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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Oh boy, creepy to some other level..
What does he actually want? And how will she survive like this when Manik himself is a ghost and no one to help her..
Interesting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

caps lock, means u r shouting at me 😔 *wiping my imaginary tears* 😉,abi tak toh manik grey hai,aage ka pata nhi 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
bhoot hu main...
m scared of this manik...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicialtie

bhoot hu main...

m scared of this manik...

me too 😔😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Hello..am glad u r continuing it...
Well u know when am reading this...I have a movie playing in my mind..
Well its not that movie..
But Nandinis condition matches...
Well u penned it very well..
That means Manik is dead ?now he is ghost...
Man !!! Hospital scene waas damn good..
Penned it very well...awesome ...
Update soon..
Love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Hello..am glad u r continuing it...

Well u know when am reading this...I have a movie playing in my mind..
Well its not that movie..
But Nandinis condition matches...
Well u penned it very well..
That means Manik is dead ?now he is ghost...
Man !!! Hospital scene waas damn good..
Penned it very well...awesome ...
Update soon..
Love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..

thanx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Omg so scray but intersitng
Cont soon
Pm the updates plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Part3
nandini fainted ,she was lyng on cold floor like a soulless body
anayta with help of servants tk her in her room n tugd her in bed,she was caressing her hair

Anayta's p.O.V
God bas ye raat jaldi se khatam ho jati,its so long,its like um seeing nandini in this situation since one year,pls ye raat jaldi se khatam ho jaye
nandu k sath itna huva,bt her face is glowing,as if kuch huva hi nahi,no wounds,no scars,no bruise
Kon hai ye jo nandu k pareshan kar raha hai? Bas meri behen salamat rahe ,i dont want anythng else
i cant see her pain
i feel disgustd on myself ,she was calling my name contineously (anayta di anayta di),but i waz not able to help her,um very bad sister
p.o.v ended

3rd person p.o.v
nandini wz walking through dense forest,her eyes wr red,fearless eyes,
she was going towards a pond,wen she reachd there ,she jerkd herself,it wz like he again freed her body,she was contineously staring at pound
p.o.v ended

Nandini's p.o.v
my body gt jerked,i came back to my senses,i dont knw wr was i?bt there was a beautiful pond,it was mesmerzng,i was staring at her
i saw a girl in it,she was jus like me,her eyes,her nose,lips,eye bros,eye lashes wr same,i thought that it was my reflection
but then i noticed that d girl was dressed up like a princess,she was looking like a princess of some state,her hair wr open,hair style was like a princess with diamond pins,she was wearing a long beautiful white gown,i was staring at her as if i wz seeing myself
i was confused?shocked? I was crying?
I asked her who r u? She replied,um nandini,Manik ki nandini
after hearing name MANIK,i start shivering and within second i was in my room on my bed

i shouted
P.o.v ended

Anayta:wat hapn nandu?

Nandini:di,di,di...i...saw...

Anayta:haan bolo (caressing her hair)

nandini:mein yaa kaisai ponchi,i was in forest near pond

Anayta:nhi baby,aap humare pass thai,u wr sleeping

Nandini:nhi di,i..i saw a girl in pond,she wz jus..like me,she said that she is nandini,mm..m..manik ki nandini

Anayta:u might hv seen some dream

nandini:nhi anayta di,i was in forest,mera trust karo

Anayta:acha baba theek hai,sojao

nandini:Anayta di,mein sach keh rahe hoon

Anayta:wiping her tear,haan haan,ab sojao like a gud girl

Morning Scene

Nandini's P.o.V
i was sleeping on my bed,i felt a strong arm around my waist,i placed my hand on that arm n start caressing it in my sleep,i was feeling good from inside
i turned my side to hug this person,but to my shock,i only fnd arm without rest of d body
i screamed out aaa
i feel like someone was over me,my mouth was like sealed n i was not able to utter a single word,only my eyes wr speaking
after strugglng a lot,i gt freed n i ran down stairs
Anayta di was waiting for me on dining table
i was angry n cryng,i scattered all d things on dinning table

Anayta di came n hugd me,but i didnt hugd her back coz i wz angry that she left me alone in room

p.o.v Ended

Anayta:um sorry,i knw y u r angry,but baby u was sleepng peacefully n u wr smiling,isliye distrb nhi kiya

Nandini P.o.V
i was smiling? Yeh wen i was caressng that hand
p.o.v ended

Nandini:di,he will kill me,mene toh kisi k sath bura nhi kiya hai

Anayta:nandu dont think this much,chal ready ho jao,we r going to airport,chachi aa rahe hai,aur tumhara mood b theek hoga

nandini:anayta di mein room mein akele nhi jaonge

Anayta:aap jao,hum b toh aa rahe hai

nandini: pls jaldi aana

Anayta: ok baba

Nandini's p.o.v
i gt ready in blue jeans n black T,i was combng my hair infront of mirror,i saw a handome guy in mirror,i was drowng in his eyes,his body was well maintand,his eyes wr intense,he was smiling
God? How can anyone b so handsome?i had never seen anyone this much handsum n good looking,
but ye hai kon?aur mere room mein aaya kaisai?
I was staring in his eyes,i dont knw wen he came close to me n wraped his arms around my waist,i closed my eyes in pleasure,it was an awsm feeling,i have never felt like this,he pulled me more close to him,my back striked with his chest
butterflies wr dancing in my stomach,current was flowing throughmy body
he nuzzld his face between my neck n collor bone,i felt week in my kness,i clutchd on his hand which wr wrappd around my waist n rested on my belly
my eyes wr closed n i was smiling like a idiot,forgetting abt that who is he ? Wr frm he came? How he appeard in my room

he wispered in my Ear "I LOVE U"

i asked him "who r u? "

he Replied "ur MANIK"

i was shocked ,i gt flashback of forest "MANIK KI NANDINI" and yesterday flash back Ur manik

i turned back to runaway,but i didnt find him anywr,i again glanced at mirror n he wz there still holding me
i screamed out" Anayta diii"
i ranaway from my room n fell from stair case,after that i dont knw anything
p.o.v ended

Anayta:nandu utho ab

nandini:di?mein theek hun?

Anayta:haan,Kyu?

Nandini:di mein toh gir gyi thi na stairs se?

Anayta:no baby,u was sleeping on couch

he Wishpered in her eAr "MEIN TUMHE KUCH HONE KAISE DETA"
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Scarey but lovely updated!!!
It was awesome!!!
Loved it!!!
Continue Soon!!!

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