...Zoya seems completely smitten and impressed by her new tenant...😊😳

Yes, she is.😳

In present , did Asad watched his AHSAN mode photo...or his duplicate photo...😊😆that he didn't even had the energy to have his coffee..😲

Well, it will be shocking for anyone, right?

Intriguing , engaging and well written part...👏⭐️

Thank you very much.😃
Continue soon...😃



p.s. don't take all of my comments seriously, when it comes to this story. I am often playing a devil's advocate. Need to make sure that readers are thinking from all directions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update..very interesting...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update Noe! I have been reading your works for more than a year now... Probably one and a half years.. Have read all your FFs... In this Forum. Everything was different from the other. But, this one is just out of the world...This chapter per say, was good... I couldn't find any hidden stuff.. xD But ya. Something is up here. Looks can be deceiving. What hits you in the face is that Commissioner's looks are deceiving. I don't know... Maybe even Asad is deceiving. Probably Ayaan and Com... are deceiving. I am doubting everyone here. I doubt Sinha also... But, I just feel he isn't the one we are after... Even Zoya could be in it. Maybes are just many... If I had to put my money on someone, as of now, it would be you. :P Lovely Noe!

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