RHYTHMES OF LOVE (CHAPTER 16 ON PG 29)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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K guys i knw i hv an on-goin ff but still iss dil ka kya karu bahot samjhaya but mana hi nhi SO M BACK WITH ANODR PLOT FOR MY SECOND STRY


TWO PEOPLE LUV EACH ODR MADLY DEEPLY YE TOH SAB MEIN HOTA H BUT KYA YE MADDNESS,LUV SAB SACHCHA HA????

WE ALWAYZ SEE GAL HLPS A BOY TO STAND WE ALSO SAY , "THERE IS A WOMAN BEHIND A SUCCESSFUL MAN"
BUT CAN THIS BE VICE-VERSA?????
CAN THE BOY LUV TOO SO MADLY N DEEPLY N BE THE ONE FOR THE GIRL...
JOIN RD N SANYU IN THIS MUSICAL JOURNEY (BY MUSICAL I MEAN MUSICAL 😉 )




How was d plot i'll continue only if u want
N plz do give a luk to MY ANORD STRY "LOVING AN ANGEL"



INDEX:-

CHAPTER 1-PG 3
CHAPTER 2-PG 4
PROMO-PG 5
CHAPTER 3-PG 8
CHAPTER 4-PG 9
CHAPTER 5-PG 10
CHAPTER 6&7-Pg 11
PROMO-Pg 14
CHAPTER 9-Pg 16
CHAPTER 10-Pg 18
CHAPTER 11-Pg 20
CHAPTER 12- Pg 21
CHAPTER 13= ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4352013&TPN=24&#p130612959">Pg 24
CHAPTER 14- Pg 26
CHAPTER 15- Pg 27
CHAPTER 16- Pg 29
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CrazyKupKakes thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg :D thats so damn interesting
Continue soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love such concepts where women and men are placed on the same pedestral of hierarcy.
I love concepts that are out of the box.
So, I'm looking forward to read this fiction.
Oh ji! Neeki aur puch puch... You don't even have to ask, just start away with the story!!
I'm eagerly waiting for the Prologue!!
Continue soon.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow new story
Romantic musical saga
I m so excited

Would love to read it

For sure continue it

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is really a very nice prologue and plzz continue it...I want to enjoy this musical journey
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg..I'm damn excited <3
Post it soonish
Wud luv to read it <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my god
Romantic musiCal saga
Am so excited
Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcum guys to the journey of two mad deeply in luv people.

CHAPTER-1


"DOCTOR wo...wo kaisi h?????"
D-"dekhiye abhi kuch kaha nhi ja sakta untill we treat her."

Hours rolled on and i was sitting in one of the best hospital of India. What was the difference between me and these people who are sitting here. Aaj mujhe wo dard samajh mei aa rha h jiska zikra tum karti thi. Today m able to feel the pain of sitting in a hospital. Today for the first time my heart got hitched on hearing the word hospital.

A strong hand on my shoulder broke my trance. It was parth,my friend,my brother.

"Parth wo...wo...waha ...I...I...ICU...Mein"i managed to speak between sobs before tears made their way.

"I know u dont worry she'll be fine"

"She has to be fine...she need to be fine for me"
i shouted


Soon a nurse came out of her room
N-"Plz sign the forms. So that we can proceed further"

"Howz she ...????? Kaisi hai wo?????"

N-"listen unki condition bahut serious hai. Unki body organs buri tarah se damage ho chuke h. Infact this surgery is very important ISME UNKI JAAN BHI JAA SAKTI HAI"

My heart stopped beating the moment she said ISME UNKI JAAN BHI JAA SAKTI HAI. I felt like the world stopped for me. No no nothing will happen to her. My hands started shivering as i signed the paper. I felt jaise i hadn't signed the form but allowed my Girl to go away. Sumhow Parth brought me back by shaking me.

"Will she be back after this????"

N-"we cannot say anything this is a very major surgery to be performed in two parts. Just believe in God" she sympathisized with me n went away with the papers.


I was standing outside the ICU watching my reason to breathe is breathing via a ventilater.
I was getting numb n my heart was loosing its control.



WHY DID IT HAPPENED TO MY LOVE. USNE KISI KA KYA BIGADA THA. I WAS FEELING SUFFOCATED .
ABHI KUCH DINO PEHLE HI TOH HUMARI KAHAANI SURU HUI THI.I WAS WAILING N PARTH WAS THERE STANDING BY ME N CRYING SILENT SOBS.





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update
Loved it

Starting me hi dhamaka
Sanyu is in hospital she's dying
Poor rd he's so helpless
He cnt see her going away like that


Bt what hppnd to her
Why she's in hospital


Cnt wait for next
Update soon

N next tym update longer n quicker

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its emotional one
Wat hppnd to her ?
Thanks for pm

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