RHYTHMES OF LOVE (CHAPTER 16 ON PG 29) - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay didu finally i m commenting.
First of all toh i m feeling very abd about myself.
Ask y??
Oh didu...aapne mere liye itna chappy update kiya...meri n eri di k kehne par hamare liya itna accha update likha...and mera hi comment itna late aya??
M so sorry didu...truly sorry...
Plz maaf kr do choti ko
Okay coming 2 d update,
Whew!! Kya mast tha
sanyu ka varmala pehnane ka eshtyle ws lovely!!
Kishore k liye he is dead...huhh! After all, when exactly had he treated her as a human wid feelings??
Bt she knws rd will keep her happy
back 2 d present
Uff! Randhir is so damn stupid
Divorce pprs wahi chod gaya! idiot!
Poor poor sanyu
Aankh khuli n sabse pehle wahi dekha
bechari
Bt no worries
randhir, HER randhir loves her so damn much tht nothing wl happen
Jzz w8ing 4 him 2 clr her misconceptions
Love d writing ofc!!
N ha...i didnot pester u 4 d updae jzz so tht u wud give a cliffy
Bt ab de hi di he toh update soon!!
M sure u dont want me n eri di to pester u again!
Or me to give u khunnass wale looks!
Sacchi...agar ek do din aur late krte na
I had half a mind 2 track down d story frm wattpad n post it here!!
Arey...but i luv u re diduuu
Do conti soon!!
Love,
-Sanyu
aka
-Chotti
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jollyangels

Resssy!!😛

Sry yr moi thoda busy hun!
10 mins se unressy kardungi pakka!!!

Unressy!
Tukhe pata hai na moi kitti busy thi! Ishiliye late hogayi!
Moi kaan pakding for bring late! M sorry!

Tu isey post karne dar rhi thi??
My palm n ua face!!😡

Aweeesome blosssom chappy!👏
I am proud on myself for pestering u!😃
Abse pester karti rahungi!! Lagatar!😆
Rd ka kya cool avatar!!😳 God! He made awsome entry! On bike!!

But the end...😲
Waiting 4 Sanyu's reaction!!!

Agar is bar laziness dikhayi toh yad dila kar paka dungi! Ask Pranu di kitna pakati hun mai!🤣 Or will come with a knife!!🤣

Update soonish,

Love u a lots n lots my sissy,
Erina!!!🤗

Eri didiii
Aapne VD ka joke copy ki na😆
Woh "my palm n ur face" wala😆
But hey di! We did it
we made di post d update!!
Hi 5!!! *raises hand*
ham toh "authors ko pakao" team ban gye🤣
-Sanyu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -MysticAura-

Eri didiii
Aapne VD ka joke copy ki na😆
Woh "my palm n ur face" wala😆
But hey di! We did it
we made di post d update!!
Hi 5!!! *raises hand*
ham toh "authors ko pakao" team ban gye🤣
-Sanyu


Arey tu mera credit vrindu ko mat de!
Wo joke maine banaya hai! Chat padh tu thikse!!!
Yaah we made her post! *Hifi back*!
Aare haan re "mahapakao team" bangaye hum toh!!!🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 14



















HOSPITAL , SANYUKTA'S ROOM

SANYU'S P.O.V.

I opened my eyes to find my room empty. I could feel somebody's presence n when I looked at tear drops in my hamd I knew it was my Rd sitting here. He came ! He came here... but why at that time when I was asleep. Then I felt something near my hand. It was some kind of paper. I picked up the paper with great difficulty, as my hand was numb n there was alot of pain coz of syringes.

I looked at the paper n my world stopped revolving ,DIVORCE PAPERS OF RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT N SANYUKTA RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

"MY RANDHIR WANTS TO DIVORCE ME ? IS THIS THE REASON HE CAME IN MY ROOM TO DROP THESE DIVORCE PAPER?"

I didn't knew how to react? I wanted to cry, wail, shout loudly.. My Randhir wanted to Divorce me? Is this the reason he did not came to see me even once in hospital?

I tried to look around for him but there was no trace of him.

I wanted to shout but look at God's game I cannot shout even at my own fate. I was crying n wailing loudly.

RD' P.O.V.

I came out of the hospital happy n smiling. I immedietly called Parth n asked him to come at hospital n take care of Sanyukta. He agreed. Now I had to start with my work, Mission Sanyukta.

I rushed out to my car.

NOBODY'S P.O.V.

Maya, Vd n Parth came inside Sanyukta's room to find her crying n waling. She was throwing all the things in her room here n there in anger. They got panicked looking at the sight n rushed to her aid. Maya n Vd tried to stop her from crying n asked her what happened.

Maya-"Sanyukta relax, stop crying (holding her chin n making her face up) u believe in ur maa right? So tell me what happened? Will u not tell ur Mom?"

On watching Maya, Sanyukta just hugged her again n started crying. Her face was all tear stricken.

Dr. Malhotra too entered for her check-up n looking at her condition, he too got shocked

Dr. Malhotra-"Mrs. Shekhawat relax, calm down"

'Mrs. Shekhawat' the term hit like an arrow in her heart. Is really Mrs. Shekhawat? Does the title truely belongs to her anymore? All this thoughts were making her cry even harder.

Suddenly Vd's eyes fell om the divorce papers thrown on the ground. He picked them up, n now he knew the reason of his daughter's sadness. He cursed Rd silently for doing such a stupidness of leaving back the paper in Sanyukta's room.

Vd-"Sanyukta relax. N stop crying I know u r crying because of this paper right?" He showed the divorce material to her. She nodded silently.

Parth-"these papers? Oh God how can Rd be so dumb to leave them over here... I am going to kill him but before that Sanyukta stop crying. All this is fake. It was the part of our plan to make Rd come n see u nothing more. Stop crying Sanyukta"

She nodded her head in negative stafing that she don't trust him.

Maya-"ohk u don't trust Parth but u trust Rd right? So will u stop crying after Rd comes to see u n say the truth". She thought for a moment or two n then nodded in positive.

Vd-"ohk I am calling that idiot but before that Sanyu beta plz have something"

Sanyu signalled a big no.

Maya-"untill n umless Rd comes here she will not be at peace. Plz call up Rd, plz Vd for Sanyukta's sake. Call him" she pleaded.

Both Parth n Vd made way out to call Rd but he was not answering any calls.

Vd-"this Rd he will surely be murdered today by me."

Parth-"relax uncle.. lets keep calling him."


AFTER SOME TIME



DR. Gave sanyu sleeping injection n hence she was asleep. Maya silently slipped out of Sanyu's room.

Maya-"Rd?"

Parth-"he is not picking up his cell."

Vd-"if anything happened to Sanyukta na I swear I will strangle this boy to death. Idiog"

Maya-"seriously this is height of his irresponsible attitude" she too fumed in anger.

Some more time passed n now it was near about evening. Sanyukta woke up alone in room. Suddenly those flashes of past few hours came running by.

S-"so he does not want me, right? Then why am I going to survive. My reason to fight n survive is over n now its time to bid bbye to this world" She thought n looked around n found knife kept on the table near her in fruit-basket. She took it somehow n was ready to slit her hands.

She kept the knife on her wrist n was about to slit it when *T*H*A*P *T*H*A*P two slaps were placed on her cheeks n knofe was taken off.

Sanyukta kept her hand on her cheek.

She looked at Vd completly shocked.

Vd-"what were u going to do ha? What u think of urself ? U were going to commit sucide n why? Because of your damn husband... who is mentally instable n is having fits of guilt? Is that my daughter ?"

Maya hugged her, "beta we have always considered u as our daughter n kept u above Rd... we are surely gonna punish that stupid son of our but that should not make u weak enough to commit sucide. Remember Sanyu u only used to say that whenever Rd will commit a mistake u will hold him by his ears n make him come on correct path. So what happened to u now?"

Vd-"before taking such a drastic step never once did u think of us?"

Sanyukta started crying realising her mistake. Vd n Maya were busy consoling her when Paryh entered n switched on the television.

Vd, Maya were shocked to see his sudden behaviour. Before they could question him Parth signalled them towards T. V.

Meri bechainiyon ko chain mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Mere deewanepan ko sabr mil jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na aankhon se
bheega bheega pyaar beh jaata hai

Meri tanhaiyon ko noor mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Main raat-din ye duaa karun
Tere liye main jiyun marun
Chaaron pehar tujhe dekha karun
Mera jahan ye tujhpe fanaa karun

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na honthon pe tera ehsaas
Reh jaata hai

Mere har raaste ko manzil mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Berang hawayein mujhe naa jaane
De gayi sadaa kyun abhi abhi
Hai sarfaroshi ye aashiqui bhi
Jaayegi jaan meri isme kabhi

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na har lamha teri daastaan
keh jaata hai

Meri har ik tadap ko sukoon mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Sanyu was elited to listen to her love's voice after so long. Her eyes were glued at the TV screen.

Rd-"Hello.. Sat Sri Akal.. Namaskar.. Pranam.. my dear friends. First of all I want to thank u all to love me so much n support me through this difficult phase of my life. But I hapoy to announce that My Love, MY WIFE.. is now all fit n fine. Ya she has gained her conciousness back,though she has some health complications in the line but I know we will fight them with the help of ur prayers. I am here to make confessions, ya u all heard it right, THE ROCKSTAR RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT, has something to confess. You know who made RSS, THE ROCKSTAR RSS? His wife, his love,his support, his whole life SANYUKTA RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.



PRECAP:- RD'S CONFESSION N FINALLY SANDHIR MEET

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Excited for RD confession
and Sandhir meet
Pls update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
oh Randhir's stupidity nears cost the life of Sanyukta
she is inconsolable
Vd, Maya n Parth are not able to pacify her
Dr had to give sedatives to her to calm her
randhir's surprise to her is lo lovely
he confessed his love in front of whole world
Sanyu is elated
nice update
liked it
update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsme update
loved it

sanyu misunderstood everything
she's so hurt
she's broken

she loves rd like anything

awww Maya vd loves her so much even more than rd

they r so angry
sanyu was so broken then she tried to commit suicide thank god vd saved her



wow rd singing for sanyu
precap exciting
update soon
wtng
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm!!
Loved it
Sanyu misunderstood the situation
She is hurt
She tried to silt her nerves by committing suicide
Thank god vd came n saved her
Rd on TV
Rd confessing his love for sanyu
Eagerly waiting for the next update!!
Precap awsm
Looking forward😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
vrindu...
amazing update dear..

sanyu toh galat samaj baithi sab kuch

vd and maya consoling her

and wow.. RD'S confession...

i'm so happy that u updated

khushi se na describe bhi nahi karne aa raha mujhe

keep writing

update soon

RIDDHIMA

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